SS: Is this the end...... Part 5 Pg 7 (last part)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys... This Kidnapping track is getting on my nerves... So decided to write one ending the kidnapping track... hopefully you guys like it... I have wrote over 100 FF's on this forum... but im coming back after 7 years...😲 Its from the part where they are tied up in that building type place... there wont be too many parts...


The scene begins where Abhi and Pragya are tied to the poles. Abhi was now getting irritated and this whole scenario! Neil was going back and fourth and wasn't doing anything new!

Abhi: Look if you want to kill us... Go ahead! I don't know wat the hell you are waiting for!!!!

Neil: Hey... Shut up!!!!

Abhi: No I will not!!! You have had us here his whole time!! And you are wasting your time and ours!!!

Pragya was looking at Abhi! She was getting worried as why Abhi was arguing!! What if Neil does something!! She was just staring!!

Pragya: Abhi will you be quiet!! Why are you arguing?

Abhi: Hey fuggy!! You keep quiet!! We are in this mess because of you!!!

Pragya: me? Wat did I do??

Abhi: You are the one that got kidnapped!!!!

Pragya: Oh so its my fault!!

Abhi: Well duh!!!!!

These two were arguing again!! And Neil had it with them!!! This is it!!! HE had thought to end this chapter once and for all!!! He didn't care anymore!! He had untied both of them and the goons held them!! HE had a gun and he was about to shoot!!!!

Neil: Who wants to die 1st?

ABhi was looking at him!!! He had heard this line before!!! He wasn't going to do it!! He was a chicken!! If he was brave he would've done this long time back!!!! But Neil had enough and he wasn't going to listen to anyone or Aaliyah!! She had told him not to harm Abhi... But he couldn't keep him alive... or else he would go to jail!!! Pragya was looking

Pragya: Kill me 1st!! Please!!!!

Neil looked at her!!! Abhi looked at her!!!!

PRagya: Kill me 1st!! please!!!

Neil: Why??

Pragya: Because I don't want to see him die!!!!!

Neil started laughing!!! Abhi was looking at her in the most confused look ever!!!!! Pragya was trying to fight the goons now... she didn't want to see Abhi die... She just couldn't!!!!... Neil had held the gun towards Abhi!!! And then he brought it to PRagya and kept on waving it back and fourth... but then... he had stopped at Abhi... And he had smiled!!!!!

Neil: Any last wishes??

ABhi was giving him the most serious look ever...

Neil: I guess not!!!!

He was about to pull the trigger!!! And pragya knew now.. that he wasn't playing... And she bit the goon on the hand really hard... And she ran towards Abhi just as neil fired the gun shot...and the bullet hit her on her back!!!!!

Neil was stunned!! Abhi was shocked!!!!

Abhi: PRAGYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Neil was thinking how in the world did she come in the way...

Down below... there were people... And they had heard a gun shot... And they got scared... Someone had a cell phone and called the cops...

Pragya looked at him... and she smiled right before she had fell on the floor...Abhi was soo shocked... And he had enough... He had literally pushed the goons away and this time it was no more Mr. Nice Guy!!!! He was beating up everyone like there was no tomorrow!!!... He was throwing them against the hard wall!!! Neil was running away from everything but Abhi had grabbed him...

The cops had arrived and the people were pointing that it was coming from the empty building structure.. and they had ran to there...

As the cops had arrived... they had fired a shot in the air... and abhi had looked... Abhi had told them to arrest him...

One of the cops had recognized him...

Cop: Arent you Abhi? The rockstar?

Cop had told his senior inspector that he was Abhi that was kidnapped with his wife!!!! They had arrested Neil... and Abhi ran to pragya who was lying unconscious on the floor!!!! She had to be rushed to the hospital!!! She was taken into the Operation theater... he couldn't go inside... And he had to wait...

News had reached home... That they were found... and that they were in the hospital... The whole family was shocked... Everyone had rushed to the hospital!!! Aaliyah and Tanu were shocked!!! Pragya was in the hospital... ABhi was ok!!!

They were whispering to each other... Pragya still wasn't dead yet!!!!!!

They had reached the hospital and everyone saw Abhi!! He was so relieved to see everyone... daadi had come to him and he hugged her soo tight!!!!

Daadi: Omg!!! My Son!!!!

She was crying like there was no tomorrow!!!! Sarla was smiling seeing him!! But she was in tears at the same time!!! Everyone was worried for Pragya... Everyone had hope.. she was going to be ok!!!! Abhi still couldn't believe that she had took the bullet for him!!!!... Why did she do it???

Purab had gone up to Abhi... He was relieved to see his best friend standing before him!!! Abhi had seen him and smiled and gave him a big hug!!!!! Bulbul was looking on... and she was crying...

Bulbul: Im sooo sorry Jiju!!!!!! This is all my fault!!!!!!

ABhi: Hey... Its not ur fault!!!!!

Bulbul: Yes it is!!!!! The kidnapper wanted me... I should've just gone!!! Di wouldn't be in this state...

Abhi: Do you know who the kidnapper is...

Bulbul: Who????

Abhi: Neil!!!

Everyone was stunned!!!!!!!!

Bulbul: WHAT???

ABhi had told everyone!!!!! Aaliyah and Tanu were now sweating!!!! Hopefully Neil didn't tell them anything!!!!!! That it was her behind this whole thing!!!!!

Bulbul was still thinking about everything.. and she wanted to tell Abhi but she didn't want to open her mouth this time in front of Aaliyah and Tanu or else Aaliyah would raise hell... So she wanted to wait at the right time when ABhi would be alone!!!

Everyone was praying and they were waiting for the red light to go off... but it was still on!!!! As soon as the light went off... everyone was looking at waiting for the doctor to come out... And once he did... Everyone was bombarding him with questions and how she was doing...

Doc: She is doing fine!!! The bullet was taken out... But she did lose a lot of blood... so she will be shifted to ICU!!!!

Sarla: Can we see her?

Doc: Not now!! She is still unconscious!!!! You guys will have to wait!!!!

Doc had left from there... and everyone wanted to see her... But doc had said no!!!

Once she was shifted to ICU... everyone was looking at her thru the window... Abhi was looking at her... He was thinking that this could've been him... But instead she had taken the bullet...But why did she do that?? He had no clue... IT didn't occur to him that the reason why she had done it... was because she was in love with him!! But he had no clue about it!!!

Tanu was looking at ABhi! She was happy that nothing happened to him... and she didn't care for Pragya! She wanted to go to him and hug him!! But everyone was there... So she was getting annoyed!!!!

Tanu: abhi... Why don't you go home?? Take a shower...freshen up!!!!

Abhi was looking at her!!!!

Tanu: I mean look at ur state!!!!!

Aaliyah knew where she was getting at!!!! So being Tanu's bestie... she had told him the same thing... and then afterwards to come back... As everyone is here!!!

Bulbul was looking at them and was getting annoyed!! But this wasn't the time for her to speak up!!!!! So she let it go!!!!

Abhi: No I will stay here!!!!

Sarla: No I think they are right!! Go home... we are all here... wen she wakes up... We will call you!!!

Daadi: Yes Abhi!! Go!!! Shes not going to wake up soon!! So just go!!!!

Tanu was happy deep down inside... She was hoping he would say yes!!!! He was thinking... he didn't want to leave... But daadi assured him... So he had agreed!!!!

Alliyah: bhai... I will drop you off at home!!!!! Come on!!!!

Tanu: I will come with you guys too!!!!!

ABhi had left with them! Tanu was soo happy in the car... She was talking and talking... and for some reason Abhi didn't care for anything she had to say!! His focus was on Pragya!!! Once he had come home... he had quickly ran upstairs...charged his cell phone.. Got out clean pair of clothes...

Tanu had come inside the room... And hugged him from the behind..

Tanu: Omg I missed you sooo much!!!!!! Im so happy you're back!!!!

That hug... Her voice... for some reason... Its not something he missed!!!!! Why was he feeling like that?? He had made her let go...

Abhi: Look I need to take a shower... just leave me alone for a little bit!!

Tanu was looking at him!!!

Tanu: Are you ok? Wats wrong?

Abhi: Im fine!!! Just let me be for a little bit!!!!

Tanu was thinking he did look exhausted!!!! So she smiled and let him be... She had closed the door!!!! Abhi had taken a long shower... And he had come out to put his shirt on...and he was doing it in a hurry... He wanted to go back to the hospital... He had checked his phone but no one had called!!!! He was doing his shirt buttons in a hurry and one of them broke...

Abhi: Damn!!!

He had looked for another shirt... And wen he pulled one out... Pragya's diary had fell on the floor... and he saw it fall... he had picked it up... And opened the 1st page... and boy o boy was he stunned!!!!!

Alliyah and Tanu were talking and Alliyah was scared and hoping neil wont say anything!!! Because now since hes in jail... He could squeal on her...

Meanwhile in the hospital... Pragya was moving very little... Sarla who was looking from the window... saw her moving a little... and then she had told everyone...and they had all rushed to look by the window...She had opened her eyes... And was looking around to see where she was!! They had called the doctor... As she was awake... Doctor had gone inside and taking a look at her...

Abhi was stunned!!!! He read her diary... She had poured her heart out in there and that she was in love with him!!! Abhi couldn't believe it!!!! He just stood there... trying to let it sink for a minute!!!! He had a flashback in the fire.. that she was trying to tell him something... and he was thinking was she trying to tell him that she loves him????

ABhi was left thinking in his thoughts and his phone had began to ring... he had heard it and thought it was from the hospital... so he quickly answered it... but it was from the police station... The cops were saying how someone had told Neil to do this... But hes not opening his mouth!!!... Abhi wanted to get to the bottom of it... and he knew someone was behind this kidnapping track... And he had told the cops... that he wanted answers... He had told the cops and he had tormented him enough... And to beat him until he opens his mouth!! And he didn't care wat it took... And he had hung up!!!

Pragya was looking on... and she was in pain!!!! Doctor had told the family members that she was fine... but still in serious condition... So don't let her talk sooo much... everyone wanted to barge in... but Sarla Daadi and Bulbul went inside 1st... They were standing there... They were all crying!!! Daadi sat by her...

Daadi: Im sooo happy to see you!!!!! I missed you sooo much!!!!!!!

She was rubbing her hands...Sarla and Bulbul were crying as well!!!!!!! Pragya was trying to talk... She opened her mouth...

Sarla: Wat happened?? Are you ok?

The 1st words that came out of her mouth...

Pragya: Abhi?

They smiled!!!!!

Sarla: He went home!!!!! He went to take a shower!!!!

Bulbul: Yea di!!! Aliyah and Tanu took him!!

Pragya was looking at her!! She was stunned!!!! He went home!!! He didn't even want to be at the hospital!!!! She was sad!!!!! She didn't want them to see her emotions... So she just acted like nothing was bothering her!!!!! They wanted to stay in with her... But she needed the rest... So they left the room to let her rest!!!!!!...

Once they left... Pragya was in her thoughts... After everything that occurred... he went home... and that too with Tanu!!! She came to a conclusion... that he only came to rescue her... Was for daadi!!! Because that was his promise to her!!!! But he didn't love her!!! She loved him... but wat was the point... She took a bullet for this man... but in the end... It wasn't worth anything at all!!!!!! She closed her eyes... And thought long and hard...

Pragya (herself): I guess this is it... NO point of keeping this relationship when he's not even happy!!! I tried... I did my part... hes not even here... hes at home... taking a shower... relaxing... And hes with Tanu... I guess this is it... Once I get better... I will end this relationship forever!!! Forget that I married him... Forget that maybe... just maybe there was still hope... But why keep trying...

AS she was thinking to herself... one tear drop... rolled down her face...



To be continued... Only if u guys want... Like i said... havent written in 7 years... So not sure how i did!!!!! Please be honest!!!!!!! I dont get offended!!!!



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice SS. I hope Abhi realizes his love for pragya
pls cont. soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice! Update soon please!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really well written! Looking forward to the next part
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that was interesting
we want more
please continue soon
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this was really good and well written buddy i think u should continue super soon =)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww so much drama and poor Pragya! Hoe Tanu and Aliya get caught soon! Do update soon please!
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Superb loved it.
please continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice update Aww poor Pragya she thinks abhi doesn't care, hope you post the next part soon
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Loved it.
Awesome SS.
Please update soon.

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