||Yeh Gulsitan Hamara|| FF - Page 4

Originally posted by: rima4ever

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: rima4ever

loved the 1st chapter

Originally posted by: dewcute

iptiii...?

Answer me honestly...

Is that really you?

uff,i literally got shocked by your pm,an another FF!!!!!!!

girl,you are really on a roll,aren't you..?

Yep Yep! :P

ok!now give me some time to recover from this shock..

give me a signal before you will give me another shock..

will eat your whole brain sooon...Beware😆

Bwahhaha! Did you read yet? :O :P :P

Originally posted by: Gudakesha

Iptisha..

Tich!🤗

I'm in love with this.

You know I love to read stories on patriotism.

Me too...All those factions! <3 They touch you deep and cut you fresh

And this contrast you are trying to show between pre-independence and post independence is truly appreciated.

And what more? I can truly visualize you every scene.

Good to know that finally I learnt how to make things less vague! :)

I have a small suggestion for you however.

Can you please make color keys for pre-independence and post-independence scenes. Merging them and separating mere by paragraphs might be confusing as the fiction progresses.

Well this won't be written in that manner. We will begin with pre-independence and end on port-independent India! (not just India, but also Bangladesh)

Thanks for the suggestion but. If I plan to merge them, I will ensure to do that!

Overall, today I have the same feeling when I first read your "Our Story". Proud and Excited.

Oh really? :o

I was a little kid back then (Even if it was merely six months back)

Hopefully I grew a bit and absorbed maturity!

God Bless You

Tich.

Originally posted by: -phenomenal-

Amazing start! Thanks for the PM.. :)
Please update soon!!

Originally posted by: not_a_creative1

Hi

Thank you so much for sharing your story. I am definitely looking forward for next chapter.

Yep! Tis is pretty close to my heart! :D

It was a slow start for me. But by the time Nandini finished her target I was hooked.

Yeah! I wanted to initiate with dilemma and stillness of a Indian who had studied abroad those days! :)

Your words bring the scene alive, make one feel as if they are present when it was happening.

That one comment which I die for! :)

You have one more fan who loves your words.👏

You're too kind!