RHYTHMES OF LOVE (CHAPTER 16 ON PG 29)

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Sanyukta

@Mystic_Aura

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Inna chota???

Sorry cant comment much exxcept that it is fabulous, i luved it and conti soon

Jyaada likhne jaaungi toh I'll start crying

wese bhi friday ko coming up dekhke i've been crying at the drop of a hat

love u a loot *hugs n kisses*

love

-Sanyu

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Alaukik

@Alaukik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

awesome update

loved it

Sanyu's surprise birthday cake, gifts to Randhir

lovely

even though she is hospital, she made Randhir's birthday special for him

Randhir celebrated his big day with her

their love is awesome

update soon

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ritika

@ritikaagrawal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

sanyu gifts to randhir awww😳😳😳
itna chotu update..😭😭
but absolutely amazing😉
thanks for pm

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vrinda mishra

@vrinda65

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

CHAPTER 6

Recap:- Rd opening letter from Sanyu which contains wishes for his bday. He goes to hospital n celebrates his bday in hospital with Sanyu.

Rd did not returned back home that night. He slept in Sanyu's room holding her hand. The nurse also fid not ask him to leave looking at his love for Sanyukta.

NEXT DAY(BACK IN HOME)

Rd returned to the empty house full of memories of their togetherness. He was literally crying. Suddenly he called Ramu kaka.

Rd-"kaka... kaka..."

Kaka-"ji baba"

Rd-"kaka halwa puri banao n toffess mangao."

Kaka just smiled n went away.

He too went back to his room to change. He went into washroom to relax himself. As the hot water droplets touched his body another picture from past came up.

Flashback

"RD MAKE it fast"

Rd-"uff itni bhi kya jaldi hai. N tell me where are we going."

"Chalo u will come to know"

She dragged him to the car n drove somewhere. Finally the car stopped after an hour outside a deaf n mute school.

Rd-"sanyu yaha?"

Instead of replying to his query she went inside followed by him with few boxes in his hand.

The kids came running to her with wide smile on their face. Sanyu bent down to give them all a group hug.

Now it was time for Rd to be suprised.

"Ye lo n give this to them."

Rd-"par..."

"Fast Rd"

Slowly Rd distributed chocolates n pastries among the children. N d children were having it with love n care.

"U know Rd these kids are neglected coz of their weakness n when they get attention they are happy like anything. That is why I brought u here. It always gives us a satisfactory happiness to shower others with true happiness."

Rd was busy hearing the beautiful thoughts of his lady when a girl tugged at his pants. He looked down at her, she signalled him to bend down. Rd obeyed the girl n he was awarded with a kiss on both his cheeks. It was her way to thank him.

Rd touched his cheeks n said, "u are right Sanyu it really gives me a kind of soothing happiness in giving these kids their smile."

Rd-"we will always come here."

Sanyu nodded to it.

Flashback ends

Rd went to the same Deaf n mute school distributing happiness among them n smiling.

Few days passed away but Sanyu was not improving in any case. And during these days Rd did not either touched his guitar nor sang in any concert or album. He had forgot leaving.

During these days Rd used to spend most of his time either in hospital or in the Deaf n mute school. He avoided going back to his home as it was HER memories which made him feel the void even more.

ONE DAY IN THE D&M SCHOOL

Rd was busy watching the kids studying when he received a call.

Rd-"hello"

"What? No m coming now"

"All of a sudden, I felt a bit cold. Not due to weather, but because of my nervousness and anxiety about her condition."

Rd immediately left for hospital.

In hospital

I went into the hospital and took elevator to the second floor. As I was getting closer, my fear and anguish was increasing and I started shaking a bit. I looked at the different faces in the elevator and their expressions which told their happy and sad stories. On the second floor, the elevator door opened.

I entered the Dr.'s chamber.

Dr.-" welcome Mr. Shekhawat."

Rd-"Dr. Sanyu? You said that it is something important." He was huffing coz of running.

Dr.-"plz sit Mr. Shekhawat." Rd sat down.

Dr.-"see its been 15days since tge first surgery took place but Sanyukta has stilp not started to respond to any of our treatment. Responding is neccessary. Now look at these" he showed him a report, "this tumur has now started increasing to its fullest" he showed the tumur, "we cannot operate Sanyukta unless she responds to our treatment. N now in this stage of tumur is very critical. She already has reduced her chance of surviving to only 10% and if she does not open her eyes or does not respond within 24 hours I'm sorry to say but we will loose her. The tumur in her brain n the internal injuries will cost her life."

Rd-"Dr. But there must be some way?"

Dr.-"yes we have way but when patient co-operates n responds orelse even we are helpless."

Rd stood up and slowly made his way out of Dr. Cabin.

Rd's P. O. V.

I Felt suffocated. I was trying to breathe in as much air as possible. I went near window trying to make contact with the world outside. I was alone. And the terrible shock was tearing at me in my loneliness.

Suddenly I noticed the small temple in the hospital. Saying prayer jad been my daily routine since college and, probably, today, I was going to demand its results. I went to the temple n bowed my head in worship n onlu two things were going on in my mind and heart God and my Love, my Sanyu.

No no God cannot be so cruel. He has already called my Mom and Dad, now he cannot call my Sanyu. I was too small at that time to do anything but today I am big enough n I won't let him win this time. I WON'T.

Rd's P. O.V. Ends

He wore a very determined look n decided no matter what he us not going to give up.

PRECAP:- WILL RD BE ABLE TO SAVE SANYU? IF YES THEN HOW? DROP UR OPINIONS. THE MORE OPENIONS THE FASTER UPDATE :) SO NOW KEEP THINKING WILL SANYU DIE? OR WILL SHE RESPOND FOR ANOTHER SURGERY?

Edited by vrinda65 - 9 years ago

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kavya01

@kavya01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

awesome...rd's love will save sanyu 😊

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Sanyukta

@Mystic_Aura

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

FINALLY u updated!!

Well, it was truly a lovely chapter

Rd distributing toffees to the kids...I can just imagine tht happening...haye😳😳

Rd's love will save sanyu m sure

lekin yeh kya??

Itna late update kari n who bhi inna sa??
Chlo koi na

u finally fulfilled my ROL wish

now u choose

u want Camp at Jaipur or And Love saw Us Through update next??

love,

-Sanyu

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Mind blowing update
Loved it

Rd loves sanyu so much
He's alone without her

Sanyu was such a nice person

Omg sanyu critical
Update soon
Wtng

Keep smiling

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ritika

@ritikaagrawal

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

love has the strength to overcome every hurdles and rd's love is similar to that😃
awesome update

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vrinda mishra

@vrinda65

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

EK GALTI...

Rd entered sanyu's room to take a last look at her face.

Rd-"ohk so you hv decided so fine but I'm Randhir... Randhir Singh Shekhawat who can go to any limit to bring u back in my life" saying so ge left wiping away his tears n drove to home.

IN HOME

RD was sitting in his bedroom.

Rd-"what to do? How to bring back my love?"

He switched on television and shuffled through news channel.

He suddenly stopped at a news channel which was showing his story.

Reporter-"superstar Rd who is known for his voice is going through a tough phase now. As we reported that the Rockstar has his lady love admitted in hospital for more than 15 days in quite very serious condition. The singer has withdrawn from all his projects n concerts since then ,it is said that he has is deep in sorrow n want to stay aaay from music.

Now according to freash reports it is said that his lady love, Sanyukta, is sinking badly n could die in few hours." They show a pic of Rd and Sanyukta.

Reporter-"now the thing is will Randhir Singh Sekhawat give up his singing career in his gf's grief."

They play an interview of Rd n Sanyukta in red carpet of an award night.

Reporter-"aha so we have tge most loveable couple here tonight. I must say you both complement each other reallh well. You are looking gorgeous lady (to sanyu) n u r looking handsome like always (to Rd). I'm sure many girls n boys r gonna die today."

Rd-"thnx. But they can't do anything coz she is taken n so m I"

Sanyukta just smiled at his possessiveness as he kept his hand around her waist drawing her close to him.

Reporter too smiled, "so Mr. Shekhawat you are bagging most of the awards tonight so whats ur secret wanna share so that ur contemparies could also use it?"

Rd-"ya sure I will share but m sure my contemparies can't use it."

Reporter-"why so?"

Rd-"coz my secret is my love Sanyukta. I get an energy from her which brings the cwrtain magic in my voice. If Sanyu is not there then I'm sure I will not be able to sing. I'm all coz of this lady."

Reporter-"aha so much love... what you wanna say Miss Sanyukta on so much love."

S-"Rd has been the reason to live for me. His love always fills energy in me. His voice, his songs is like a magical spell that brings me back to life , my happinness. No matter how angry I am but his voice is enough to melt me. N he misuses this weakness of mine." She glared at him n shared a laugh with the reporter.

Rd's head shot up listening to these words.

Rd-"yes... yes... how Sanyu how can you do this. U always give a simple solution to my problems. Now see you only got upset with me n was going away now u only gave me a way to bring u back. Now see what I do." He smirked. He picked up his guitar n ran to his car n drove towards hospital.

IN HOSPITAL:

Rd entered Sanyu's room.

Rd-"Dr."

Dr-"Mr. Rd I guess she has very less time."

Rd-"not at all Dr. She is gonna be back." He started moving towards her bed, "so amor now that u are angry at me its time to pacify ur anger n bring u back."

FLASHBACK:

Rd-"Sanyu you have done enough of your man-mani now its my turn n now u are going to USA for treatment n thats final."

S-"but rd... its just matter of few days..." but she was cut by Rd in middle.

Rd-"exactly its just matter of few days n I can handle myself. I'm not a kid dammit whk cannot go without u." He banged a nearby vase n it was down into pieces.

S-"Rd..." she ran upto him.

Rd-"I don't need ur this fake care if u truely love me u will go."

S-"Rd I will go but only after one month. Please understand Rd I can't leave u alone."

Rd-"fine then u can't leave me right? Then I'm leaving u n u are going to USA."

S-"rd?!?!?!?" she was confused as she had never seen Rd act like this.

Rd-"yes u are going to USA away from me for few days or I am sending u away from me forever."

S-"fine Rd I'm going... U want me to go away from u then I'm going n I won't return untill U call me back. N this time I'm damn serious. Bbye Randhir Singh Shekhawat." N she took her suitcase n went out of the room wiping away her tears.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Rd-"Sanyu u only said na that u will be away from me untill I call u back. Now see how ur Rd calls u back... bole toh full-too Rockstar style." He winked at the girl on bed n picked up his guitar n started to voice his emotion which was buried in him for 15 days.

Haan ho gayi galti mujhse main jaanta hoon

Par ab bhi tujhe main apni jaan maanta hoon

Ek aakhiri mauka de mujhe

Aaj bhi main tujhe apni shaan maanta hoon

Sirf saanse hi to baaki hain

Jab teri yaad aati hai

Yaad me teri, saath ye bhi chhod jaati hai

Ghalti to sabse hoti hai

Galti mujhse bhi ho gayi

Ab maaf bhi karde mujhe

Kyu door itna ho gayi

Ek ghalti ke liye

Kyu saath chhod tu

Kyu munh mod gayi tu

Kyu be-nishaan sa

Nishaan chhod gayi tu

Haan ho gayi galti mujhse main jaanta hoon

Par ab bhi tujhe main apni jaan maanta hoon

Jaan maanta hoon...

Ek aakhiri mauka de mujhe

Aaj bhi main tujhe apni shaan maanta hoon

Shaan manta hoon...

Socha kuch pee kar tujhe bhula dunga

Par pee kar bhi yaad aayi tu

Itni si baat par chhod gayi

Jaana hi tha to aayi kyun

Jeena mera aasaan kar

Tu milke ye ehsaan kar

Yaad teri sataati hai

Ab aaja baat maan kar

Jab jab tu chali jaati hai

Aisi nami chha jati hai

Jaise gir prde ho baadal mujh par

Ek aanch dil pe aa jati hai

Jab aankhen band hoti hain

Bas tu sath hoti hai

Teri yaadon ke takiye pe

Bas raat meri soti hai

Tu kyu door hai yun mujhse

Tujhe chahta hu poore dil se

Sun le meri aarzoo

Tu hi meri jaan hai

Tu hi mera jahaan hai

Tu hi hai sab kuch mera

Adhoora tere bin dil ye mera

Tu kyu samajhti nahi

Ye dil hai sirf tera

Haan ho gayi galti mujhse main jaanta hoon

Par ab bhi tujhe main apni jaan maanta hoon

Jaan maanta hoon...

Ek aakhiri mauka de mujhe

Aaj bhi main tujhe apni shaan maanta hoon

Shaan manta hoon...

He ended the song standing near her bed.

Rd-"I'm sorry Sanyu...(crying) now plz come back. U are right I cannot manage myself without u. Ur Randhir needs u love plz come back... see I'm calling u. U promised me that u will come back only when I call u see now I'm calling u." He was crying badly.

His tear drop fell on her eyes.

PRECAP:- WILL SANYU OPEN HER EYES? WILL SHE SURVIVE? WILL LOVE WIN OVER DEATH?