RHYTHMES OF LOVE (CHAPTER 16 ON PG 29) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

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First I need 2 go through all d previous chaps coz ive 4gotten d storyline.
I TOLD u 2 give a huge recap...ye ek line apko huge lagi??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowiee
Superb update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 4






Ye dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiye
Ye dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiyein
Kyun rooh meri ye sahe
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Hardum ye keh raha hoon
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai (x2)

Andheron se tha mera rishta bada
Tune hi ujaalon se waaqif kiya
Ab lauta main hoon inn andheron mein phir
Toh paaya hai khud ko begaana yahaan
Tanhaayi bhi mujhse khafaa ho gayi
Banjaron ne bhi thukra diya
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Khud par hi ik sazaa hoon
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai

Hmm.. tere jism ki woh khushbuein
Ab bhi inn saanson mein zinda hai
Mujhe ho rahi inse ghutan
Mere gale ka ye phanda hai
Aaa..

Ho.. tere choodiyon ki woh khanak
Yaadon ke kamre mein goonje hai
Sunkar isey aata hai yaad
Haathon mein mere zanjeerin hain
Tuhi aake inko nikaal zaraa
Kar mujhe yahaan se rihaa
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Ye sadaayein de rahaa hoon

Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai


N he kept his guitar on bed and started crying.

Rd's POV

"Kyu sanyu why? Why u left me? I knpw you were angry on me... But now you will have to come back because you have promised me n My Sanyu never breaks her promise."

~~FLASHBACK~~

Kaka-"beta ye sanyu betiya ne bheja hai."

Hearing this he snatched the parcel from kaka's hand and closed the room's door.

He kept it on bed and started watching it intently.

"Parcel from Sanyu but hiw is it possible??" He wondered , "Sanyu is in I.C.U. toh fir howcome can she send this parcel? Is it a prank or something? Should I open this? Ek baar open kar leta hoon tabhi I will be able to come across the truth. And if it came out as a prank then I swear I will kill this so-called Prankster.

He tore it open.

There was a beautiful box inside along with a letter.

He took the box and opened it, only to find a pendent in it.


It was a pendent of musical sign.


He took the pendent in his hand. It was a beautiful pendent of musical note.

Then he took the letter and began reading it

Letter...

Sanyu's POV

"Kaise ho? Abi tak toh ghar ka kabada kar dia hoga tumne. Shoes ek mei hoge toh socks dusre mei. When will you grow-up Randhir? Mujhe toh zid kar k bhej diya aur ab apna care nhi karoge toh how will I get well? Bolo"

Rd-"sahi kaha maine hi toh tumhe jane k liye majboor kiya tha. Na hi main tumhe jaane ko kehta,na hi tum aise position mei land karti."

"You know that we are and always will be one. Randhir our souls is attached if I get hurt its you who feel the pain right?"

Flashback

"Arre Randhir why are you crying?"

Rd-"I am not crying."

S-"acha toh has Water entered your eyes?" She giggled

Rd-"Wo its water only. Actually something is irritating my eyes isliye shayad eyes mei paani aa gya."

S-"yes yes I know what is irritating your eyes?"

Rd looked up at her,"as of now its you who is irritating me."

S-"no its bot me but my cut that is irritating you right? N this water in your eyes are your tear drops."

Rd was now looking everywhere but at her,as somewhere or other She had caught him.

Sanyu again said, "What happened to your those dynamics of 'Mard ko Dard Nahi Hota' (she said quoting the words in air)? Bolo bolo."

Now that was it for him.

Rd-"all that are crap. Yes agar ye chot mujhe lagti toh it would not have hurt me, but it was u who got the cut. And I can never see you hurt. Tumhare har zakhm(wound) ka dard(pain) mujhe hota hai. And now shut your mouth and let me concentrate." And with this he got back in bandaging her wounds.

"Rd" she again whispered.

Rd-"hmmm"

"Ek baat bolu?"

Rd-"hmmm"

"Tum kya koi baba gyani ho jo apni closed eyes se mere wounds ko bandage karoge? Ya do you have some magical powers jiske through if you bandage my left leg , tge wound of my right leg will get healed?" And she bursted into fits of laughter.

Rd shot open his eyes,which were closed as he was afraid of her scar.

Rd-"vo... main vo... ha I was doing so because tumhara kya bharosa abhi right leg mei lagaya hai baad mei left leg mei laga lo. School mei padha nhi kya Prevention Is Better Than Cure"

Hearing this Sanyu again started laughing hard.

"OMG you are so funny koi aur acha reason nhi mila tumhe?"

She cupped his face and made him look up in her eyes.
"I know you can never see me in pain. And trust me you can never hurt or give pain to me."

Rd-" I promise Sanyu I will take away all your pains." And with this the two list themaelves in a heavenly hug.

Flashback end

Rd-"but I'm sorry Sanyu this time I am unable to take away your pain. Leave away taking your pain away I'm not able to reduce it even. I am sorry Sanyu I broke my promise" and with this he started crying.

Author's note:

Love makes us strong, love makes us weak. It is on us that how we take it.

PRECAP:- LETTER CONTINUES... AKHIR SANYU NE YE LETTER LIKHA BHI HAI YA NHI? AUR AGAR LIKHA HAI TOH KYUN LIKHA HAI? KAB LIKHA HAI? N ABHI YE RANDHIR K PASS KAISE AAYA?

WHAT IF USNE YE LETTER NHI LIKHA? TOH KISNE LIKHA HAI?

DROP IN YOUR PREDICTIONS. VOTE & COMMENT.
SIGNING OFF

VRINDA,

Edited by vrinda65 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Res
Unres

Amazing update
Loved the pendant
N whose letter it is??😲

Thanks for the pm
Edited by cherrynicolem - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Awsme update
Loved it


Flashbacks r so cute
Poor rd he's so broken I cnt see him like this
He really loved him a lot
He cnt see her in pain

Ek Chotu se cut k liye he was crying
Awww hes so cute

And now he's feeling very vulnerable


That letter

I guess sanyu didn't write this
Sum one else has written it

I guess parth bcz he cnt see rd like this


Update soon
Wtng


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Update was so intense...
So pure...
Reminsing their memories of togetherness. ...
Maybe sometimes being alone also tells you that how much person closer to your heart means to you...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Sorry didu I 4got where I ressed😕
so m undressing idhar😆

UNRESS----------------------------------

Wow!!!!! Lovely update didu!!!

I literally had 2 read all the previous chapters to come to terms wid dis one. Once again, all d chaps r very nice. The recent one toh is tops.

Sanyu ka parcel?? Hmm...may be she had sent it long ago?? But from what the previous chaps r hinting, I guess She was involved in some kind o an accident...N why is randhir blaming himself??? Dat is sumthing i dunno. Hm..

Aur letter mast hain Bhai!!! aur gift bhi!!
I remember u had shown me dis pic wen u wanted pic suggestions 4 banner
Update soon my lazy beautifull bhootni! And apki "Last ppr" Ho gyi ho tho holiday pe unress kr dena...Srsly u didnt tell me last ppr ki date...wish krti thi na main?? Uhh...

And if u r free now, kindly update LAA as well...maine phir cmmnt kari h uspe, check it out

Love u a lot!

Loots n looots n lots n lotts of love

-Sanyu

-Chotti.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
superb update.
Their flashbacks are lovely
How the parcel delivered, does it send before hand or Sanyu know her fate and requested some one to send it.
interesting story
update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
CHAPTER 5




Recap:- letter from Sanyu. Rd broke down singing.

Sanyu' letter (cont.)

"Kitne careless hi tum? Randhir try to understand I know tum gussa ho that maine tumse itni badi baat chupai... but trust me all I did for you so that you can be happy. I always want to see you happy."

Rd-"you want to see me happy na??? Toh please come back to me. I promise I will never shout on you. Promise. Just come back Sanyu..." he wailed.

Letter:
"Rd now please wipe your tears away and smile. You know aaj kya date hai???? Bhul gye hoge na. I so knew it. Today is 10th September idiot! Yes 10th of september when an immensly emotional genius duffer was born.
Yes its the birthdate of my rockstar... HAPPY WALA SWEET SA BIRTHDAY TO MY ROCKSTAR!!!!!"


Shock will be an understatement fir Randhir.

Rd-"tum waha hospital bed pe hoke bhi you remembered to wish me? I love you Sanyu"

Letter:
"Chalo ab dekho there is a cake for you in the parcel."

Rd looked into the box and found the cake.

"And usme jo pendamt hai its your birthday gift. Jaldi se pehno. N ab agar gussa thanda ho gya ho janab ka toh video call pe aa jana taaki we can celebrate your bday together. I know cake toh tum hi khaoge iss bar akele but cake cut hote hue toh dekh hi sakti hoon na?"


Rd was crying profusely he was unable to believe what his Sanyu planned for him! She was away from yet she had made every possible arrangement to make his day special.

Rd-" you have again done it." He wiped his tears n stood up. He opened his cupboard,dressed up well,grabbed his car keys n ran out.

He straight away drove to the hospital.

He ran inside and entered Sanyukta's room.

Nurse-"Mr. Shekhawat what are you doing here?"

Rd-"sister plz I want to spend some time alone with Sanyu"

Nurse-"but..."

Rd-"you are my fan right?"

Nurse-"yes."

Rd-"will you give me something if i ask for?"

Nurss-"but..."

Rd-"look today is my bday n I ask you some time alone with my love. Can't you just do this much for me?" He joined his hands.

Nurse was just smiling on seeing such a vulnerable and loving side of THE ROCKSTAR RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT.

Nurse-"ok." She smiled and left from there, leaving back our Sandhir all alone in the room.


Rd got up decorated the room with balloons. He brought the cake n was lookin at Sanyu.

Flashback

"Happy bday to u, happy bday to u..." roared the hall.

"Happy bday my rockstar" and she quickly pecked his cheek.

Rd-"thnx Sanyu its you who never fails to make my bday special. I love you. My life is incomplete without you."

"Arre hum hai toh kya gum hai...?? Ye humara ashirwad hai tumhe bacha k har saal tumhara bday khaas hoga."


Flashback ends




Rd-"har saal ki tarah iss bar bhi tumne mera bday special bana diya Sanyu. Mere saath na hoke bhi tum mere pass ho mere bday wale din. N he cut the cake n made his day with his luv.



AUTHOR'S NOTE:



GUYS READ MY OTHER STORIES TOO:-

1)LOVING AN ANGEL
2)TRYST WITH LOVE
3)DANCING HEARTS
4)RHYTHMES OF LOVE
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Amzng update
Loved it

Omg sanyu loves rd so much
She planned all this for him
He's lucky to have her

I'm excited to know how sanyi end up at hospital
Rd celebrating his b'day with sanyu

Excited for next
Update soon

Keep smiling

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