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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Parud26

I know I've asked this before, but how did you learn to write so beautifully!? 😲 every time I read your work I am mind-blown!

Oh my! Well I am not a reader, but I did read my friends' works here, so maybe I learnt to express from them! :)

I can tell that this story is important to you. correct me if i'm wrong, but from reading this chapter I could feel pride, heart-break and pain as you were writing this. And to evoke those type of emotions without even using those words and that too in the first chapter - you are truly are a talented writer 😊👏
Yep! Extremely close to me and too heartfelt! :) Well that wasn't Chapter one, but the prologue, rather a character sketch! :) I named it Chapter one by mistake! Sorry! :O

i'm really interested to see how this story unfolds! you've brilliantly introduced us to Manik, Nandini and Dhruv. Three different people with one destination. I'm really excited to see their character development!
Yeah! They are completely different in opinions, in actions but want the same, or maybe not! With one goal in common, "To gain freedom"
eagerly waiting for your next update! 😛

Yep, examinations now so I have to pause for sometime! :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ipti!! I love your writing gurl!! ❤️ The variety you bring, mind boggling *dies*
You deserve all the praises you get 🤗 I wish I can emulate some of it in my writings too!

Love always❤️ ❤️

Your sincere fan
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishu3003

Iptisha🤗

U r an amazingg writer
This was a mindblowinggg start👍🏼
Beautifully penned down❤️
continue soonish😊


Aishu! :*
Thanks for reading!
You are a darlo! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Malika.Dua

Iptisha you are just awesome!

Oh my! Not more than you!
I'm not surprised to see another excellent story by you
You read my other works as well :O
I can really visualize every incident and situation in your story.
As I said many times, this is the a compliment I die for! :D
Your writing technique is commendable! 👏
I learnt it from all you amazing people in I-F itself! :D
Loving the concept of the story and looking forward to see what's going to happen.
thanks for sharing your talent with us!
And thanks to you for motivating me with such overwhelming support!🤗
stay blessed! 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo

Iptisha, I will murder you. Tonight. In your sleep.

What? Why? :"O *Nahi*
This is a gorgeous piece of work darling, really. I cannot... your best work yet for sure.
Isliye you will kill me? :O🤣
And it's only just started! I'm so absolutely hooked to this, and the characters seem damn interesting. The way you described Nandini; wow. She took my breath away.
Even I love Nandini a LOT! I know imagining show waali Nandu in this version is tough enough, but I tried my best to make it believable and convincing! :)
Just... I'll read this again. It's too fabulous.
Okay! You know what? You're adorbs!

Let me know when you update. And it better be soon to keep me sane.
This is a tale of tera-mera desh right? That's gonna be so much fun! :)
Will update after exams! :*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sparks-galore

Ipti!! I love your writing gurl!! ❤️ The variety you bring, mind boggling *dies*

What? No don't die! :O I am really glad to know this wasn't disappointing, as I thought I would be bad at handling such a sensitive issue! :O
You deserve all the praises you get 🤗 I wish I can emulate some of it in my writings too!
No No! You already are Uh-May-Zing! :) Honestly! :)

Love always❤️ ❤️

Your sincere fan
Not fan, but sister! :*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow...wow is all i felt as I read thru...amazing
I have a thing for history and I think this is soon gonna be my fav fic
Applauds for the thought behind it...gr8 concept and an amazing start
I love all three characters considering that all three have their own set of experiences...
Three lives experiencing totally different things yet living in the same phase
It would be gr8 to see the story from all their povs
I wouldn't expect more of manek-nandini-dhruv rather I'm expecting three different experiences of freedom struggle
Choice of location...calcutta...perfect...the divide and rule policy...it all started there
Looking forward for an amazing yet intriguing journey thru the pages of history
I think more then the concept its the way you put it caught me...love the way you write...makes the whole reading experiencing even more beautiful

The little kids words took my heart away...that was just a feeling beyond words
I really loved this one...my long comment says it all
Looking forward for further updates...
Will it be updated weekly or different schedule?
Edited by Rajeshwari_KR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a great start, I would love to read more, I have read your other stories before and its really impressive
While the story is good, I have to comment on your writing which is brilliant 👏

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