(new thread added)MY INNOCENT SURRENDER-2 #2 Updated P 12 on P-131 - Page 42

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update, dev left the venu finish everything with naintara .every one think he runaway from the marriage .maan married geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
wowhooo maaneet get married yeee muhhh Richu u deserve it baby...
lol finally langoor dev runway from weddings venue good very good chalo es nethle ne koi dhang k kaam kiya
go n never show ur monkey face again...
here com our maannuuu jaanuuu what a entry men I'm loving it n in this mess so maan at once
took decision and married geet amazing... the final verdict by maan now
"she is my now, and i will never leave her hand" wow what a dialoge by maan he nailed it...
if its NT trap or Maan's trap whose care maaneet get married thats it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
dev decide finisher nt matter leave the venue
all are shocked and geet uncle blamed maan
maan married geet her relatives convinced her uncle accept this marriage geet too didn't speak ,finally maan promised her uncle he take care his wife and took with him went to his car lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update
Maan married geet😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally maaneet got married.thank u dev for escaping the wedding.hope geet ll accept maan.pls continue soon.can't wait for maanet reaction after marriage
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART - 9


HER life was complete. Happy, content, everything was perfect. But today it all changed. Captive and alone with, no lover, no faith, no future. One brother ditched and other satisfied his ego. Society's rubbish talk, uncle's pride , Dev's betrayal all push her to a dig from which even her strength, can't save her from the horror of being married to a Devil. Now how will she survive with him. In whole route to KM she was only pouring tears. Her mind was blank,body stiffened and eyes turned stoned. She knew the man sitting next to her had owed her. She knew now life isn't like before with him. The man she had used to hate him become her life partner. Now she had left with no choice to bear his arrogance. Both reached to KM. She was still silent. maan dragged her out of the car and took her to their room. He locked it from inside and his furious eyes hold her.


Geet saw in those dark and intense eyes. Her heart skip beat out of fear. He took a step to her. "get change." he was authoritve in his command. Geet was stiffed. She wasn't in a state to react quickly. Maan took a ew step towards door. Before leaving he slanted back his neck to glance her. "i have no concern with your past. But now you are my wife. So better you accept this marriage." his face was hard and words sending a shiver of threaten to her. Maan clearly told his expectations from this marriage before exited the room. A beautful room having a unique style of articture and a king size bed,still not helping her to relax. She falls down on her knees and resting her head on the edge line of bed. Tears not ready to hold back. Geet was shock hearing his intentions. She compromised already and now he commands her to surrender her soul to him. How will she? She couldn't answer,couldn't ask any of the questions she so desperately wanted to ask. If it was true that Dev never love her then also not an easy for her because she loves him dearly,true from her heart. But this marriage changed every equation between these three souls. She rested her head and lost in thought. How she become a toy in hands of every one.


Darkness possessd all. No matter inside or outside. Pair of legs moved in the same dark room. He lightened the room and uncovered the sketch he made before. A devil smile came on his lips and his raised hands caressed the place where he filled his blood:maang of Geet. "kaha tha maine tumse,you belongs to me only. See i make you mine, removing all hurdles betwen us." Maan laughed like a devil. He won the chase to get Geet. His obsession his madness now his only. Maan caressed the sketch with his knuckles. "now no one can stop me to make you mine. You are here with me and i have you any time i want." his expression mischievous. He shot a wicked smile. Today he got the material to fullfill his untamed desires which made him insane. "damn...i just cant wait to have you underneath me. Geet stop torturing me and come to me." he said hoarsly to the canvas. His need is reflecting.
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Dev was coming to concious gradually. His vision was still blurred and head aching badly. Blood drops were dried around his wound on his forhead. His head was falling here and there,till he regain full concious. When he awaked he found himself in his own old wherehouse,tied in ropes. He scanned all around there is no one. He was all alone. No idea he had how long he was tied there but his whole body was stiffed and ached. He start struggling to untied the ropes and soo he will manage to. Dev was alert this time. He start moving outside but carefully. At the exit point he saw some goons playing cards. He hide quickly. Before he could think he saw NT was coming there. Dev alerts.

"how is he?" she asked glaring them.

"he was still uncouncious." he told her.

"what the need of hitting him so hard?" she yelled. "anyways make sure he will be stay here till we get our next instruction from Maan." she instruct them and Dev got the biggest shock ever. He was confused why she is taking Maan's name. What connection he had with her? And what instructions she was talking about. All questions are just making him confused and restless.





NOTE: I know i told you that i would not post here. But the response on part 8 is good. So if you keep it with all updates then i will not shift it to blog. But if Likes and comments start decreasing,then i have to shift this one also on blog. Now tell me what you guys want?
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg its done by maan😲
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
so maan did all this to make her his wife but geets heart broke badly she just got married to a complete stranger whom she hate now have to accept this relation n tara also part of maans plan looks like very soon dev will come to know maans truth nice part thnx 4 update
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear, omg this is planed by maan, and dev heard their talk as well, what now geet married to maan
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg Maan did everything with help of nt. Geet is completely broken..

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