SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn SEASON 2 Thread2- 7-4-15 Ch28 Pg139 updtd - Page 22

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update.. 😊
Swaron teasing Nimmi..😆
Nimmi are too cute..😊
Swaron Trial Room Romance..☺️
Update soon😊
Thanks for PM.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey...!!
Amazinggg update
Loved it!!!
Starting wid swaron teasing nimmi
Piggyback ride shopping complex romance
end mein sharon's compliment
it was awesome
thnxx for the pm
update soon
Love<3
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww the update was ' oh so adorable '
Under the spell of u r writing
Great job
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks SBS for the coverage.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -SwaRonWorksPm-

Hope you liked the chapter!! Gvve honest reviews!

Next coming chaps will be long, for sure😉

Stay tune to know what gona happen next!😳

Thanks fr reviews!

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Loveyou all!

Sakshi!

Sakshi you are an awesome writer. You have always made my hair stand on reading the swaron moments. Just a suggestion, i have seen this behavioral pattern in all hindi serials. I mean these guys are married and has a child, so already had sex. But in hindi serials they have sex only in their suhaag raat after that they abstain and survive only on pure love. I know its family channels but come on, this is not reality. they dont have to show explicitly but there are so many ways so many magical ways to express or write about. For example Swayam and Sharon who is so deeply in love, can keep their hands off each other?? i dont think so. Its a way of life, especially if you are deeply in love. Nothing to be ashamed off. Its a natural process. I find it very difficult to believe that they sleep in the same bed and nothing happens?? Kutch to garbad hai.. Just because Saamy is there doesnt mean they are celibate. You cannot switch on and switch off Passion. Especially not Swayam with Sharon. He cannot keep his hands off her.
This fact is something i have noticed with many of serials in starplus, colors, sony, life ok. Just my opinion. But you writing is exemplary. Very good with romantic scenes. I am guessing that you do read, so try reading romantic novels of Julie Garwood, Julie Mcnaught etc..I love reading your work. But you rock Sakshi👏👏..
Edited by gsk4 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -SwaRonWorksPm-

How was it? Upto the mark or not?? Honest reviews plz!

More fun is awaititnggg!😉
Keep liking, commenting ! Love you people!

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Sakshi.

ITS WOW!!! This is what i had told you before you are too good with romantic scenes.. I am still not down to earth yet. Its waaay up the mark. But this again confirms to the point in my last post about Swayam keeping his hands off Sharon and Love making happens once in a while(years) and that passion can be just switched off and on with a peck on the cheek and a peck on the lips.. Swayam's character in D3 and in your stories is that of a very passionate lover boy who is deeply in love with a sharon and the feeling is reciprocated. remember those scenes in Dhol gaav, Swayam was running away from sharon because he couldnt resist her and he didnt want to loose the challenge.
Anyway i smell a second pregnancy here. Hope your story line goes more exciting after each episode. But please dont make Sharon into a typical housewife looking after kids, the house, cooking cleaning for hubby. She was a diva of a collage and once in a while making swayam jealous is also ok. Its interesting because we have seen the n number of times sharon being jealous in D3. Little spice to the story. Its too lovey dovey.Not that i dont enjoy it. I love it. may be reintroduce shivam's parents or Akaash or kutch aisa. thoda bahut pain hona chahiye to enjoy the pleasure. I hope you are getting what i am trying to say, there is no happiness without sadness. You are awesome with words Sakshi. Goodluck.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for previous response! Completed 100 pages~!!!! Yipie..Thanks for spamming !😆😉
Enjoy th next...😊

Recap- Last day at Jordan, Some light hearted moments, piggyback scene, shopping complex romance, teasing chatting, truth dare game...

Later that evening,

Swayam Nilesh were discussing about their next day flight timings and tickets.

Swayam- Flights ke timing? Mujhe aur Sharon ko morning mein hi hai nikalna...
Nilesh- An hour later, humari flight hai to Mumbai.
Swayam- Okay okay.. Tune Simmi ko bata diya na.
Nilesh- Haan yaar bata diya...
Swayam checked his tickets too. Simmi came to them with packets of chips!

Simmi- Snacks guys!
Swayam- Thanks yaar. Was so hungry... but where's my wife??
Simmi- Shayad kisi ka call aaya so must be talking...
Swayam- Okay ya!
Nilesh- Dinner ke kya plans hai???
Simmi- Plz ek wish hai meri...
Nilesh- Arey bolo.
Simmi- Hum beach ke side kahin dinner karte hain phir we'll spend sometime there only!! Plz!

"Yesss Sim is right" Saying this Sharon happily sat beside Swayam.

Simmi- Very good!!
Swayam- Thik hai phir.. Wahin chalte hain...
Sharon- One more thing...
Simmi- A place not near to non veg site, right babes?
Sharon- Yes dear!
Swayam- Wah. Reading mind...huh..
Nilesh*chuckles*- Not at all..must be that they already had a talk about this! Isn't Simmi?
Simmi- Unfortunately... YES!
Sharon*frown*- To what are we waiting for? Let's roam na... how boring you'll are!
Simmi- Pshyco lady hai boss.

All stood up and walked down the lane to a suitable restaurant.

***
While they were moving out from the Restaurant,

Nilesh- Kuch bhi keh lo but India ki baat hi alag hai...
Sharon- Exactly! And that desi style yahan nahi mil sakta, for sure!
Simmi- But let me tell you... I loved yahan ka accommodation and all. So so clean!
Sharon- Before we all go debating na, we should start another topic or else move fast to the sea shore.
Swayam- I agree.. It's 9:30 already.

A minute distance they walked and then stepped on the cold sand.

First, all four were walking together but in no time Nilesh Simmi started their nok jhok and SwaRon distanced from them to have their time and also give NiMmi some privacy!

Swayam- What are you thinking?
Sharon- About party..
Swayam- Huh? Which party? You keeping?
Sharon- Ohho nahi. Woh aaj Maanvi ka phone aaya tha... you remember na uski bhi Marriage Anniversary hai so they are keeping a party actually..
Swayam- Achha. When it is??
Sharon- 3 days later.. Damn Swayu! Mumbai pohochne ke baad another party... baap re!!!
Swayam- Haha..
Sharon- Kya laughing. I can't deny but really parties parties so irk me. But anyways, we gonna enjoy...
Swayam- Parties are meant to enjoy my love!

Putting one hand around her shoulder, he pecked her cheek and pulled her closer.
Sharon- Thankyou Swayam..
Swayam- For this trip right?
Sharon- Yeah. *leaning on him* I just felt...

She stopped in the track and stroke her head looking down.
Sharon- My chappals broke. I don't know why I changed my sandals!!

Swayam chuckled but stood stunned when she bent a bit, holding his arm, took out her chappals and sighed. She was about to take them with her when he took those from her, put them on ground... she was confused but bit her lips, smiling, when she found him taking out his footwears and as he shifted them beside hers.

Sharon- Areh tum...
Swayam- Sshh... chalo bas. We'll come back and take them...

They intertwined their hands; She again leaned on him and started to walk.

Sharon- Swayam... I felt like we are really just boyfriend girlfriend and not husband wife!
Swayam- Yeah... that's so true... it was happiness, right?
Sharon- Haan ji... And for everything n everything.. *kisses his hand; looking at him* I love you...
Swayam*placing palm on cheek*- Love you a lot Shar..

They resumed walking;
Sharon- Pata hai I feel ki this trip has made us more strong... umm.. Not strong but made us come closer to each other...
Swayam- If anyone of us would have a hesitation or anything as such this wouldn't have been possible.
Sharon- You saying... we have let ourselves come closer... haina?
Swayam*smile*- Hmm...
Sharon- After we reach Mumbai, hum aise quality time spend karenge na?
Swayam- Yes.. We've always been on the belief that happiness, love can be showed, shared in the mist of life! So why fear?
Sharon- Umm huh.. no fear just generally...
Swayam- Ohkay my love! Wanna walk back?
Sharon- Arey I am tired nah.. Can we sit on rocks for sometime???
Swayam- Fine chalo.

***
Both sat side by side when Simmi Nilesh came there..

Nilesh- Mast mausam hai yaar.
Swayam- H...
Sharon*interrupting*- Ho jaye ek ek ICE CREAM!!! Shorrie Swayu!!
Swayam- Shar... no ice cream.. Throat infection ho jayega.
Sharon- Arey to ice cream ke baad raat ko I'll take a medicine na..
Swayam- Par Sharon...
Simmi- Hey...Let's have yaar!
Nilesh- Abey thand mein hi to ice cream khane ka actual mazaa hai.
Sharon*pleading*- Pleasee...
Swayam*shrugging*- Okay okay.
Sharon*pout*- Nahi not so weird.. Smile wala yes!
Swayam*chuckle*- Achha baba...yes.
Sharon excitedly hugged him and he patted gently.

Swayam and Nilesh went to take the dessert.
They were back but found both ladies sitting on the stairs because on the rocks it would get uncomfortable for 4 to sit.

Nilesh went beside Simmi and gave her the cone whereas Swayam, who knew Sharon was tired, sat on the stair above the one on which she was sitting...She amusingly looked at him but then shifted back that her back was between his legs and his each foot lie beside her waist... She totally rested against the support of his legs.

Sharon- Ek hi cone? Tum nahi khaoge?
Swayam- No.. You have..
Sharon- Aisa hai to we'll share and you only feed me..
Simmi- Full on laziness..

Sharon chuckled and opened her mouth as Swayam fed her first.
Sharon- Yummy...

He made her have it few more times but then Sharon caught his hand and took it to his mouth and made him eat.

Sharon- Achhi hai na?
Swayam nodded while tasting it.
Sharon- Hmm.. To have it... Kyun drama kar rahe ho!!
Swayam- I..seriously don't want, you eat.
Sharon*irritated*- Huh. Okay. Kuch mat khao, I'll eat.

Simmi giggled and Nilesh elbowed Swayam.
Swayam- Shar...
Sharon- Ab khaane do na. Don't disturb.

He sighed nodding his head left right and kneeled infront of her!
Swayam- Stubborn you are!! Chalo give me.
Sharon- Wah.. Ab you won't get. Huh.

Swayam's facepalm made Sharon laugh lightly. She removed the hands from his face and indicated him to have a bite.
He held Sharon's hand and tasted only a bit of chocolate but, unknown to NiMmi, licked her thumb softly, making her clench her fingers n thumb. She blushed really hard as he gave a teasing smirk.

Swayam- Yum! Thanks Shar...
Simmi- Ohh now thanks n all.. Aisa achanak kya?? Huh??
Sharon- A..are chhod na Simmi.. Dekh my ice cream finished, your is melting.. Eat fast nah.
Nilesh- Sahi to keh rahi hai Sharon. Jaldi khao.

Sharon cleaned her hands with the tissue paper but also glared at Swayam when he indicated her about him removing the cream on her lips!

Keeping that romance aside, SwaRon stood up with NiMmi. They threw the waste in the dustbin and both the couples, hand in hand, carried on with the way back to the Resort.
***

Swayam changed to loose tracks with T Shirt and Sharon wore only a loose baby pink tunic (shirt).

There was a knock on the door and as decided by all earlier, Simmi Nilesh came.
Sharon- Yo come.

Nilesh sat with Swayam on the bed to enjoy watching the pictures they clicked. SimRon moved to another small room where the luggage was kept.
Sharon- Sim, I have chocolate cupcakes, muffins also... let's take them.
Simmi- Yeah. Sure! But when you bought?
Sharon- Abhi just half an hour before.
Simmi- Umm..off the topic I am saying, but you're looking too sexy! I mean..
Sharon*smile*- Haan bas bas. Thankyou. Long shirt hi to hai.
Simmi- Haan wahi madam, only that.. Tere hubby ko aur kya chahiye!
Sharon- Ahaan correction. Swayam is too different.. Agar I wear salwar n Kameez bhi na then also he would shower his love the same way he would do if I wear short.
Simmi- My my.. You both are so adorably perfect.
Sharon*smiles*- Chal ab bahar chale, nahi to they'll start their guessing.

***

Sharon offered the muffins; sat with blanket on her; All sat properly on the bed.

Simmi- Guys. Ek dusre ko pics bhej dena or better make a CD of this trip!
Swayam- CD will be apt...

They surfed through each and every picture, teased each other, laughed on some funny backgrounds, memorised few special moments.

Simmi- Mujhe to yahan se jaane ka mann hi nahi kar raha!!
Nilesh- Arey zyada hua to we'll shift here.
Simmi- Dreamy it is mahn. Everyday a new adventure... Hum yahin ruk jaate hain...
Nilesh- Woh sab baad mein sochna, abhi apne room mein chale???
Sharon- Abhi???
Simmi*getting up*- Ohh yeah. Bye Swayam, bye babes. Gn.
Nilesh- Kal subah milte hai...
Swayam- Okay yaar.

NiMmi left and Sharon locked their door.
As soon as she turned, Swayam scooped her in arms.

Swayam- Tired nah?
Sharon- Yes hubby. A lot. Ain't you?
Swayam- After seeing you my tiredness flew away..
Sharon*kissing his cheek*- Ab chalo na baba.
Swayam*teasing*- Impatient!!
Sharon- Dumbo. Kuch bhi.

Both lay on their sides, facing each other.

Swayam- Umm tell me one thing...that why are you so stubborn?
Sharon- Huh? What I did?
Swayam*teasing*- That ice cream time, first jab nahi khana tha tab khilaya phir gussa, phir asked for so denied and then again...
Sharon- Haan to!! Didn't you turned naughty? Huh.
Swayam- Seeing you now, that feeling again came...

She shut her eyelids as he rolled his fingers on her thigh... She, holding his jeans belt, shriveled her legs, but he grabbed them between his legs making her smile with red cheeks. She swallowed her breath as he reached till her trunk, caressing it. Before he could further move, she, moved to him, buried her face in the crook and initiated a deep cuddle... He left her legs loose, somehow pulled the quilt on themselves. He softly rubbed her ear taking it between thumb and forefinger...

Sharon*exhale*- Swa..yam...
Swayam*kissing hairs*- If voice could cast a spell.

Sharon kept smiling internally and both shared a nuzzling till sleep overcame them.

***
It was 5:05am, Luggage packing was finally done.

Both were checking the room for the last time.
Sharon- An hour left na?
Swayam- Yeah!
Sharon- Aqaba will be missed...
Swayam- Don't worry, I am sure after we get along with Angel na, she won't let us miss anything!
Sharon*laugh*- So true Angel's Daddy.
Swayam*wide smile*- By the way I really wanna say something to you...
Sharon- Haan say na.
Swayam- During the whole trip, at many times I had said you looking sexy, hot, pretty when you wore short dresses but Shar, seriously, I find you beautiful in every outfit.
Sharon- You're the best thing ever happened to me...I love you.

Saying this they hugged each other tightly yet smiling heartily.

***

They all reached the Airport;

Simmi- Thankyou yaar. Saath mein bohot mazaa kiya.
Nilesh- Swayam.. Thanks bhai.
Swayam- Bas karo yaar. Formality chhodo.
Sharon- Haan exactly. Keep your thanks with you. Ab milte hain Mumbai mein.
Simmi- Yes!!!

The four hugged each other and SwaRon left to the London's flight.

Simmi- Nil... jab bhi in dono ke saath time spend karti hun na, I always say how can the two be so childish yet so mature at the same time. And after this trip, I feel, they've grown so better...
Nilesh- Haan Simmi... hum bhi thoda inhe dekh dekh kar kuch seekh hi gaye hain..
Simmi*smiled*- Touchwood. I know Saamia will be just like them... SwaRon baby.
Nilesh- Hehe. Umm.. Hum apna luggage check karwa lete hain. Let's go.

She nodded; Both left.

***
Nextt post...

Edited by sakshibshah - 10 years ago
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So!! Howw was the chapter?
Won't ask much..just let me know your views in your commnts n through likes.

Even thankyou for liking/commenting on the "Swayam OS" I n Ritu wrote. thanks. 😳

Keep liking n commenting...
Twist n turn are gonna open up in coming chapters...! ❤️

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Love,
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Edited by -SwaRonWorksPm- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amzing update
It was an awsumm trip for both of them

Bechara swayam LOL


now waiting for nxt update...

thankz for Pm

update soon
Edited by glmorous_diva - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amzinggg update
so their trip ended on a gud note...it was an awsumm trip for both swaron n nimmi
their chemistry was superb as alwys...liked tht ice cream part
Bechara swayamm...so cute
now waiting for nxt update... as they were going bck n going to meet their lovely daughter!!!!
thankz for Pm
update soon
Edited by priya_sejwal - 10 years ago

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