RHYTHMES OF LOVE (CHAPTER 16 ON PG 29) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome promo 😊
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Sorry guys as m not able to update coz of my exams. I promise to update after tommorrow n before 10th of august. Plz bear with me as writing is impossible for me between my xms. N do wish me luck for my history exams which is due on tommorrow.


Also give ur gracious look to my other two fics ,viz., LOVING AN ANGEL & TRYST WITH LOVE... :)
Edited by vrinda65 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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no problem...exams are more important...wish u all the best...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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we can wait for update

all the best for exams
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its okay dear don't be sorry
Studies r much important

All the best

Love u
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it ok..
studies are important...😊
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RECAP:- SANYU IN HOSPITAL. RD MISSING HER N REMEMBERING HER. RD IS BLAMING HIMSELF FOR SANYU'S POSITION.





CHAPTER 4

"Rd utho na... itni der kaun sota h... get up Mr.Sleepy head... Acha toh tum aise nhi uthoge?????? I have a solution to your this badmashi... wait" n suddenly his melodious music went off. He was about to get up n see what had happened but suddenly the music of her payal returned back to his ears.
He again pretended to sleep.
"So you are not goin to get up Shekhawat? Akhri baar puch rhi hu" but there was no rply.
It was enough for her,now she decided to use her weopen and bham... the unspoken,unthought happened.

"Aaooch" Rd was on ground.

Rd-"Mujhe nind bhi tum hi dilati ho n nind s bhi tum hi utha sakti ho." He said looking at the dress in his hand.

Rd-"kitni ajeeb baat hai dur hoke bhi tum hi pass ho."

Parth too came there.

Rd-"kitni achi hai vo mere se dur reh k bhi meko sambhal rhi hai aur main uske pass hoke bhi kuch nhi kar paa rha hoon." N he started crying

P-"aisa nhi hai Rd tu bhi toh apna kaam hi kar rha hai... u r trying ur level best to bring her back."

Rd-"kya khaak best kar rha hoon. Its been 7 days... 7 days parth she is suffering,she is in pain n I'm unable to do anything." He banged his fist.

Meanwhile his cell rang,

Rd-"hello"
"Nhi m not going to perform"
"I said no" n with this he cut the call.

P-"kya hua?"

Rd-"kuch nhi ek concert k liye call tha. Kitne insensitive log hai parth , my life is in ICU n they are asking me to perform"

P-"Rd ek baat bolun... sanyu humesha tera music ko tere se zyada pyaar karti thi. Usse bilkul acha nhi lagega if u quit coz of her."

Rd-"No Parth Sanyu is my music,without Sanyu there can be no music."

P-" acha chal ye sab chod u go to home n take some rest... "

Rd-"kaunsa home Parth that is just a house, usse home toh sanyu banati thi... n m not gonna leave her n go anywhere. What if she regains her conciousness?? What if they need anything??"

P-"paglo ki tarah mat react kar... u r sounding like a majnu" he tried to make him smile but failed , " dekh randhir Sanyu humesha kehti h k u n she r one same soul. So if u give pain to urself, u will hurt her too. So stop ur this madness go to home , take some rest. N about the medical needs than I'm here I will manage everything. Go home NOW."

Rd didn't argued any further...
He quitely went n sat in the car.

~~In SANDHIR VILLA~~

The doorbell rang n kaka opened the door.

Kaka-"Randhir baba aap aa gye. Sanyukta betiya kaise h ab? Hosh aaya unhe?"

Randhir quitely entered the house

Rd-"nhi kaka abhi tak vo nhi aayi h hosh mei..." n with this he started crying n dropped in sofa.

Kaka-"baba sambhaliye apne aap ko... ache logo k sang acha hi hota h. Aur Sanyukta beti toh dil ki kitni saaf h. Aap chinta mat kariye vo jald hi thik ho jayegi."

Randhir stood up from the sofa.

Rd-"kaka main room mei jaa rha hoon. Plz abhi disturb mat kariyega."

Kaka-"par beta kuch toh kha lo."

Rd-"nhi kaka kuch khane peene ka mann nhi h. Bus akela rhna chahata hoon." Saying so he went upstairs n opened THEIR ROOM.

He made his way inside the room. There stood a big potrait of he n sanyukta together in each others arm,just above the bed.

He kept the bag he had with himself on the floor n traced his palm above sanyu's picture.

Rd POV (with her picture)

"Kaha chali gyi meko chod k kya itna bura hoon main ki sach mei chod k chali gyi? Plz vapas aa jao I promise I will not force u to go anywhere again. N akele toh kabhi nhi jaane dunga promise". He was crying hard. Then he went to washroom to freashen up.

After coming back from washroom he saw the bedsheet.

"Kya sanyu jab dkho ue bedsheet laga deti ho. Aur kitne saare toh unhe kyu nhi lagati? Unka kya achar dalna h?"

"Rd ye wali bed sheet na mujhe bahot pasand h . It makes me feel calm. Iska colour kitna soothing bhi h. Isse dkhte hi positive feelings aati h. I love it"

He remembered the bag of sanyu. He decided to open it. He picked it up from floor kept it on their bed.

At the same time Rd's househelp came there .

Rd-"kaka aap yaha?"

Kaka-"beta wo ye courier aaya hai."

Rd-"toh aap le lete yaha kyu aaye"

Kaka-"beta ye parcel Sanyu bitiya ki taraf s hai."

Rd was shocked hearing this.


Author's Note:-


Parcel from sanyu???? Kya,kab,kaise?????? To know more stay tuned.



Now guts plz LIKE & COMMENT. If I get fast likes n comments I will updates faster. 😆

Signing off till then...
Bbye love u all...😳


Edited by vrinda65 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Amazing Vrinda di👏👏
Rd reminiscing old memories and missing Sanyu😭😭

Sanyu sends a courier😲😕

Reveal the mystery soon

Love,
Asmu😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Awsme update
Loved it

Sandhir loves each other so much
Rd is dying without her
He just need her

I m excited to know how sanyu end up in this situation

Parcel me kya h
Kuch suprise from sanyu


Update soon
Wtng

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
amaizng chapter..😉
rd missing sanyu alot😭😭
awww😳😳😳
and sanyu send a letter??😕
thanks for pm

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