Unconditional - part three updated, page 3 !

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#UNCONDITIONAL (1)

whoa! I'm nervous! It has been like AGES since I've written ANYTHING except sarcasm" I just couldn't stop myself from writing this. I will just hope, my writing is the same.

Lost touch, so please forgive for the silly mistakes if any.

******

It was so unfortunate that newbie Azan was genuinely a nice guy.

He was intelligent, funny and calm.

But randhir had to fish out reasons to hate him!

'Cmon! He isn't even that good looking! ' he groaned inwardly.

It had been two weeks since he had arrived and now randhir was scared.

Azan and Sanyukta were friends.

'Well, it is her nature! She makes friends quite easily! ' randhir blabbered to himself, trying to keep a check on his incredulous emotions and bizarre thoughts.

He just couldn't stand ANY guy hovering near her.

But did he have any rights on her now?

They both knew they loved each other, but there was no solution! What on earth was their relationship ? Enemy? Friends? Lovers?

As randhir tried to find his way out of the tangled maze his life was, he sipped onto some green tea, sitting on a bench in the basketball ground.

It was almost evening time.

He tried to take another sip but found out that the cup was empty.

He got up and sauntered towards the canteen for a refill.

******

He hummed a song as he was returning to his spot when he froze in his tracks.

Two people were playing basketball.

Azan and Sanyukta.

Randhir hid behind the pillar, noticing them from between the bars.

It was nothing to get apprehensive about.
It just seemed like two friends having a nice time.

His hands automatically balled into fists.
Why did she have to make guy friends?

He felt a pinch in his gut as she never told him that she liked playing basketball.

He saw her struggling with the ball .

She couldn't even basket one.

He saw her saggy face, though he knew it was just an exaggeration on her part, he wanted to go out there and pick her up so that she could basket.

He itched to remove the flicks of hair from her eyes.

Randhir groaned in exasperation.

She was distancing away .

Nowadays she behaved awkwardly around him.
Why?

Why was she not so free around him like before?

Though he knew the answers, he chose to ignore them.

She was looking so liberated.

He blinked a tear or two.

All of this got more sucking when she finally did a basket and azan hugged her in excitement.

This was the last straw.

How COULD she?
There they were, HUGGING in front of him.

He was all set to blow azans brains off when he felt a hand on his shoulder.

He jerked back without seeing who it was and trembled with anger.
No one was allowed to touch her, no one but him.

"RANDHIR. " he heard a stern voice, which he immediately recognized.

"Not now parth. "

" YES, RIGHT NOW. "

He wanted to punch him too.
But somehow he loved him, so he kept control.

He turned towards him with red eyes.

"THAT SON OF A BITCH AZAN. "

" Why? "

'" SEE, THEY'RE HUGGING."

"so?! " parth spoke as if it meant nothing.

" SO? HOW DARE SHE? ! DOESN'T SHE KNOW HOW GUYS ARE? AND SHE'S GIVING HIM WRONG SIGNALS! I GOTTA TELL HIM SHE'S TAKEN. "

" Taken? Are you guys in a relationship? " parth sounded cold.

Randhir stiffened for a second.

" N-no! But that doesn't mean ANYTHING! We know we love each other! Get that? She knows i love her! She knows! And GIVING ANY NAME TO OUR RELATIONSHIP won't change ANY of our feelings! Call us enemies if you will. I DONT HAVE TO BE HER BOYFRIEND TO EXERCISE MY RIGHTS ON HER. THEY'RE THERE .NO MATTER WHAT" he completed off in one breath.

" Impressive little speech. "

Randhir gasped in shock. Parth was never this cold towards him. He was being too sarcastic.

" What the -"

"Where was all this when you kissed ishika? "

Blood drained out of his face . He was pale, as if he had seen a ghost.

"HOW DARE YOU, YOU BLOODY -"

Randhir gripped his collar tight, baffled by his audacity. Though secretly, he was humiliated. He didn't know how to react so he chose the easy way out, HITTING.

Parth jerked him off in one swift movement and held a palm towards him, telling him to stop his nonsense.

" YOU CHEATED ON HER. DO YOU KNOW HOW IT FEELS? "

Randhir sucked in breath painfully. He knew parth was right. This was what he was avoiding.

"YOU ARE A SELFISH PERSON. YOU CANT STAND HER HUGGING SOMEBODY, WHEN YOU'RE NOT EVEN IN ANY BLOODY RELATIONSHIP. SHE WAS YOUR GIRLFRIEND RANDHIR. YOU ASSHOLE. SHE SAW YOU KISS A GIRL. SHE SAW HER BOYFRIEND KISS ANOTHER GIRL. "

Tears of helplessness were flowing down his cheeks.

" SHE LOVED YOU WITH EVERYTHING SHE HAD, AND YOU CHEATED ON HER FOR SOME f**kING REVENGE. YOU UNDESERVING bas***d. "

With that, parth punched him in his stomach.

It hit him hard, but randhir knew it was nothing as compared to what he had made sanyukta go through.

"YOU JUST KNOW HOW TO HIT PEOPLE, DID YOU EVEN SEE HER? SHE DIDNT EVEN RAISE HER HANDS WHEN AZAN HUGGED HER. SHE'S BEING LOYAL TO YOU, EVEN NOW, YOU JERK. "

Parth gave another blow, this time right on his chest.

" I haven't seen anybody love a person the way she loves you. "

"I -"

'"You didn't even think TWICE before you kissed another girl! "

" I LOVE HER. SHE KNOWS THAT, GO AWAY! " he screamed, not knowing what to say.

" I know you love her. But love is nothing without loyalty. She won't trust you ever, cause you are not worth it. Asshole" he repeated and went away.

*****

Okay, i understand, all this coming out of parth seems ironic enough. -_-
Kamina hain wo. '

But i had to use someone! and i guess, no one has such guts!

Love y'all '


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Part two - page 2
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woww!!! loved ...nxt prt asap
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Preetika...!!! OMG it has been so long...!!! I am so glad for this, I hope some track like this comes so we can Sandhir's feelings for each other...!! And please update Leap Year... Miss it and Update Soon..!!
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Im surprised you even remember mee!!! :O
And my story too =)

I promise to complete it after exams. =) :*
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Hey!!
Here I joined if to be friends with u but u never turned up 😭
I love ur work!!!

Plz update the next part soon...

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Omg u r here
God we missed u so much


It was perfect like alwz

I so loved it
Awww jeko rd
He's damn cute when he's angry

He's so possesive for sanyu

He cnt see her with anybody

His blood boiled seeing him with azaan so care free n enjoying

Parth gave him reality check
What rd did was wrong n he don't even realised it

Bt now he knows what he did was unforgettable


Cnt wait to see how he gains sanyu back

Updte soon

Pm me for sure

Love u
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Awwwsuuummm ts
plz plz plz cont it
i always wanted to happen smthin like this in tha show
I hv read ur another wrks too but as a silent reader sssooo sry fr tht frm nw onwards i will surely cmnt
but plz write more n cont this soon 😊
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So glad to see you back!! I used to love your fics...

This was amazing ... I actually wanted to see something like this on the show but I guess that seems like expecting too much!

Continue soon...
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Aww.. Thank you so very much <3 im glad to see so many of you remember me!! Love y'all :***
And thank yu =)
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#UNCONDITIONAL (2)

Randhir was devastated.

For a second, all this felt meaningless.

Everything seemed worthless.

He was feeling hollow from inside.
What blunder had he caused!

He felt so damn humiliated!

He was now scared to look at her in the eyes.

Randhir had just created a gap, no love could ever fill.

At least, he thought so.

******

He dragged himself to his room.
Thankfully, parth was not there, because right now, he had no guts to face any one.

He lifelessly went to his bed and lied down, starring at the fan.

His cell rang.

Randhir picked up to see the caller image of the most beautiful woman on earth. Sanyukta.

How would he speak to her? He kept staring at the image till she cut the call.
It rang again , but he didn't pick up.

He held the phone close to his heart and finally gave way to sleep amidst all the tears.


*******

He is standing near the mech lab.

Sanyukta and azan are working on the prototype car.
Suddenly, Sanyukta cuts her finger.

Azan holds her hand in reflex and sucks the blood to soothe the pain.

Sanyukta smiles at him.

They inch closer.

Randhir feels like its the end of the world for him.

He wants to give azan a big blow on the nose.
But he can't move.

Why can he not Move?

Azan has her arms around her waist now.

Randhir is feeling so helpless. He is shouting.

"SANYUKTA! "

but it's like, they both can't hear him.

Nobody can touch his sanyukta.

He is banging at the door but no one listens.

The glass cuts his vein but sanyukta doesn't care!

Randhir is crying now.

Finally their lips fuse and randhir is dead.

***

He woke up with a jerk, and realized that he had been really crying .

"Mother f**k. "

This was the WORST nightmare till now.

"What happened?! " parth asked him, looking concerned.

"nuh - nothing! " he wiped his tears and held his head.

Why did Sanyukta even love him? He wondered.

She should have been the last person on earth he should've hurt.
But he just broke her.

He had just experienced how she would've felt that time, just that hers would've been 1000 times more of what he did.

He had kissed ishika? DIDN'T HE?

He felt like screaming his lungs out .

Sanyukta deserved better. MUCH MUCH better than him. He decided.

*******

He felt a soft palm at his shoulder and he immediately knew it was her.
He had been purposefully avoiding her whole day.

"What's up with you haan? "

"nothing! " he smiled.

," i called you so many times yesterday! "

" umm.. I was not well na... So i was sleeping whole day "

"WHAT? AND YOU DIDN'T TELL ME??! " she kept her palm on his forehead, checking for fever.

No! No! He couldn't take this. He had to let her go.

It didn't matter if it meant he'd die without her!

*****

More to come ' <3

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