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Haha I think I am also getting a promotion like ACP Khan in the story.
Last time I got second spot to comment n this time 1st.
It's a first for me too.
So I want this comment to be very good too n I hope I can.
To begin with, the opening paragraph was very nice n had a different ring to it.
I don't think shireen had such a nice intro in any other story.
Like Ayaan here.more matured n sensible also responsible.
He respects his ACP also too much to not let his reputation tarnish.
Well there was no Zoya much but liked the entire convo between asyaan in his cabin.
N the way ayaan received his punishment from asad.
Well a little hints here n there were asad was the only child has maybe cleared a lot of doubts that he dint have any twin.
Since you haven't given out much details about ACP khan yet there are numerous things going on in my head with this mystery.
Like was asad an undercover cop on a mission.
But knowing u I know this will not be the truth as this is so very cliched.
I know it will turn out to be a 360degree from what we think.
Zoyaan part was delicate n cute too.
Of course Zoya will not accept this so easily that this person is not her ahsan.
N any sane person would do the same if they see an exact replica of the person u r dying to find out.
But I hope this agony for Zoya gives her some hope n ends soon.
Whatever u r planning but I want a happy ending for Asya.
I know there will be lots of fb scenes n I'm looking forward to it.
That's it.
Don't know y I'm writing such super long comments for everyone today.
Hope u like it.😊
Edited by sweet_tehs - 10 years ago
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