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Posted: 10 years ago
Update???

Update?

Where its is?

Dikh nhi rha?

Kya h?

Post soon na Vidya

You know na how crazy I am about your updates

Jldi please

By tomorrow

Please
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DEEPIKAA0123

Loved it plz continue soon.

thanks 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: TamannaSethi

Update???

Update?

Where its is?

Dikh nhi rha?

Kya h?

Post soon na Vidya

You know na how crazy I am about your updates

Jldi please

By tomorrow

Please


When i read the first 5 lines,i was like "Did i again promise an update?" 😕
Oh dear i know ur craze.Will definitely write by tomorrow 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
👏 wonderful update dear. Sorry for the late comment. I was preparing for my exams. Update the next part soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuvasreejai94

👏 wonderful update dear. Sorry for the late comment. I was preparing for my exams. Update the next part soon.

Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi guys !

Back again with part 16.It's short but bear it.

Not proofread...errors honge...please adjust


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They both moved forward to kiss. They were just inches apart. Raman backed himself. He got up from her and sat down beside her.

Ishita asked "Kya Huva raman?"

Raman holds Ishita's hand tightly and says "I'm sorry Ishita I'm really sorry" leaving Ishita totally confused.

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Raman's eyes become moist. Ishita firmly holds his hand and repeats "Kya huva Raman?"

"Ishita, I'm sorry"

"Okay. You're sorry but why? Tell me Raman. If you won't how would I know?"

"Ishita.I have to tell you something"

"About what?"

"About us.I mean you and me.I have to tell you a thing and make it clear before - " he fumbled.

"What ? You have a girlfriend?"

"No" he immediately answered.

"Okay. Then are you married?"

"Of course not"

"Then what is the problem. You don't have a girlfriend and even you aren't married"

"The problem is I cheated on you"

"What? Then why did you tell those words to me back"

"Arrey not now."

"Then" she asked innocently

He recited the whole incident of what all happened between them. Ishita listened intently. After Raman completed it, Ishita left that room without a single word nor did she look at him.

Raman "Ishita-listen"

He cried a bit. Again he composed himself "Jab tak tum mujhe maaf nahi karogi na Ishita main tumse maafi maangta rahunga" He left the room.

He was about to go out of house where she ran but was stopped by MiMi.

Mihir asked "Kya huva Bhai? Ishita kyu ro rahi thi"

Mihika asked "Raman you told her something.She told me to leave her alone"

Raman "Voh...voh...andhar chalo bata tha hu"

They entered inside and Raman told them what all happened.

Mihir "Bhai what did you do?"

Mihika "Raman we told you not to do this"

Raman "But I had to do it"

Mihir "Par Bhai - "

Raman "Nahi Mihir usko sacchai pata honi chahiyeShe had to know this one day or another"

Mihika "You could have told another day raman"

Rman "No,Mihika.Tum samaj thi ho kya huva exactly.We were about to kiss,hum physical hone wale the.If I hadn't told her,it will be like I cheated her.It's like I used her not loved her"

Mihir "Bhai,it wasn't necessary"

Rman "No arguments Mihir.I know maine jo kiya sahi kiya.She needed to know the truth.That's what I did"

Mihika "You're right Raman."

Mihir "Par miku-"

Mihika "No Mihir.Raman is right.Agar yeh baat ishu ko baad me patha chalta toh usko aur bhi bura lagta "

Mihir "Ab tayyar hoja ishu ki jusse ko face karne ke liye"

Mihika "Vaise Raman how did you mangae to do it?"

Raman "Truth.It's just simple.you have to-"

Mihika "Not truth.Tum ne ishu se I Love You kaise bulvaya"

Raman "Oh Simple.Like last time - jealous karva ke"

Mihika "Oh toh isliye tumne mujhe phone ke baat karne ke liye bola caf me"

Raman "Haan.Maine bas yeh bola ki mujhe dekhne mummy ne ladki bheji hai"

Mihir "Bhai how did you know?'

Raman "What?"

Mihir "That auntyji sent a girl to see you"

Raman "What maa ne"

Mihir "Haan.Auntyji called me and told me to tell you to meet the girl"

Raman "Mujhe kyu nahi bataya"

Mihir "Auntyji ne kyu nahi bataya I don't know.Par maine bahot koshish kit hi, you didn't listen"

Raman "Toh ladki ka kya huva?"

Mihir "Chali gayi"

Raman "Mujhse mile begair chali gayi"

Mihir "Haan voh actually bhai that girl she loved someone else.Her mom forced her to meet you.She came,I met her.She told me verything.However even you loved Ishu.So,I told her not to worry and sent her"

Raman "Aur maa ko kya bola"

Mihir "I told aunty ki you didn't like the girl.She told okay."

At the same time Ishita entered. Raman stood up.She walked to them and told "Raman mujhe tumse ek baat karni hai"

They both walked out of the house

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That's it guys. I know it is short but please bear it.

Drop down your comments. Criticisms and appreciation both are welcome


Part 17 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/121789864

Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
again u finished wit anti-climax..U know hw 2 make fans wait😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
I like It...
Acha hua k raman told her everything...
looking frwrd for next update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kya bat krni h...
Suspense... Til d next updt... 😔
Have 2 wait 4 nxt updt...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww... I just loved it. waiting for the next part n thank u so much for the PM.

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