Unconditional - part three updated, page 3 ! - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Resss
ittu chotu sa update koi na me first yaaay 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
stop im telling you to stop writing cause your its completely AMAZING
NEXT PART ASAP
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsme update

Loved it
Finally rd realised his mistake
Now he's very guilty
He don't have strength to face sanyu

He's avoiding her

It was a dream

Now rd decided he will let her go
He thinks he don't deserve her



Cnt wait to see what hppns next

Update soon


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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cant wait for the nxt part...
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow amazing. pls do continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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UNCONDITIONAL (3)
****

" Randhir, "

" Hmm? "

" The whole dream team is organising a small welcome party! We treated azan ruthlessly when he had just come. So as a small gesture of apology and togetherness. " parth shrugged.

Randhir widned his eyes.

" Umm.. Does he know? "

" Of course Not. It's meant to be a surprise. "

" And Sanyukta? "

His heart thumped wildly.

Parth looked irritated now.

"What kind of stupid questions are you asking? I said WHOLE DREAM TEAM. AND BY THE WAY, it was her idea only. "

His heart sinked. Down, VERY down.

Why did she have the urge to make him feel special?

Why only she got such ideas?

" Hmm.. "

" Everyone's contributing ." parth spoke awkwardly. He thought randhir would naturally ask about it. But he didn't, so he had to.

" Don't. Its on me. The whole party. "

Parth looked flabbergasted.

******

He deliberately reached the party after two hours.

During those two hours, he had almost received 30 calls from sanyukta and twelve from parth.

He picked up none.

As he entered the venue, his eyes searched her. Only her.

And once again , he was shocked.

He saw her drinking, something what looked like wine, with azan.

No way! She had promised to him that she would only drink with him, or whenever he was around.

Randhir was not angry, he was only getting dejected every second.

Surely she had moved on now.

And why wouldn't she!

*****

Sanyukta still hadn't seen him.

He thought of making a hasty exit when he heard azan say,

" GUYS! I WANT YOUR ATTENTION PLEASE! "

Randhir went out of the door and stood there, against the wall.

" Sanyukta, i am head over heels in love with you, will you be my girlfriend? "

He heard the gasps of the guests.

Randhir's breath stuck in throat.

His head was feeling heavy , while his eyes were brimming with water.

This was it!

Unable to stand there anymore, he ran away from there as fast as his legs would take him.

******

<3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yep B-)
Haha.. Thankyu :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wait wait wait ...wht did i jst read?? ...azan proposing sanyukta ...such a cliff hanger u r ... awesome prt ...i wanna noe her response ...plz nxt prt SUPER FAST ...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsme update

Loved it


Poor rd feeling very bad for him
He's avoiding sanyu

Omg azaan proposed sanyu

Rd broken
He ran away

Cnt wait update soon

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey,read all d parts in a go ...
Woah !!! Dis was exactly wat i wanted in d show..
Rd ashamed of his misdeeds nd d way Parth confronted him was bang on..
Loved d way u described d scenario..
Dis line in Part3 ..He wasnt angry but felt dejected every second...Ahhh d feels !!
And a cliffie ???
Update soonish :)

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