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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
doing great with this ff buddy i luv it =)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
I loved this man! Good that Rabul got married and now I'm happy Pragya is telling Daadi! Great work!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Part 5

Daadi: Abhishek!! Is this true????

Abhi didn't answer her!!!

Daadi: I asked you something!!! Is this true???

Abhi: Yes but...

Daadi: BUS!!! STOP!!! I don't want to hear anything!!!!

Pragya was looking on!!!! She was looking at both of them!!!!

Pragya: Life isn't about joking around!!! You know I don't know why you married me!! If you were in love with someone else... you should've married them!!! Why me??? I felt back because you were always getting into some sort of trouble becuz of me!! And I felt bad!! I had a little hope that maybe... just maybe you deep down slowly cared for me... But I was wrong!!!!

Tanu: Wat are you trying to prove? That you will take my place??? You will never take my place!!

Pragya: Oh shut up!!!! I don't want to hear one word from you!!! Wat you mean take your place?? You want to be in my place! I am married to Abhi not you!!! Who has that title and right?? I do!! You are no no body!! In the society's eyes... you are known as the other woman!!! So you want to be and you need to be in my spot!! But are not!!!

Abhi was listening to both of them arguing!!!

Abhi: will you both just be quiet!!! Please!!!

They both looked at him!!! He was angry!!! He looked at daadi!!

Abhi: Daadi...

Daadi: No!! what you did was unacceptable!!! I will not forgive you for this!! And if you think that someone will come in this house replacing Pragya... Then you are wrong!! I will not allow anyone else!!!! Remember that!!

Tanu: Daadi..

Daadi: you just be quiet!!! What makes you think that you are good for Abhishek?? You aren't like Pragya!! My Pragya is #1!!! There is no one like her!! You cant even do half of the things that she can do!!... She wakes up early... She does the pooja in the morning... she takes care of me and this family..she makes sure I take my meds on time... she cooks and she cleans even if she doesn't have too... can you do any of that?? No you cant!!! You are nothing but a spoilt brat!!!

Tanu was looking at Daadi!!! Daadi had walked off!!!!! Abhi was looking at Pragya!!!

Abhi: I hope you are happy Pragya!!!

Pragya: What did I do?

Abhi: Why did you have to say something???

Pragya: I didn't lie!! I told the truth!!! Its not my fault ur having an affair!!!

Abhi: Why all of a sudden...

Pragya: Because...I thought... I thought for a second then maybe... just maybe u may have cared for me... but then wen I didn't see you at the hospital I knew there was no point of giving myself false hope!!!!

Abhi: I came home to take a shower... They had all told me to go... so I did!!!!

Pragya: Wat difference does it make anyways?? And besides I had made my decision... that after I got better and then after Bulbul's marriage... I was going to ask you for a divorce!!! But you were so anxious that u were ahead of the game...

ABhi: What are you talking about?

Pragya: IM talking about the divorce papers...

Abhi: Yes then ones that u gave...

Pragya: I didn't give them you gave them!!

Tanu was shocked!!! This was her doing...

ABhi: NO I didn't!! when I saw them... you had already signed them!! So then I thought why not... So then I signed them too!!!!!!

Pragya: I didn't give them!! I had thought about it.. but I never went through...

Abhi: Then if you didn't... then who did???

Tanu: Well does it matter?? You guys are going to go ahead with it...

Abhi: wait.. no im not... becuz I was thinking why would she give me a divorce... so now it makes sense... that she didn't!!

Tanu: well it doesn't matter now...

Abhi was looking at her... Why was she getting so antsy...

Pragya: Why are you pushing it so much?? You think Abhi is going to still marry you... Daadi doesn't want anyone else... So wat makes u think that you will marry him??

Tanu: Oh just shut up you *itch!!!!! You think you know it all!!! Of course he will still marry me!! He wont care!! He loves me... It doesn't matter who says it... whether its you or daadi!!!! I know him well!!! And becuz of you... Daadi insulted me!!...

Abhi was looking at her!!!! Did she just really say that??? Did she not know him at all?? Then there was a lawyer that had come to the house... Abhi looked at him... Pragya looked at him too... Tanu was shocked!! Wat was he doing here? He wasn't suppose to come now!! She was trying to signal him to leave but he wasn't paying attention to her!!!!

Abhi: Yes... who are you?

The lawyer introduced himself... And saying if the papers were signed so then that way they can fix a date so the proceedings can happen ASAP!!

Abhi: But I never hired you!!!

Lawyer: Yes you didn't!! But Tanu did!!!!

Abhi and PRagya looked at Tanu!!!

Abhi: How could u do something like this? I didn't even...

Tanu: But u wanted to divorce her!! So I jus...

Abhi: You just what Tanu???

Abhi was soo furious now!!! I think this was it... he was just losing his cool!! He was looking at Tanu had told her off!!!

Abhi: You think you know me??? You think you know me?? You know nothing about me!! In case you don't kno... the peron who I admire most in this world.. is my Daadi!!!! I have always listened to her... and today she had found out our truth.. and wat did she say?? That no one can replace Pragya... and she will not accept anyone else... and u think that becuz she said that... I will still marry you!!!!

Tanu was looking at him stunned!! Pragya was also looking on!!

Abhi: U know today you showed ur true colors... What did I even see in you!!!

Tanu: Abhi wat are you saying??? You don't mean that??

Abhi: Yes I do!! I really do!! And are no less than Alliyah!!! Hence that's why u guys are friends... You guys think alike!!! You know I never respected Pragya... and yet... she still fell in in love with me!!!!!

Pragya was shocked!!!! How in the world did he know that she loved him??

Abhi: And you... I gave you everything... and yet... You still don't deserve anything!!!!! You know... Everything that Pragya did for me and for this family... you would've never done!! Becuz all u think about is urself!! And if you cant respect my daadi... Then u aren't even worthy of me!!!!!

Tanu was shocked!! Abhi just broke up with her!! How could he?? She didn't want go without a fight... but he didn't let her talk and he clearly didn't want to her listen to her either!! And he told her to get out as it was officially over!!!

She had walked out in a huff... Abhi stood there... Pragya was looking at him... He had turned around to look at her... They were both staring at each other... wat just happened?? Pragya was sooo lost!!!

Abhi: Listen fuggy... I know this whole time I wasn't fair to you... But honestly divorce wasn't on my mind!!! And I know that you love me...

Pragya: I don't love you!!!

Abhi: yes u do!! I kno you do!!!!

PRagya: Who told you??

Abhi: I am saying!!!

PRagya: well u have it all wrong!!!

Abhi: really??

He had walked towards her and he was staring at her... he was holding her face...

Abhi: So my touch does nothing...

She had taken a deep breath and closed her eyes...

Abhi: Look I have been thinking about us... giving us a chance... And I wanted to talk to you about it.. but then the divorce papers...

She was looking at him...

Abhi: And admit it... you don't wanna divorce me... you rather stay with me!! I mean its for the fame... famous rockstars wife...

Pragya: I don't care about the fame...

Abhi: Yes you do!! U know you wanna be in the spot light!!!

Pragya I don't care!!!

Abhi: oh sure...but why don't u say how u feel about me...

Pragya: that I hate you!!!

Abhi: No... that you love me!

Pragya: But why would I say that wen I clearly don't!!!

He had pulled her in a hug... And she was stunned!!!!!

Pragya: Let go of me!!!

Abhi: I wont...

Pragya: I will call daadi!!!

Abhi: She wont come!!! SHes upset!! Im going to go have to pacify her!!

Pragya: Please.. leave me!!

Abhi: Nope!! Say you love me!!

PRagya: I don't!!

Abhi: Then I wont let go!!!

Pragya: Abhi... stop it!!

Abhi: Come on fuggy say it!!!

Pragya: I hate you!!

He had come closer and kissed her on the cheek... She was blushing like there was no tomorrow!!! She had turned red as a tomato!!!! He had smiled at her... And she was just to shy to meet eye to eye with him!!!!

Abhi: I will wait for it... cuz I know you do!!!!!!

He had let her go... And then she walked back... and ran off... He had smiled...

Abhi: Gosh im gonna go mad!!!!

He knew... he knew he made a right choice... He had gone upstairs to speak to Daadi about the whole thing... she was upset with him for a little while... But then once she knew Pragya and Abhi were going to stay together... She was over it and was really happy!!!...

Pragya had gone into the room and saw the divorce papers... she had picked them up and was staring at them... Abhi had come inside and saw her staring at them... He had come from behind and got them from her hand...

Abhi: this is not the end fuggy... this is just the beginning!!!! Beginning for a brand new start!!!!!...

He had ripped up the papers... And she had smiled... She was super happy!!!... She had hugged him... And he was taken aback a little bit... But then he had put his arms around her...she had slowly whispered in his ears...

Pragya: I love you!!!!

He was surprised!!!!! He had smiled...

Abhi: I love you too fuggy!!!!!!!... I love you too!!!!!!!!!

The end!!!!!!! Yup and it ends here... It was a "SS" short story!!! Hope you guys liked it!!!!!!! Thanks for all the comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I dont know if i will come back with another one... I do more dramatic ones... but this kidnapping track was getting on my nerves... thats why i wrote this!!!!! But thanks again for all the comments!!!!!!😳


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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Nice update so finally dadi knows
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
awsm ending
loved it
very nicely written

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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
This was utterly fantastic! Glad Abhi broke up with Tanu! Loved the line where he said what did I even see in you? So true that! And the end was so cute! Thank you so much for a cute read! Loved all of it! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Cute ending. Loved it...😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Read part 2 to 5 in one go.. Amazing is all I can say.. Such an awesome ending.. I'd love to read more from you.. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Awesome and cute ending...😛
Finally Abhigya are one...❤️
would like to see more from you...👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Nice end
Abhi gone mad bcoz of fuggy wow it so mindblowing
He also started loving her

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