Is This Love? - A ZaYa Fan Fic *COMPLETED* - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Awesome Chapter!
Loved it...
Want to know how they meet further...
And why Zain is being so confusing!😕

Pls continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Zaya2

Tani amazing chp really beautifully written continue asap... Or I'll SPAM u 😆we'll meet again in the next update tab tak ke liye take care bbye

Annie


Thank you, Annie. 😃


No need to spam.
I'll cont right now. 😆

Bye dear.. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb


Miss Steele ? I don't mind having Zain Abdullah as my hero 😆
Chapter 5 : Zain ji ne hug kardiya , i am loving this continue soon !



Miss Steele ho toh hero bhi Christian Grey hai, mind that.


And I luv Jamie Dornan

I'll cont asap. Promise. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riya5666

Awesome Chapter!

Loved it...
Want to know how they meet further...
And why Zain is being so confusing!😕

Pls continue soon...



Christian Grey was confusing, Zain has to be. 😉

Thank you. They'll meet soon.
I'll continue as soon as possible. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Tell me first, how many chapters do you want in this FF to be?

I'll prefer 15. Story won't go any further.
But if you want 10 or so, tell me soon. 😃

PM me when you want. 😉


Filhal, eh rha twaada update.



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"Hey, Aaliya!" Yasmin calls out as I turn around. I'm in the middle of the most cheap pub, people surrounding me smoking, drinking, kissing or even planning on doing something. 'that' thing.

"Yasmin." I say as I go towards them.

"Hi." Ethan says as he hugs me. I turn to Jose. He seems upset.

"Hi, Ethan. What's on with Jo?"

"The usual. Breakup."

"Oh my." I turn to Jose. "I'm sorry Jose." Breakups. My subconscious stares at me over her half moon glasses, reading "The Notebook" as she glares at me with narrowed eyes. Stop glaring at me, woman!

"Nah, it's ok Aaliya. Relationships are bound to break."

"So have you guys ordered anything?"

"Nope, we were waiting for you. Tell me, what'd you like to have?"

"A beer, that's all." I mutter.

"Beer?" Yasmin says not believing "Get something more stronger, Jose."

"Shots then, Miss Khan?" He raises an eyebrow.

"Yup. Seems like a nice idea. It'll help you get over that Abdullah besides Aaliya." Yasmin says. Yasmin! What part of don't tell this to anyone do you not understand?

"Who Abdullah?"


Oh no! - Possesive Jose won't do any good.


"Just a carry on."

"Zain Abdullah." Yasmin announces proudly.

"What the heck? The Zain Abdullah?"

"Pretty much. But hey, he turned her down." Gee, thanks Yasmin! I almost forgot that in the middle of the street the most big business man, ok of the most, of the United States turned me down right in the face. And I didn't even get a chance to defend myself! Yeah, I was almost forgetting.

"How?" Ethan asks.

"It doesn't matter any longer." I say "Joe, get the shots!"

"That's my Aaliya." Yasmin says, enthusiastically.

"Just get me drunk!"






Beep beep.


Shit! Who is this calling now?



"Hello?" I say.

"Miss Haider?" Crap! Zain!

"Oh, it's you. Multimillionaire Zain Abdullah. What do you want?"

"I- Wait a sec, are you drunk Aaliya?"

"Drunk? Nope, I just had a few.." I hiccup. " Drinks."

"How else do we get drunk, Miss Haider?" He says, frustrated. "Where are you? I'll come pick you."

"No, I don't want another rejection."

"Rejection? Who rejected you?"

"Don't act, Zain. YOU did."

"I didn't reject you Aaliya. I just stopped you from doing something that you would later.. much later.. regret. I'm just saving you from all the regret you'll be facing. So just tell me your location."

"Saving me? You REJECTED me!"

"Oh for the love of God, just tell where you your are!"

"I'm not. It was pleasure to talk to you. Good-bye."

"No, don't hang up on me."

"Bye, Mr. Abdullah."







An hour passed. I was fully drunk.

"Ethan, drop me home na." Yasmin says.

"Yup. Aaliya, would you like to accompany us?"

"No, Jose will drop me. Thank you."

"Are you sure?"

"Yup. Night." I take another shot.

"Don't get too drunk Aaliya. Enough for a day. Come." Jose says. Yasmin and Ethan have already left. Ethan didn't get too much drunk so that he could drive. But I'm not sure about Jose.

"Nope." I say.

"You know, Aaliya. You always make me want more with you."


Oh no! -- What is he trying to do?


"Jose, what are you saying?"

"Oh come on Aaliya, don't act. You wanted that Abdullah guy without knowing him. You've known me for like since we were kids, your parents know me, my parents know you. You are just so damn beautiful. Let's just get lucky tonight."

"Excuse me? Stay away Jose."

"Oh come on, don't act as if you are innocent."

"Stay away, I won't repeat." I step back. Crap! Whom should I call for help? I just really wish someone would come here to rescue me. "Ow." I hear a groan. I open my eyes, realizing I had closed them.

"How did you touch her?" Zain! Oh thank god! Zain!

"We can share her, Abdullah. You don't need to act as if you care for her. I know your histories. I know what kind of guy you are like. Remember Leila? She was my sister for heaven's sake. And you.. you destroyed her. And you wanna do the same with Aaliya. I have the same intentions, Abdullah. Let's just share her."

"How dare you." He punches him in his stomach. In his face. God, this man has power! He beats him black and blue. Leila! The one from the phone call. Zain said she was a mate. But how? How on Earth is it possible? Destroyed her? Jose has a sister? God!

"Zain just stop." I beg trying to pull him by his arm.

"How dare he even say that." He continues.

"You're gonna kill him Zain! Pls, stop."

"No, I won't. How dare he come near you."

"Stop, please for me, Zain. Stop." I plead. He sighs, a ruthful Angry Zain sigh. He pushes him down on the floor. I clutch his arm as the security guards come to throw us out for beating in the pub premises. But seeing Zain, THE Zain Abdullah, they had no choice but to bow down and walk away.






I open my eyes by the sound of chirping of birds. I open them and immediately close them again. Where the hell am I? I open the lightly to see myself wearing a night gown, a white one. My hair loose. I glance around the room. This is not my room! Crap!


"You're awake." I whip my head around. He stands at the door. Holding a glass full of orange juice. I hope it's orange. I look at him! Crap! He's shirtless! He's just wearing his jeans. The ones which he was wearing last night, I hope.

"What am I doing here, Zain?"

"I couldn't afford to leave you alone, Aaliya."

"But you rejected me."

"I've told you my reason, Aaliya."

"You're hiding something from me. Who was Leila? What did you do to destroy her? Did you know she was Jose's sister? Tell me, Zain. I have the right to know."

"No, you don't." He mutters.

"Please Zain, tell me."

"Leila and I worked together, for a month. She wanted more with me. She wanted me to bring her to my house, make her meet my parents, make her a part of my life. But I.. I just told her that I can't. She threatened me that she'll tell the world that I have done wrong with her. I didn't know she'll actually do it. No, I didn't know she was Jose's sister. She knew my family well, but I didn't. I wasn't interested. Stay away from me, Aaliya. I'm not good."


"Why didn't you leave me in the pub? With Jose?"

"What the hell are you saying?" He blinks at me.

"You don't want to be with me."

"Trust me, Aaliya, I want to. It's my past I'm scared of."

"Past? Tell me Zain, please. Don't keep me in the dark."






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Took me an hour!


Now no updates till next week. Sorry guyz, have to study. 😭


Bye guyz, love you all loads.
Miss me, leave comments. 😉


I'll visit the forum once in a while. Promise. 😉


-Tani.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Res
srry last 2 chappys pe cmmnt nhi kiya.
Unres
4 chappy- E-mail convo was nicely written. Loved it.
Edited by Sobtian... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
6th chappy- superb update.
Joes ws so cheap. Angry n jallu zain. Loved it. Aliya in zain's home. Ohhh.
Continue soon.
I WILL MISS U.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Tani do awesome update
Aliya in zain's home
Continue soon
I will miss u



Riya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Nice update.
Zain abdullah to the rescue, Wow!
But it again confused me...
Zain has rejected her... But then he behaves completely different... And Leila! O my! I m so excited to know about her...

Upar se u are making us bechaari ladkiyon to wait for one week.. Tum hi batao, itne excitement ke beech kaise karu mai wait... Ek toh pehle se hi buk ka itna naam suna hai ki wait nhi hota... Tum batao mujhe... Mai kaise 1 WEEK TAK WAIT KARUUU?????


Plsss na... Update soon pls pls pls pls pls...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
nice update re
tanya right
hmm
fabulous chapter
he is totally different..
two different faces of him
continue soon
thanks for pm... ( saying to someone special )
don't consider u .. hahhaha lol
sorry

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