TR OS: UNEXPRESSED HIDDEN PASSIONATE LOVE

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Guys this story belongs to Bista-anzana I am posting it on behalf of her
Its a short heart touching tragic LoveStory...
( plz sry for it ) . Its all on Rey's POV.


~~~~~ UNEXPRESSED HIDDEN PASSIONATE LOVE ~~~~~

Rey's pov :

Jan 1st 2008 :-
I was returning from tution. My eyes got strike with a pair of innocent eyes of a girl with a beautiful charming face . A strange feeling got burn in my heart. I don't knw what's that.

Next Day :-
I was so surprised to see her in tution class with us.

Two Days later :-
I was on my way to school . I saw her again . But I was shock when i saw her in my / our school uniform. Finally I got to know that she was new student of my own class but to my unluck another section. Still I was happy.

I used to see her secretly all the time through window.

Times went like this only...
It became my habit to watch her for long time. It became hard for me to stay without looking her.

After a long time one day my close friend help me to introduce with her . Her name was Taani . Taani this name gave so wonderful feelings to me. It was a great day for me that i talked with her.
Time made us closer . We were together in school and tution as well. We used to spend long tym together , return home together .

Feb 14th :-
It was Valentine Day. My friends proposed their own someone special. I also wanted to porpose her but...I couln't do so. I was afraid that she would break up our friendship.


* One year later *
We cleared our school. We were together in college as well . So many times I tried to express my feelings , say that how much i love her , sag how much I like her , care for her , miss her .. I want to say her that I will not be able to live without her... But... I failed all the time.

Sep 2011:-
I went abroad for further study. We were in toycb with emails and phone calls.

Feb 2013 :-
After 2 years
Two days before The Valentine , I came back cz this year I dont want tk miss this Valentine .I dont want to loose het.
I was going to give her Red Rose, purpose her... I will say .. I LOVE YOU .

Feb 14th VALENTINE DAY :-
I called her in park . I was preparing whole night how to porpose her . Ironed dress for the 2 times ,changed the hair style more de 10 times ,checkedthe whole dress , polished the shoes , sprsyed the full bottle of perfume but I thought it's too bad and took bath again . I saw the watch for more then 50 times , Why the time is running so slow ?

Finally I reached the park two hours earlier . Four hours passed , 5 hours , 6 hours passed . She didnt came . I was standing like stupid , fool with a rose in a hand . So many couples looked at me and passed away..
I was alone...
I tried her phone it was busy.
At last I drop the Rose and turn back to go.
Suddenly "Tring Tring " my phone rang..
I receive the call...
A stranger voice ask for me " I'm speaking " I replied.
He was het father . He said me to come tor the hospital.
Immediately i ran. I reachd there , I found her in emergency room. I reached to her . she touched my hand . I hold her hand . She wanted to say something . Before she could say anything she left us , She left me.
Once again I became orphan. I kept that rose on her dead body which just belong to her.
I started moving out but I saw rose and a letter wet in her own blood. I couldnt stop my tears . I opened the letter .
She have written -- " Today Through this lettrt I want to say you that I love you... I tried a lot to say but I coulnd not . I was afraid that you would break our friendship.
I am sorry if i have hurt you but to tell you the truth It's harder for me to live without you "...

My Tears was continously falling on her letter with non stop.
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Pls do hit like and comment guys
Encourage her more

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Jasmine_ash thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Emotional os
TaaRey loved each other but scared to confess
That's really sad taani left rey
It was heart breaking os
U made my heart heavy

Beautifully written :)
Edited by Jasmine_ash - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so good
first attempt
lovely
keep writing
thanx di for pm
.-Soumya-. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was so emotional :'(
Loved it
Keep writing more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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emotional...heart touching...Loved it so much...description was really awesome...hope to see u writing more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Emotional os
Really nice!!
So sad
Keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb os
very emotional n heart touching
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was damn emotional OS ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Emotional 😭but nice😳 thanks for PM 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Emotional os but nice iwant to see taarey together write one more os with happy ending your frist os was very nice and well written and thanks for the pm

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