MY INNOCENT SURRENDER 2 #4 Updated Last Part on Pg 38 / 4-12-2015

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LAST PART - PG NO 38

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Posted: 9 years ago
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THIS IS THE LAST THREAD FOR THIS SS. SOON I WILL FINISH THIS JUST IN FOUR / FIVE PARTS AND NO EPILOGUE. REALLY DISAPPOINTED AND NOW I DONT WANT TO WRITE THIS BUT I AM NOT LEAVING THIS UNCOMPLETE SO WRITING BUT NOW IN SHORT
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PART - 21


GEET shifted with Maan. Though he get fussy but she know how to handle him. Geet took one nurse for her help only. She dont want unnecessary people there. She even instruct Dr. Asthana not to visit until she called him there. All entered inside. Nurse pushing his wheel chair. Its a beautiful place far away from city and noise. Geet signals her support and send her away. She hold the charge of his wheel chair and start pushing it inside.

"so this is the place you choose to kill me?" Maan taunts as usual and smirked. "nice,no one ever found me..."


"true. No one ever found you unless you want. Maan singh khurana a coward who scared, scared of ppl once he rule on. What if they saw him in such condition?" Geet said in a straight tone without glancing at him.


Maan's anger rosed and he fists her to brought her near. She leaned over him and both glance in each other's eyes. "i am not scared of any one. Did you get that." he snap quickly.


"then prove it. I brought you here,far away from the mob. Dekhte hai kitna fight kar sakte ho khade hone k liye. Or else you dont want to." Geet knows his problem is psychological more than physical. His frustration and anger made him stubborn. He stop fighting because of his arrogance.


Maan always live a life of king but when he loose his legs his ego hurt badly by seeing sympthy instead of terror. He loved seeing horrified eyes but when he saw sympathy and disgust in same eyes his ego hurt and every day his frustration rosed and he loose the will to live. Geet knows why he uttering those bitter words again and again but now she used the same to treat him. She instigate him so he could fight back. Maan jerked her.


Geet carry on the same treatment. His medicines and therapies not changed. Though he irritates her but she provoked him. Geet now playing with words with him. Lunch time but Maan denied taking his meal.


"why you dont want to eat?" she asked.

"i dont want your sympathy." he retroted.

"then who ask you to take our help? Eat at your own. Asha give him his food." she instruct the nurse.

"but dr.how can he..?" she doubted.

"Asha dont worry. He is MSK. He can do any thing. Waise b inka left hand thoda thoda kaam karta hai." She instruct and leave. Maan's anger grewing. Asha do what she said. She left him with his food.


Maan struggling as he want to prove her that he is not coward and do any thing. He used his full strength and tried to filled spoon. It need to much strength but he dont give up. Every time he took spoon spilled some drops on him. That was hot but he was adamant and dont call any one for help. Geet observing him. Now a hope of ray seems. Maan using his hand as much as he can. But she wants him to use his right hand as well. Geet was thinking how she made him to react. When he done Asha took his bowl but in this his all clothes tturn messy. He need change so Geet took him in his room. She cleaned his mouth first but this proximity disturb her as well. He was the same who runined her day and night. But she told herself everytime not to remember that past and only focus on his treatment but it wasn't easy.

Her fingers slipped down to unbutton his shirt. Her breath quicken. Maan could feel it. Geet done it quickly as much she can. Then he push it down from his shoulders. Her nerveousness clearly visible on her face. Her fingers to trembling.

"leave it. Tumse nahi hoga." Maan taunts seeing her condition.


His words hit like a slap. It was her decision than how can she show him that she still afraid of him. She inhaled sharp and glance direct into his eyes. "i am not a coward like you,who force a girl for his own pleasure. You are my patient and my job is to treat you and for that i can do anything." Geet said strongly staring in his eyes and removed his shirt too. She cleaned his chest without showing any of her emotion and made him wear new one quickly. "see i done it. Not like you." she used his words against him as a weapon and it really effects. Maan tried to raise his right hand. Geet obserevd. His fingers start moving. Positive sign. "take rest,see you in evening." Geet left him alone and Maan forcing himself.


In evng Asha brough him out in open air when a senior doc visit there to give him therapy. Afterward he discuss his condition with Geet and gave her friendly hug before leaving which oiled Maan's blood. How can someone touch his possession. He tried to get up and falls down. Geet first panicked but then she think calmly and got how to made him react. Already doc told her that he showed positive signs today and now this incident boost her more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superbbb yaar
Loved it
Maan ka treatment ka shi tarika nikala h geet ne
Geet uski ego ko hurt kr k Hi usse thik kregi
Wating for nxt

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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb part geet reverse pychology is working for maan he is showing positive sign towards his treatment
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geet got what is troubling him
she took him 2 a lonely place
n started to use his own words on him
boosting his ego
n maan has started to react
he cant c her with anyone
he is jealous
hope after getting cured he doesnt hurt geet
nice part
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wow nicegeet is taunting maan so that hewilllcuresoon andmaan is jealous when he sees doctor hugs geet i think geet usethis technique to cure maan
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It's amazing. So finally geet find out the way to treat him.she gets to know his real problem. Why was he not responding to the treatment. From now geet started to play with words which made maan angry and he tries to collect his strength and tries to move his body parts. It's only geet who can instigate her n she is getting success too. Last part was shocking. Maan got angry seeing that doctor hugging geet. In the process of standing , he fell down. What's going on in Geet's mind. Waiting for next dear.
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Fantastic Update
I was wondering at first how will Geet get Maan to show positive signs of getting well
but a person like Maan true does not need people's sympathy he needs people to treat
him with toughness and challenge him and this is exactly what Geet has done
by actually challenging him he will be forced to recover
Maan still feels that Geet is his possession and it seems if men are around Geet than the jealousy factor will also effect Maan making him wanting to move his limps so yeah thus far Geet has
an excellent plan to get him onto recovery
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Geet is doing her best..though maan will be ok physically will he able to mend her wrong... Hoping for the best

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