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You were not kidding when you said we were thinking along the same lines. 😆 But having said that, mine was just a single spoon while yours was an entire dish 😉 Wow this was just beautiful! Sage, I cannot praise you enough for your writing! 👏 Each and every scene played before my eyes! I love how you unfolded the scene of him imagining her! Hearing her voice! Feeling her presence! Its heartbreaking yet beautiful! Truly very well written!
I have read your earlier comments so I knew that the army man was coming! 😆 But I throughly enjoyed it! Imagining Aahil as an army man gives me shivers! Sexy grieving man! ☺️ I can hear the intense Junoon play when he takes off his aviators! Angst and intensity screams out even without them meeting again!! ❤️
Also I love how you mentioned Badi Ammi, Rahat and Haya! He has accepted her family as his own! You captured Aahil's thoughts so well! It was wonderful yet so painful to read! 😭 Truly he cannot just die with grief! He needs to live again! But not like this! 🥺 He needs to reunite with Sanam! But until then, if this is what gives him strength and peace, so be it! The ending made my heart leap, but I know Aahil will be safe! Maybe he might meet Sanam who will nurse him back to health! Anyway its your story so you can take us on the journey! Lead the way! I am super excited to read more! Plz update soon!! Awesome job!! ⭐️
Anupamaa
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