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Posted: 10 years ago
Just like me.
I too was nt serious about my exams.
Bt abhi toh serious hue.
There is one exam in august which deside my future. So need 2 b serious na?
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it
ishita dialogue to mihika...loved it
awesome
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it update soon its nxt part.. And thnks for pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww... she fell for him all over again. Can't wait to see what happens next😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Rashmi---

Just like me.
I too was nt serious about my exams.
Bt abhi toh serious hue.
There is one exam in august which deside my future. So need 2 b serious na?

Yes definitely u need 2 b serious.
Advance all the best for that 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you so much for your lovely comments.
Sorry for not commenting individually.
Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi guys !

Back again with part 15. I'm quite busy so, I'm not sure about long update. Hope you enjoy this part also.

Not proofread...error honge...please compromise


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Ishita will be pacing around in her room thinking about Raman. Raman goes to a coffee shop and sits there wondering what to do then. Just then he gets mihir's call

"Haan mihir bol" Raman tells

"Bhai vo auntyji-" mihir starts

"Ek kaam kar,tere ghar ke paas jo caf hai waha aaja" Raman cuts the call

Mihir comes there "Bhai "

"Come sit Mihir" Raman orders

Mihir starts "Bhai voh auntyji -"

Mihika comes running there "You guys are here"

Mihika asks "Raman kya jadoo kar diya Ishu par?"

"Kyu" mihir asks

"You know what she was asking me-" and mihika recites the whole incident.

Mihir again starts "Bhai suniye to aun-"

Just then Raman's phone rings. Raman gets excited and shows MiMi - Ishita's caller ID.He picks up the phone and puts it on speaker.

Ishita: "Raman, where are you"

Raman "One minute Ishita...Aap comfortable rahiye.Ek important call hai"

Raman tells mihika to speak .She speaks faking her voice "Ji Raman ji I'll wait"

Ishita "Raman to iski itni khatirdhari kar raha hai aur vo bhi raman ji"

Raman "You spoke something"

Ishita "Nothing. Your meeting is over"

"Almost done. You need something"

"Yes.I wanna meet you."

"Okay.Meet me in 15 near the coffee shop near Mihir's house."

"Okay" she hanged the call.

Raman was almost dancing "You both go. I want to spend some private moments with my to-be girlfriend"

"Sambhal ke.kuch panga nahi karna " mihika warned him.

MiMi left and Ishita came there.

Raman posed as though he was busy in phone. She came and touched his shoulder.

He kept the phone "I'll call you later. Hi Ishita"

"Hey. Let's sit" she pointed towards the chairs

"Sure"

She sat there fidgeting her dupatta . He asked "So"

"so"

"so.Why did you want to meet me?'

"Kya karu.boldu...nahi...pochti hoon pehle...par kaise"

"Kuch kaha tumne"

"No.Nothing.So how was it?"

"What?"

She gave him an blank expression. And told "Ghar chalo"

"But now only you came here"

"Mujhe ghar jaana hai Raman"

"Okay" he led her to his car. "Tumhari car mihir pick kar lega"

Raman stole silent glances of ishta from his driver seat.Things were getting awkward between them.Both wanted to break the silence but couln't.Finally Raman gave up.

"Looking beautiful" he complimented

She blushed beet red and replied "Thanks".Seeing her blush,Raman's confidence boosted up and somehow he again entered his earlier stage and thought of teasing her a bit.

"Aaj jo ladki aayi thi na,kitni khoobsorat thi"

"Matlab?"

"Matlab jaise ki mere liye hi bani huvi ho.Mere saare favorites uski be hai yaar"

Ishita faked a smile and tied her hairs to a bun.Raman smirked at that sight.She always did that when she was jealous of somebody.They reached Ishita's house.It started raining heavily all of sudden.

Raman continued "ladki acchi thi"

"Sacchi?" she questioned softly

Raman spoke "Haan yaar bahot acchi thi"

Ishita felt angry.She got down from the car.She was angry on Raman and that girl too.But she didn't know the reason for it .She would know it only when it existed.There was no specific reason.Was it because Raman praised that girl or because he liked her.She just stood there in rain trying to find some answers and to justify her anger.Raman got down and walked to her.

"Ishita listen"

"She stopped him "Usko tumhari zaroorat hai"

"No Ishita look"

"No raman you look.Acchi ladki hai na.Then marry her and leave me alone"

"When did I catch you to leave you?"

"I'm not joking here"

"Main bhi konsa joke maar raha hoon idhar"

"Raman you're just...You're just.Rehne do I don't wanna speak to you"

He caught her by her arms and asked "Kyu"

"Chodo mujhe Raman"

"Nahi chodunga.Tell me why"

"Not interested"

"In me or telling me"

"In both "

"But your eyes tell me that they are interested in me"

"Jhoot.What bakwas"

"Jhoot nahi sacch.You're jealous"

"I'm not"

"Tum jal rahi ho ki main kisi aur ki taareef kar raha hoon"

"Leave me raman.It's hurting"

"What ? that I'm holding you or leaving you"

"I said leave me"

"Itna gussa kyu Ishita.Itna gussa kyu"

"I'm not angry"

"You're.Bolo kyu.batao Ishita.Tell me"

She broke his grip from her arms and shouted "I Love You Raman because I Love you"

He smiled and replied "I Love You too Ishita"

She hugged him.It was raining heavily.They didn't care about it.They were so much immersed in that hug that a strong thunder separated them.Raman lifted up Ishita in his arms.

Ishita asked "Phir voh ladki"

"Kaonsi" raman asked

"Wahi jo tumse milne aayi thi"

"Koi nahi aaya tha"

"Matlab?"

"Koi ladki nahi hai Ishita.Bas ek drama tha tume apne pyaar ka izhaar karne ke liye"

"Aww" she hit in his chest and spread her arms around his shoulder.

He walked to her room and gently placed her on bed.He got on her and told huskily "I Love You Ishita"

They both moved forward to kiss.They were just inches apart.raman backed himself.He got up from her and sat down beside her.

Ishita asked "Kya Huva raman?"

Raman holds Ishita's hand tightly and says "I'm sorry Ishita I'm really sorry" leaving Ishita totally confused.

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Hope this is big enough.Drop down your valuable comments. Criticism and appreciation both are welcome.

Precap : Mihir "Bhai what did you do?"

Mihika "Raman we told you not to do this"

Raman "But I had to do it"


Part 16 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/121736914

Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Here... I am commenting..

Awesome update dear Vidya

What does Mihir want to tell Raman?? ? Yeh toh beech mn hi reh gya jii

Mihika's dialogue was so cute... What have you done to Ishita? Heheh

I enjoyed reading the teasing part...

I absolutely loved the last part.. . It touched my heart..

Raman did right as he backed off... Because telling her the truth was so important...

Wonderful imagination n dialogues

Loved it the whole..

Dekho... I did comment... Now you can't say I didn't comment... Heheheh..
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome...
continue sooon can't wait more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome awsome awsome...
but what does mihir want to tell raman?
and precap...
excited for next part...
update soon please..

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