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It started with a simple apology. She knew the nights without a patch up were sleepless... The mobile screen refused to light up with a text or call.. Complete silence always disturbed the most... The pause had to be broken..The anger needed to be sent off packing..The prelude to THEIR DAY could have a better start.

Truthful admissions with sincerity always did the job with amazing alacrity. SHE SAID,HE HEARD and then sneaked in a playful interlude... To ease the tension, to tease her into submission and inhale a deep breather to sweep away the recent clutter of problems in their life...

All the while trying to hold her to the promise- anything to make up to you...Her apprehensions of his intentions, his savoring of her innocent confusions ..No stars to stand witness, no fireflies to shine their brilliance just the old faithful car a testimony to their carefree ways...

It is beautiful to be young and in love...To cherish and relish the closeness in the back of a car seat...To ask for a rain-check with a tremble as emotions run high...Will the lines be crossed? Never if she did not consent... He pushed the wayward sleeve back in place.. He valued her trust entrusted in him..

With things sorted he said what he had said before .. lies have no place or need a space between them...

I was suddenly reminded of the rooftop conversation while trying to break-up post the courtroom drama.. Lies, deception, manipulations, scheming are a part of his life with Nyonika.. He hoped for something different with Nandini.. trust and belief in him without a shred of doubt..

What will the new day bring?Donot know...Donot want to think.Want to keep living in the moment.Will cross the bridge with MaNan when we reach it's banks...

Till then..

"Tumse hi din hota hai...
Surmaiyee shaam aati hai..
Tumse hi tumse hi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful post!! Sunshine!!👏
You have written the unspoken emotions so well. Sometimes more than words it is the silence that speaks...The silent acknowledgement of not crossing the line...though playfully was so beautifully shown...that is the trust they share...although some trivial lies are always there to weigh it down but not abandon it!! Well Nandini was naive not to share about Pandit's dinner with Manik...for the sake of Dhruv - Manik tensions...that seemed a bit loose end. When did Nandini become a messiah like Manik ?!! Wasn't she giving a "Hope" test to win over Manik's trust once again...then how did she ever think of lying? That's exactly what Manik might be wondering...It must have hurt him so bad...
Though Nandini was sincerely apologetic about it...would she share this with Manik if he didnt get to know about it?!! that question might have worried Manik more..as he is not insecure but knows Pandit's dubious intentions. Well the back seat romance was the one that made my day after all the tensions running high... it seems " I will do anything to make it up" from Nandini not only cooled tempers..but also made Manik realise how much Nandini valued him.
I am too skeptical about Manik- Pandit expose drama...and Ams making the entry...will it be easy for the tree of hope to grow or will there be a storm...to weaken the roots...or will the love and trust be invincible come what may!! Me, like you would like to cross that shaky bridge with Manan rather than getting some awful ideas!!😲🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshitap

Beautiful post!! Sunshine!!👏

You have written the unspoken emotions so well. Sometimes more than words it is the silence that speaks...The silent acknowledgement of not crossing the line...though playfully was so beautifully shown...that is the trust they share...although some trivial lies are always there to weigh it down but not abandon it!! Well Nandini was naive not to share about Pandit's dinner with Manik...for the sake of Dhruv - Manik tensions...that seemed a bit loose end. When did Nandini become a messiah like Manik ?!! Wasn't she giving a "Hope" test to win over Manik's trust once again...then how did she ever think of lying? That's exactly what Manik might be wondering...It must have hurt him so bad...
Though Nandini was sincerely apologetic about it...would she share this with Manik if he didnt get to know about it?!! that question might have worried Manik more..as he is not insecure but knows Pandit's dubious intentions. Well the back seat romance was the one that made my day after all the tensions running high... it seems " I will do anything to make it up" from Nandini not only cooled tempers..but also made Manik realise how much Nandini valued him.
I am too skeptical about Manik- Pandit expose drama...and Ams making the entry...will it be easy for the tree of hope to grow or will there be a storm...to weaken the roots...or will the love and trust be invincible come what may!! Me, like you would like to cross that shaky bridge with Manan rather than getting some awful ideas!!😲🤢

Thank you.. u deserve kudos varshita..👏 you so rightly caught on about "silence speaks"..Nandini said that to day to Manik.. You perceive the character Nandini so well😊..
Very valid points you made...👍🏼.. Keeping fingers crossed about how the Pandit's drama plays out.. He is getting bolder.. Manik was rightly so worried.. Lovely romantic moments in the class room .. what a selfie..😳.. The romance has been so awesome for the past two days..that I would like to keep my fingers crossed.. and put some nimboo mirchi to ward of buri nazar wale evil schemers...
My net was playing havoc due to bad weather.. so couldnot revert back earlier.
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