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Posted: 10 years ago
nice one...
now on wards full flashabcks waitig
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sush_avina

nice one...

now on wards full flashabcks waitig


Thanks...
Next parts will be of flashbacks
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: darlingpinks

Thanks
Truly loved your story
Will love to see Raman manofying JKR in typical Ravan Kumar and romantic style
Well, maybe brains work similar
According to me there are only 3 ways of them seperating:
A lie
Trust issues
because of some Kids issues
Raman going abroad
Well, because it is a breakup the first 3, no kids in story- so two are left.
I saw somewhere in the story that Ishita tried a lot to explain- because Ishu is not a lie girl
The second one is left.
That way I guessed
I know long and boring explanation but ek baar bolu tho bolna rukta nahi he
Anyways loved it
Looking forward to next part vidya
Cont. soon

Thank you.
I get you...Good explanation
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey guys !
Back with another update.I shall now be giving you frequent updates as all my exams are over.Thank you so much for your wonderful and motivative comments.Once again I didn't know that I can make people get emotional.
Thank you for making me realize that.


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Mihir and Mihika were now ready with their plan 1 which included three parts A,B and C.
Raman walked to Ishita's room where she was waiting for him from a long time for asking what he wanted to speak about. As soon as he entered she got up from her bed ,walked to him and asked "What happened Raman?"
He just nodded "Nothing"..." Let's finish this presentation "

Both were working for a long time. Raman was fed up.So,he kept the file aside and sat freely while ishita was writing report of her project. MiMi come out of the Ishita's bedroom and sees Raman sitting freely and ishita working. "Perfect timing" Both spoke together. They send a servant inside with a cup of coffee.

Servant knocks and ishita tells him to enter.He tells "Saab ke liye coffee"
"Tumhe kaise pata ki mujhe coffee chahiye" Raman questioned.
"Mihir Saab ne bataya" servant told as thought by MiMi.
He keeps the coffee and goes.Raman offers ishita and she tells no.As usual he takes out his mobile and puts a song randomly. He takes the cup in his left hand and right hand he drums on the table.He was doing it continuously despite Ishita's look.Finally when she was irritated she shouted "Stop it yaar RKB.It's irritating."
Raman stops immediately. He goes to flashback where her reaction would be the same.

*Flashback*
Ishita was sitting in college canteen and making notes.Raman comes their and asks "coffee?" She replied "no ,thanks" She is continuously working on her paper while he come and occupies the seat opposite of Hers.
He sits,takes out his mobile - plays a song,takes cup in left hand drums his right hand on table.
She was trying to concentrate on her work was disturbed but she didn't speak anything. So,he increased banging.She shouted "Stop it RKB.its irritating me"
"So? What can I do?"
"What can you do means?. Here I'm sitting and doing hard work for exams and you're doing timepass."
"Hard work kar rahi ho na to Karo.Concentrate karona waha pe"
"Tum aise bang karte rahe to main kaise concentrate karungi"
"Ab kyu padh rahi hai,ghar jaake padh"
"Mujhe aur bhi kaam hai Siva padhai ke"
"Jaise ki - Mihika KO daant na,owner KO maska maarna,shagun ke saath gossip Karna,mujhe lecture de de ke tang karna"
"Won main nahi tum karte ho"
"Accha toh main kehta hoon... Imitating ishita voice...Miku tu had waqt mihir ke ppeche re,don't help me...Aunty aaj aap bahot khoobsurat lag rahi hai... Chal shagun aur bata there love life ke baare me...Raman tum kabhi meri baat nahi sunte ho.hameshe pareshaan karte hoon hadd hai ."
"Huh?"
"Huh kya...Yeh sab mein kehta hoon."
"Hadd hai Raman.tum kitna pareshaan karte ho mujhe"
"Dekho...I'm not lying"
Raman...she closed her books and says "Meri liye bhi ek coffee"
"Servant lagta hoon? Jaa lele"
She makes cute pout and puppy face.He tells "chehra dekho.thik hai" and goes.She says "Yes!"

*End of flashback*

Both Raman and ishita gets the same flashback.Raman remembers all parts of it while ishita remembers only...
Ishita - "Raman tum jaanthe ho,meri college me tumhare jaise hi ek ladka tha.like jaise tum me an kiya vo bhi wahi karta tha."
Raman feels happy she remembered something but feels dejected "Mere jaisa nahi madrasan,main hi tha"
"You said something?" She asked.
"No,tell me about him"
She recites the same incident which Raman remembered. He asksWho was he?
She tells "That's the problem. Bande ka chehra yaad nahi aa rahi hai.Mujhe bahot baar iss bin chehre ajnabi ke baare mein sapna aaya hai.Maine miku KO bhi bataya.She told he is my sapno ka rajkumar.she names him imaginary but I know he exists somewhere."
"Toh kya tum iss binchehre ajnabi ke saath relationship me thi'
" shayad haan aur na bhi.Yaad nahi hai"
"Agar iss ajnabi me tumhe dhoka diya ho tho bhi tum isse pyaar karogi"
"Chehra ho tab pyaar karungi na.waise I think we were only friends"
"Accha" he faked a smile.we were more than friends ishita his mind spoke.

MiMi outside door were happy that ishita remembered about Raman seeing his activities.
Mihika "I should have told ishu about Raman.I told he doesn't exist"
Mihir "it's okay miku.let Ishu take her time and remember Raman.waise plan A is successful. Time for plan B ...ready"
"Ready" Mihika spoke and entered Ishita's bedroom.

She tells "Ishu,if your work is over we'll go out for shopping"
Ishita and Raman looks on to her. Ishita sees Raman.
He speaks "Freely... I'll complete it you enjoy"
Ishita asks "sure"..." Cent percent. Go"

Ishita and Mihika leave for mall.They buy some clothes and accessories for themselves.
Mihika tells "Ishu,mujhe mihir ke liye ek shirt leni hai.chalegi"
"Haan...chal"
They enter some men clothing shop and search for some shirts. Ishita sees a model wearing sky blue shirt.She immediately falls in love with it.She imagines Raman in that shirt and she buys it.
Mihika "kiske liye?"
"Kya"
"Shirt? Raman ke liye"
"Haan"
"Kya chal raha hai tum dono ke beech me "
"Nothing.simply I brought for him"
"Okay" mihika smiles.

They come home.Ishita sees Raman is still working. She goes to him and hands over the shirt."kya hai?" He asks
"Khol ke dekho"
"Shirt vo bhi blue " he asks shocked.
"Kyu you don't like blue?"
"No I love blue.how did you know that you should bring this only?"
"No I just felt like bringing blue for you so I brought.'

Raman was in tears. She remembered it. Yes...yes...he was like that.
She spoke " jao pehen ke aao"
He went and wore it and came back.
She told "just like I imagined"
He says "huh?" Nothing she replied.
She again spoke "Maine ek baar bin chehre ajnabi KO bhi blue shirt diya tha"
*Flashback*
Raman and ishita come to canteen and sat on a table.
"Woh" they spoke together
"Tumhare liye" again they spoke together
"Okay you" again together.
Both decided to keep quite. Then they kept shopping bag on table and told "for you"
They took their respective bags and looked inside keenly.Ishita had got a green salwar from Raman and Raman had got blue shirt from her. Both told "nahi"

He told "pehen ke aao"
She told "tum pehno"
"I don't want to"
"Same here"
"Why it's your favorite color"
"Yours too"
They both were fighting when mihika came there.

"Cool down.What happened"
Ishita said "ask him"
"Ask her" Raman said
They both were pointing towards each other.
Raman " why don't you tell she's your bff"
"You tell,she's your moh bola bhai's gf"
"Stop it tell yaar"
"You tell"
" you" "you" "you" "you" after many such you's mihika declared cease fire.
She took out her water bottle and spinned it saying "whom it will point they will tell me"
It pointed ishu. "No ,ask him"
"Cheater cock" Raman told
"Main?you're"
"You...cuz you're not following mihika's rules.
Mihika told " ishu ...tell me"
Ishu spoke "Raman be mere liye yeah laya hai.green dress."
Raman told "isne mere liye blue shirt laayi hai"
Mihika "what's problem in that.its your favorite colors right"
"Right but it's not his/hers" both together.

Mihika " kitne cute se ladte ho tum log.Stop fighting.Suno kal tum dono yeh dresses pehno ge and hum chharo movie jaayenge samjhe"
Both "okay ma'am "
Both again spoke together "sorry I"
Raman smiled and told "kal aa Jana yeh pehen ke.I'll be waiting"
Ishita "me too"
They hug and leave.

*End of flashback*
MiMi see it from outside and thinks their plan is working. She's slowly remembering few things. Though she does not know that ajnabi is Raman,is remembers few things about him and is relating to raman. Hope.Hope her memory comes back soon both pray.

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Buddy me for pms. That's it part 9 is done.Hope its up to your expectations. Need comments.
Both appreciation and criticism are warmly welcome.

Precap - IshRa and Mimi in movie.


Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
awww mimi cupid
fb was sweet
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome amzing update...
it becomes more interestinggg...
thnks for pm... update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow... That's sooo cool... Loved their flashback...
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Posted: 10 years ago
👏Awesome,loved it 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Terrific update.. love the way her memory is coming back, looking forward to them falling in love again!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful 😊
Loved the flashbacks 👏

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