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greeshma

@.ishqbulava.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

Yep I am! After this na jaane hum kab khol paaye I-F! :) :(

aisa kyun ? 😒

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

iptiii...?

Answer me honestly...

Is that really you?

uff,i literally got shocked by your pm,an another FF!!!!!!!

girl,you are really on a roll,aren't you..?

ok!now give me some time to recover from this shock...

give me a signal before you will give me another shock..

will eat your whole brain sooon...Beware😆

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: .ishqbulava.

aisa kyun ? 😒

Right now, lets not say anything about it! You'll know soon! :)

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Tich

@Jin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Iptisha..

I'm in love with this.

You know I love to read stories on patriotism.

And this contrast you are trying to show between pre-independence and post independence is truly appreciated.

And what more? I can truly visualize you every scene.

I have a small suggestion for you however.

Can you please make color keys for pre-independence and post-independence scenes. Merging them and separating mere by paragraphs might be confusing as the fiction progresses.

Overall, today I have the same feeling when I first read your "Our Story". Proud and Excited.

God Bless You

Tich.

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Oh god

U r totally incredible

This concept

Superb

Amazing start

Continue ASAP

Really would love to read more

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Mally

@-CrazySobtian-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Mind-blowing story!

Dude, your writing skills are too good!

Loved the new concept.

Really waiting for the story to progress. You know what I could imagine all those scenes going on as you have emphasized it so well, even the smallest detail.

I would love to read more of it. Please update it soon.

After seeing all the comments, I guess you've written more fanfics? Imma go find them now xD

Do PM me.

Btw, I'm Mally :)

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha
will read nd review soon.. :-)
exam tym

Wokay! 😳

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

so,i came again...

your story made a mark on my heart by the words"Look ma jelly"

i do wanted to laugh on it,but i couldn't laugh,but i do smiled,not because it seemed funny..

just because of this thought how different and colorful is this world to a child...

this much different that in the coagulated blood,what he can see is a jelly!!!

that one line stole my whole attention ipti,it's hard to believe that being a teenager you wrote this...

manik,nandini,dhruv

3 charecters,different shades,different emotions,yet one destination...!

i want to know their destiny...,

so i am waiting for your next update...

jiya

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Parud26

@Parud26

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

I know I've asked this before, but how did you learn to write so beautifully!? 😲 every time I read your work I am mind-blown!

I can tell that this story is important to you. correct me if i'm wrong, but from reading this chapter I could feel pride, heart-break and pain as you were writing this. And to evoke those type of emotions without even using those words and that too in the first chapter - you are truly are a talented writer 😊👏

i'm really interested to see how this story unfolds! you've brilliantly introduced us to Manik, Nandini and Dhruv. Three different people with one destination. I'm really excited to see their character development!
eagerly waiting for your next update! 😛