kya rey n kria bann payenge kriyansh????(part 8 updated on pg 28) - Page 15

Lovely update
Cute swayam and kria scene

Originally posted by: Usha29

Update soon

wel it wud take time

It has been a long time since you updated.Plz update soon .

Jus read old parts...

guys I guess update aab April mein he milega...

Holla peps ! I am back with the update of my one year old story...😛 hope you all remember this story...

Okay this update is dedicated to my two sweet hearts RADZ n TRISHA... Radz see the update contains more than 900 words... so I want long comments...

Recap- kria's gang's entry... and jealous ShaRey...

Part 8

In the evening kria calls swayam to discuss about IDC... when swayam asks her regarding why she did all this...

Kr- hi swayu...

Sw- hi kri... so tell why are you doing all this...???

Kr- swayu if you are thinking that m doing all this just for the sake of sympathy... then let me tell you I am doing this just ...

Swayam cuts her in between

Sw- kria wait... I'll call you...

Kr- but why...? What happened...??? Up till morning you were behind to know the reason and now you are saying talk to you later... you know what I really don't adore this type of behavior(she said all this pouting and in such cute way that swayam starts smiling and says)

Sw- kria I swear rey had given you the correct name... you are really a "BAATCUTTER"...(he air quoted the word baatcutter)

As soon as swayam omits the word "BAATCUTTER" silence prevails in the atmosphere... kria goes into her old memories... they both were feeling awkward... and didn't knew how to start their conversation again... suddenly to their rescue the door bell of swayam's house rang n he went to check it... he said to kria..

Sw- kria someone is there on the door so I'll talk to you later... n then you are going to crack all your naughty plan... Got it..(and laughs to lighten the atmosphere)

kria too smiles n says...

kr- yeah! Why not... c ya...

sw- c u in the college tomorrow... byeee...

and with this they call off their conversation n swayam moves to check whose there on the door. As soon as swayam opens the doo r he gets shocked to see jay there... he instantly asks him

sw- Jay... you here???

Jay with a wide smile replies him...

Jay- yes bro...

Sw- what the hell you are doing here... that too at this time...???

Jay- so where do you expect me to go...???

Swayam stood there in front of him with a straight face... as if asking him to elaborate... and there jay in a playful mood says...

Ja- what...???

Swayam losing his control speaks in a bit angry tone...

Sw- jay... care to explain what you just said...???

Jay- whoa...!!! Dude calm down... calm down... I'll explain you every damn thing... first just calm down... and if you don't mind may I come in...???

Swayum speaks in a apologetic manner

Sw- oh! Sorry... pls come in...

And closes the door behind him and they both reach to the living room and get settle on the couch. Then swayam asks him the reason of him being here...

Sw- now tell jay... what happened? Why are you here??

Jay- vo swayam... nothing serious... it's just that I haven't told kiri that m already here...

Sw- but why...??? You know she is so much upset... she thinks that you haven't arrived till now...

Jay- I know swayam that she is upset... neha told me everything... but it is just that I want to give her surprise... you known when she gets surprises her eyes they shine... and from the day mausi(kria's mom) died she smiles very less... she would show everyone that she is happy... but inside her heart she knows she is just pretending... so that everyone else around her thinks that she is really happy... you know swayam she potrays her real self, her true self only infront of me, you, neha, vish n varun... coz she trusts us the most... she thinks that out of all we will never leave her... we all will always with her... n all this small small gestures of us make her feel that we all love her a lot... and care for her a lot...(he smiles a bit in his emotional state while saying the last line)

Swayam to becomes emotional as he very well knows how much kria had suffered... before leaving and after returning too...

Keeping aside his emotional state he keeps his one hand on jay's shoulder and says...

Sw- don't worry jay... we will take care of her... I will never let anyone hurt her... after all she is my cute little sister and most importantly my best friend...

They both smiles remembering kria and vow's to never let anyone hurt her...

To lighten the mood swayam asks jay...

Sw- jay would you like to have something... do one thing you go and freshen up till the time I ask kaka to prepare something for you to eat...

To which jay replies...

Jay- no swayam... m already full... before coming to your place me and neha went for a date...(and winks at him)

Sw- by the way jay do you mind telling me scene between you and neha...???

Jay- if I say I will mind then will you ask...???

Sw- of course I would...

And they both end up laughing and moves to swayam's room... there jay tells swayam everything... how he met Neha and end up being together, starting their new phase of life...

Hope you all liked it... pls like and review...

P.S.- long comments...😉

Precap- KriYam convo... ShaRey getting jealous of their closeness and the whole group starting their journey to IDC campus.

such a lovely update!!!
awesome!!!!
kriyam r soo cute 😳
precap seems interesting 😃
i just love jealous rey!!!!!!!
waiting for the next one!!!
update soon!!!

Wauh... nice 1
i m gonna give small comment & won'tgonna praise much as u updated a small chappy & no kr scenes
so
update ws nice...
luv d kriyam bonding ...
nice emotional 1 swayam & jay bonding...
lol jay & neha naaa...
kriyam bonding = sharey jealousy lol...
gonna b fun
update soon... ms. Lazy bum

Lovely update dear.

kriyam bond is as usual cute one.

loved swayam n jay convo.

Wonderful.