Poor Storyline, Poor characterization

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jayshree1942

@jayshree1942

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

So many loop holes in story line.

No proper base to any character.

Kisi bhi angle se anandi ko dekhakar nahi lagata ke uski beti kidnap ho gayi hai and usse tention hai ke being balikavadhu uski life kaisi hogi.

Height of stupidity she is happily going to get her daughter in orphanage , not a single moment she thought who come kidnapper relieved her daughter. Anandi is not smelling the intensity of kidnapping . She is relaxed.

Badi Haveli is like hotel now, people comes and stays over there to take rest.

Dadisa ki awaz toh bandh ho gayi hai, well woh hai kya and nahi kya koi farak nahi padata.

Jagya shayad MLA office mein hi reheta hai.

Ganga confused sole .

Abhi shivam raising like cattle, mannu is the only understanding person who is more sensible than jagya ganga and anandi and dadisa. Surprisingly in the same environment he is shown so understanding.

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libsrocks

@libsrocks

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

I don't blame characters for looking out of character specially Anandi

They know that their market value has been reduced, their ship is sinking an yet they are stuck in e show because they have to help new generation in becoming new leads of BV when they make an exit!

Now only job of Anandi's is to ensure her daughter is ready to carry the sinking ship called BV which cannot happen if Nandini acts so smart and wild. She needs to cry few buckets, say unncessary sorrys and got to start loving her balak var and new family to fit the role of main lead. A smart girl surviving on her tit for tat is not an ideal woman, they are called negative woman 😆

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jayshree1942

@jayshree1942

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

I don't blame characters for looking out of character specially Anandi

They know that their market value has been reduced, their ship is sinking an yet they are stuck in e show because they have to help new generation in becoming new leads of BV when they make an exit!

ya . u r right libsrocks. Indian serial mein jab tak lead roti nahi hai, tab tak public khush nahi hoti, pati ka maar khao lekin usse parmeshwar mano, uski galati ko maaf karo and usse sudharo lekin uske saath raho, ye agar aapne nahi kiya toh u r not ideal bahu.

and yes right now jagya anandi is there to establish new generation

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jayshree1942

@jayshree1942

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

But now its bugging, avika was having original innocence which this Grecy dont have rather i found her irritating

Its better if they take next leap fast. and young people joins.

Even all child actors r not so attractive.

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

See about her not being worried about her daughter It is not true She is worried about her daughter

But the whole time toh she can't cry for Nandini na Shivam bhi toh hai

Now CVs think it is time for Nandini's tears to be shed(but she never cries) and get the TRPs up like once her mother's tears did So Anandi has to cry a little less

She did think how her life must have been Her main aim after getting her daughter is to show her the life of a child and not a child bride

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Now coming to yesterday when she was going to get her daughter back True in her excitement she forgot that how can her daughter be at the orphanage because first Akhera n his family will not let thier BV go and if the entire khandaan dies somehow the samaj ke thekedaar will send the bal vidhwa to the vidhwa aashram n not the orphanage

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In her excitement Anandi was lost yesterday She was smiling at the Balika Vadhu who had kept her ghangor ka vrat; She did not tell the driver to stop honking and let the little girl pass at her own pace; once the girl has gone the car was still there kyun tab jaldi nahi ho rahi thi?

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Jagya is doing the same to Abhi what Bhairon did with him; Pyar se samjhnae ki bajay daant deta hai; Bigdail Jagya part 2 banana hai kya bete ko?

Ganga oh ma what have they done to the samajhdaar Ganga

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Dsa bolti band because she is now no longer the Hitler she used to be when Jagya n Anandi were kids

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Abhi : Jagya to strict with him so Gana is being too easy going with him; busy parents no time for him?

Shivam: To show Jagya giving him love just because he does not have a dad is stupidity; Shivam has a mom who single handedly changed the face of Jaitser She can shape her child

Abhi Jagya animosity is ok hota hai but don't take it too far

Jagya, Anandi and Ganga need to sit them down and clear things with them

Mannu he is the only samajhdaar baccha; He is doing what Jagya and Ganga should do for Abhi; He is too a child and it is not his duty to parent Abhi; Haan bada bhai hone ke naate samjhao use but har baar

Nandini In the beginning I thought her chirpy attitude is her defense mechanism but ab kuch zyaada hi ho raha hai

her palm covered laughter to watch is worse than I would feel watching her cry

Mangala is the main culprit here in Akhera's family; She for some reason in her Devi natak told them to get Kundan married

What I think she must have intended was to get herself married but Akhera n Harki thought Kundan ka dosh door karno hai usi shadi karwani chahiye

They do not believe in child marriage nahi toh unki khud ki beti ab tak yahan nahi baithi hoti; Also Akhera's sister has not been married that long 5 years tops So she was also not a BV

Akhera and Harki are doing what they are supposed to do so maers can give the message that Bal Vivah is bad