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Posted: 10 years ago
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She Had It Coming

Gul had it coming!
She had it coming!
She does not think
She does not reason
And without any rhyme or reason
She gives a whack
Wham, bham bang right across the face
So what does she expect?
If she packs a smack, slap, pop
Right on a cop
Then for sure she will be accused
Of physical abuse
She had it coming
She had it coming
She only has herself to blame
For the flick of her wrist that comes out so quick
A little bit of fore thought
A little bit of understanding
A little bit of questioning
Would have saved from this plight
Perhaps this will teach her a lesson
To just stop and listen
And not over react
To every imaginary act
That her Ayyo conjures
To tangle her hands and feet
In perennial defeat
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful poem. Enjoyed it immensely.
It certainly looks like our Gul did acreate a big "Kaand" (a scene) this time, and is headed straight to the lock up. However, don't you agree that our Ayyo-Boy is being rather complacent in his villainy, and priding himself on being familiar with every little vulnerability, and all habits of his wife? They say pride always come before a fall, and this time I will not be surprised if the tables turn on him and he is left holding the bag (of his own tricks). Besides, how can Gul make a grand entry in the wedding hall, if she is held for assaulting a policeman?

In another way, all this is rather symbolic, because Gul herself is like a cop, vigilant and monitoring everything all the time. Here she goes assaulting a policeman, but in so doing she herself is getting assaulted by Ayyos shenanigans.
Edited by aimf - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
amazing poem... 👏
you are amazing srsly!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
A brilliant write up annone...
kinda felt bad 4 Gul though her intention s different nd d result s as preplanned by Ayyo...Hope tat this circumstance makes her use d brain nd not her hand...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome describes Gulkand and Ayo characteristics so perfect.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Wonderful 👏
u created a poem with this 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Ayo trapped GUL
while
GUL trapped U
for
she knew that U can write a beautiful poem
on her😆

Never thought a thappad and a trap scene can convert into a beautiful poem...Wow !

Annone...




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