Qubool Hai Ki Ek Alag Kahani SEHAN WEDDING (Completed)

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- Notes

-Shaad has a younger brother

-Ahil has been overly quiet living with his sisters and father

-It has been a little less than a month since Sanam has been gone

-Rehan's death happened 6+ months before the Pakistan drama

-Shaad's younger brother (Shahzad) has been in a coma for less than 6 months

-his name was in my top three and when I went to a random name generator every time this name was chosen. So I kept it😛

-New Sanam has been kicked out of the house👏

-sorry if there is any mistakes. but i tried and i hope you like it. Sorry if the beginning is not good. But later I promise it will get better.😭😒🤗

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Qubool Hai Ki Ek Alag Kahani


Chapter 1:


Seher walked down the sidewalk as the stars twinkled in the dark sky. She shut her eyes as a tear escaped turning the corner she stopped and stared down on the white steps. She quickly wiped her tears and put her left arm through the strap of her large camp bag. She removed her slippers and calmly made her way up the marble steps. Seher dropped to her knees and confronted Ganesha's murti.

"Bappa," she sobbed "Bappa kyon tum ne aisa kiya? Why did this happen to me? You took Rehan from me and Sanam. Yes they believe in a different God. But they still did believe. Rehan even came to see you the day he died and you didn't save him. Ok you separated me from my love but why Sanam and Ahil. Poor Ahil is crushed that Sanam is gone he did one good kicking duplicate Sanam out. I know Sanam is alive somewhere and I will find her. It has been sometime but now enough is enough. I will find her with or without your help!"


Seher flicked the tears in her eyes and glared at Bappa's murti. "But I hope you are with me. This time you are not taking anyone important from me!" She pointed at the murti. She twirled around before she could take a step a hand blocked her way. Seher looked at them in shock.

"Tum?" She questioned the men that tried to kidnap her.

"Boss this is the girl we were suppose to sell." His friend whispered

"Where is my sister!?!" Seher screamed shaking the kidnapper from his collar.

"Hey laddaki chup." The boss said pushing her hand away.

"Boss just tell her that her sister fell into the depths of the ocean. She most likely is dead." The man smiled.

Seher stored her anger in trying to remember which body of water her sister could have fallen in. She jumped in joy as a light bulb brightened her world.

"Thank you." She spoke bouncing up and down "You told me where my sister could be." She reached out to hug the kidnapper

"Tum pagal ho. Let's go we will take you to your sister."

"Sure why not." She grinned slowly backing her way to the tray of sindoor. She threw sindoor filling the air. The tray made face-to-face contact with the kidnapper. "Happy Holi!" she yelled running as fast as she can.

Seher put her slippers on laughing as the kidnappers tried to rub the sindoor out of their eyes. She glanced around and noticed a hospital. She dashed towards it. The parking lot was shockingly empty. She searched for help. Seher spotted a car with the headlights on and rushed to it. She heard the kidnappers in the distance. Nobody was in the car but the trunk was open. She knelt down and walked towards the trunk and hopped inside it. Seher closed it partially and heard heavy footsteps approaching on the gravel ground.

"We lost her. You idiots." a voice yelled.

"Sorry boss." a voice said from the head side where Seher laid down.

A large thud filled the trunk making Seher jumped. She placed her hand on her chest calming herself down.

"Hey what do you think you are doing?" an aged voice yelled.

"Sorry sir." a voice near the trunk spoke.

Seher listened to the fading footsteps in the gravel. She sighed with relief as she heard two car doors shut and the engine starting.

"Oh shiz." she pushed at the trunk. "Great job Seher. You are a complete idiot. You sat in a random car. This is just perfect. Bappa what do I do? I know Sanam is in Pakistan. That is the only body of water they could have past by. Where is this car go-"

"Doctor-ji where are we going?" a boy's voice questioned unknowingly cutting Seher's rambling.

"Hum log Pakistan jane vala hai."

"Oh mere parivar vahan ki apana ghar Pakistan mein hai?" the boy asked.

"Bappa. Thank you. You proved yourself. Now I know you are with me. Well I don't know when we will get there so I should sleep. This boy is so clueless and boring. I think I will fall asleep fast." she curled herself up and fell fast asleep.


Shaad's Home (a hour earlier)


Shaad sat down in his room and sighed. Jannat had a tray of chai and put it in front of Shaad. He looked up at her and smiled he took a cup.

"Is anything wrong?" Jannat asked concerned

"Ummm its nothing." he told her standing up

"Shaad you can't hide anything from me. Just tell me please."

"Mere pyara bhai" he sighed putting his chai down. He sat next to Jannat. "He went to India and got into something big. He has been in a coma for such a long time. The doctors don't know how much longer he can stay-" his phone went off like an alarm. Jannat jumped up.

"Don't worry" he reassured her. He picked the phone "Hello... Ji ha Shaad speaking... What really? When, how, is he okay... Of course bring him home as soon as possible." He turned to Jannat with a huge smile. She stood up.

"What happened?"

"Jannat!" He yelled with joy picking her up and spinning around.

"Put me down. Tell me what happened."

"Mere bhai. He is okay. He woke up from his coma last night. I'm sooo happy. Ammi, Abu I need to tell them."

He ran out calling for his parents. Jannat jogged to catch up with him.

"Kya hua?" His Abu asked rubbing his eyes.

"Ammi, Abu! Shahzad zinda hai." he ran and hugged his parents.

"Sachamuch?" his Ammi wept with joy.

"He will be here by tomorrow morning!" Shaad exclaimed.

"Ok. Shanat Shaad. We will wake up extra early and get ready." his Abu smiled at his elder son.

He nodded in agreement and went to his room as Jannat laughed to see his joy. Shaad lay on the bed sound asleep. Jannat laid down next to the overjoyed brother and smiled. She slowly fell asleep.


The Next Morning


Seher stretched hitting the trunk again. A thud filled the tiny space. She immediately brought her hand to her chest and wished nobody heard it.

"We are almost to your house." An older voice spoke breaking the silence Seher hoped for.

After about 10 minutes the car made a screeching stop. Seher hit her head inside the trunk.

"Ow. Stupid. If he can't drive why does he drive." she thought rubbing her head.

"We are here." the same voice from before blurt out. "Ok beta you get the things from the trunk. I'll go check if anyone is up."

Seher's heart froze as two sides of the car door closed. She covered her mouth as the footsteps slowly approached her. The trunk opened beaming light into the tiny dark room. Seher quickly got up and someone caught her before she could hit the ground. She held the person and tried to get back to balance. She stared into two warm chocolate eyes. The rest of the face was covered by a striped brown shawl.

"Sorry. Please don't tell anyone." she begged holding her cramping legs.

"Don't worry. I will keep your secret safe." a sweet warm male voice said.

"Thank you." She smiled and slowly limped way.

"I would recommend hiding behind the trees till we go in." the same voice told Seher while he grabbed the bags.

Seher thought that would be good idea and hid there.

"Bye." the voice whispered as she heard bags wheeling away.

"Bye." she whispered back.

The doctor looked at the boy. "I think they are sleeping." he told him.

"oh." he sighed leaning against the door. as it burst open dropping him to the ground. About that time Seher ran off from there.

The noise woke Shaad as he turned his head to see Jannat staring at him. The screamed rolling off the bed.

"What is your problem? You gave me a heart attack." He yelled at Jannat.

"Sorry." she laughed looking off the bed.

Shaad looked at the time 8:30. "Oh no."

As they heard a hello from downstairs. Shaad looked at Jannat and quickly headed out of the door. He looked from the railing and shouted "Sorry doctor ."

He sped down the steps. As his brother peaked out the door.

"That is your brother. I don't know what he is looking for right now." the doctor pointed at Shahzad.

"Shahzad mere bhai. How are you?" he hugged his brother as his little brother stood as stiff as a rock.

"Who is this?" he managed to squeak from his brother's tight grip.

His word froze Shaad. As he turned to the doctor.

"This is what I wanted to talk to you about. Your brother lost his memory." the doctor spoke with an apologetic tone

Shaad looked at his precious younger brother and backed up to the couch plopping himself down.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Great start! 👏
I loved the way you incorporated Seher into the story. I'm so glad to see her! And Shahzad! I'm loving him already. Is he a lookalike of Rehan?

So Sanam is still living as Shaad's wife?!

I would love to read this story. Do continue soon dear. Waiting for the next part. And please pm me for future updates if possible. 😊
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Originally posted by: Cinderella3

Wow! Great start!👏

I loved the way you incorporated Seher into the story. I'm so glad to see her! And Shahzad! I'm loving him already. Is he a lookalike of Rehan?

So Sanam is still living as Shaad's wife?!

I would love to read this story. Do continue soon dear. Waiting for the next part. And please pm me for future updates if possible.😊


Happy you liked it. Sanam still doesn't have her memory and believes she is Shaad's wife. Everything else wait and watch. And I will need to figure out how to pm 😛
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I am missing my seher baby in action.
Love to see her.
Is shehzad a look alike of rehan or rehan only?
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Originally posted by: Az07

I am missing my seher baby in action.

Love to see her.
Is shehzad a look alike of rehan or rehan only?


Just wait. Glad people are sort of hooked. Lol. Maybe not But I'm working on the next chapter just hoping I can post a chapter at least every 2 weeks But most likely not. Cuz school. Ugh 🤢
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Hey awesome story line love it continue soon 😃
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Chapter 2:
Shaad glared at the old doctor. He stood up and slowly made his way to him.

"Shaad beta. Listen to me. Your brother can still get his memory back. Don't force him but slowly try and make him do things he did on a regular basis. It will take time but it will eventually come back." The doctor placed his hand on his shoulder. "If he is pressured too much he will have unbearable headaches that can last for a long time. It will never lead to anything good."

"Okay I will make sure of that." Shaad reassured the doctor. "But can I ask why he is wearing a shawl covering his face."

"That is because he has some terrible scars and old burns. Some of the little kids would run from him. But the all loved his jumpy personality. To make friends he did that. He will warm up just give him time." the doctor smiled. "Just go talk to him."

Shaad made his way to his brother who sat on the couch staring at his nails. He blew on them as his brother sat down next to him.

"Shahzad. Main Shaad your big brother." he told him as he was met with his little brother's brown eyes.

"Aur main Jannat tumhara bhabhi." Jannat smiled reaching her hand for a handshake.

Shahzad looked at her and slowly extended his hand and shook her hand. As Shaad eyed Jannat hoping she would get the message to stop.

"Come I'll show you where your room is." Shaad took Shahzad down the hallway. He opened the double doors revealing a bright room. It was perfectly clean. A large bed with blue sheets, there was a coffee table in the center of the room, there was a perfectly polished dressing table, and there was a large cupboard. There was many other things.

"Bhaijaan. Is this room mine?" Shahzad questioned

"Yes." as Shaad stopped to analyze what his brother said. "Wait did you just call me bhaijaan?"

"Ummm I think so." He replied. "But I don't need this big--"

Shaad hugged his brother cutting his sentence off. This time Shahzad hugged back. There was a glass door inside the room that caught Shahzad's eyes.

"Bhai what is that room?"

"That is your office." Shaad replied as he was about to take him to it he felt Shahzad pulling his arm,

"Rukona. Main apni pichhala zindagi yad karana hai." Shahzad told him in a sad tone.

"Don't worry mere bhai. It will come back slowly." He patted his brother. "Look around in your room and relax. Main doctor-ji se bat karana hai."

As Shaad opened the door to see his Ammi and Abu. He explained the same thing the doctor had told him. After that they went in calmly and reunited with their long lost son.


On the Road (Sunset)

"Bappa where do I go? It is almost night. Also I haven't gotten too far. But my feet still hurt so I'm done for today." Seher came across a wooden bench. There was a dhaba close to it. "Wow Bappa you work fast." she put her bag on the bench and sat down. She stared into the sky. "It looks like it is going to pour tonight. How much fun I will be sick."

As she avoided the dark clouds staring off into the soft orange and yellow of the sky.

"I wish I can find Sanam soon. I cannot lose anyone else." she continued to look at the sky as it slowly darkened. "Rehan I really miss you. I still haven't figured out which star you are. Or are you shy and hiding from me?" She laughed quietly leaning back closing her eyes. "I really miss you. I wish you were still with me. Why did you have to go?" Seher cried falling asleep.


Shaad's House (night)


"Khana taiyar hai." Shaad's Ammi declared. Everyone came except Shahzad. Jannat reassured Shaad as she got up to check on Shahzad. She walked to his room and knocked but the door opened by itself.

"Im not hungry you guys can eat. I had a late lunch. Also I'm very tired. Bye bhabhi-ji. See you guys in the morning." He got up and closed the door before Jannat could say anything.

As he heard the footsteps fade away he was relieved. Confused Jannat informed the family but they let him go.

Shahzad desperately searched through the room. He couldn't find an umbrella anywhere in his room. He ran to his office and looked around to find a umbrella in the office cupboard. He arranged his pillows to form a shape of a body and covered it with his blanket. Shahzad shut off the lights and climbed out of the window landing with a soft thud face first. He quickly got up closing the window and rubbed his face.

"Allah please help me find that girl. She will get sick and I'm pretty sure she hasn't found a place to stay." he prayed running to reach the dirt road.

He fixed his shawl and continued down the dusty road. He felt little drops coming down from the sky. He sprinted searching each side of the road. He eventually came across of a girl. He looked to see if it was her.

"Thank God." he whispered. He looked around the bench to see a hole on each side of the bench. He placed the handle down in the hole and it protected Seher and her bag wonderfully. As the rain slowly got harder. Shahzad was ready to leave as he saw creepy men walk by looking Seher's way. He sat on the bench next to her and they continued down the road. It eventually started pouring. Shahzad did his best to stay awake and did it perfectly till the sun slowly rose. He zoned out and shut his eyes. He accidently dropped his head onto Seher's bag.

Seher eventually woke up from the extra pressure her bag was putting on her shoulders. She took it off to see a person with a shawl covering their entire face sleeping on her bag.

"Excuse me! What do you think you are doing!" She stood up and yelled. "You can't just bother an alone girl on the streets." She shouted.

Shahzad rubbed his eyes fixing his shawl and standing up.

"Sorry." he told Seher.

"Just sorry who do you think--" she started and was cut off by a booming sneeze. She felt little droplets fly at her not from the rain though. It made Seher jump. He turned and away rubbing his nose. He slowly walked away.

"Wait till I find you again then you are sooo DEAD!" she screamed stomping her foot into the ground. Making Shahzad run for his dear life. Just then Seher felt a hand on her shoulder. She flung it off turning her head. "KYA?!?"

"Beti shanat. Why did you yell at him?" and old man said. "He brought you an umbrella. Also he stayed up all night and kept you safe. He just fell asleep not to long ago."

Seher gave herself a facepalm. As a faint sneeze was heard. She turned to see Shahzad walking away into the distance. As the rain did not stop.

"Thank you for telling me dada-ji." she hugged him. Seher quickly picked up her bag and umbrella. She ran after the dot in the distance as he finally disappeared.

Shahzad climbed back through the window and covered his nose muffling his dinosaur sneezes.


Back Outside


Seher closed her eyes as rain beamed at her face. She continued her way to see a large house. She saw the car from yesterday.

"Oh, no it was that guy." she made her way to the doorbell.

As she rung it she stayed and waited for a good minute or so. As Shaad finally opened it. He rubbed his eyes and they suddenly grew open.

"Jan--?" he questioned in shock.

"I'm Seher." she cut him off. "I came to return this to a boy who I think lives here." she said handing the umbrella to him.

"Are you sure here?" as a thunderous sneeze filled the quiet house. Making Shaad flinch.

Seher smiled "Yes that is him."

"Ok come on in or you will get soaked." Shaad welcomed her in.

"Thank you." Shaad made his way to the loud sneezes as Seher followed.

Shaad opened the door. "Shahzad?" he said. As he met his brothers wide brown eyes.

"Bhai." he exclaimed grabbing him with his wet hands and pulling him into his room. "She is gonna kill me." he threw a pillow at her.

As the pillow bounced off Seher's face. She wanted to yell but controlled her anger. "I didn't mean it. Sorry I overreacted." She told him holding her ears.

"Ohh. Nevermind Bhaijan." he told his brother letting him go. As he sneezed loudly again. Shaad jumped again.

"Go dry off." Shaad demanded his little brother.

"Ok. Can she can keep the umbrella?" Shahzad questioned.

"Han. Now go." Shaad agreed handing Shahzad a towel.

Shahzad headed for the bathroom as Shaad closed the door with Seher walking by him. Shaad gave her the umbrella.

"Would you like to stay?"

"No its ok." Seher told him as she reached the door. "Bye."

She left through the door as Jannat came down the steps. Shaad was frozen at the door shocked.

"Shaad. Kaun bimar hai?" she questioned rubbing her eyes. She followed Shaad's gaze to the door. "Shaad. What are you looking at." she groaned with annoyance.

She headed toward the door and looked out in the pouring rain.
I did it!!! It is up so fast. Idk if it is good but I tried. I'm gonna work on ch. 3 from today. My goal have it up before my birthday and Ch.4 around my birthday. 😃
BTW. Sorry is my hindi is off forgot to say this last time. Im not from India but I understand it. Also I'm not full Indian. So if it is off sorry.😳
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I didnt quite get the last part could you please explain to me what happened?
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Originally posted by: SprinklesOfLove

I didnt quite get the last part could you please explain to me what happened?

Sorry about that. But Jannat looked outside of the house where Seher just left from. So the problem is will Jannat see Seher or not? Again sorry. 😭
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Happy to see so many views. Its okay if there is less comments Im happy. 😊. Thank you guys. Im currently working on chapter 3. My goal up by April 3rd or 4th. If you are the silent viewers hope you are enjoying it.

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