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Hi all...🤗

to thread 4 of Paathshala 😳

I'm really happy stepping to

thread 4😳

Thank you soo soo much for your

response...😃

Love you all ❤️

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~INDEX~

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Thread 1

Thread 2

Thread 3

note (scroll down)

part 24 (scroll down)

TEASER

part 25 (scroll down)

IMP Note Pls chk

Note @pg50

Part 26 (scroll down)

part 27/28 (scroll down)

NOTE

Part 29

Part 30

Teaser

Part 31

Part 32

Part 33 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150351462?tid=4323272

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(banner by gunjar my sweet sis😊

love u dear)

prologue

there was a girl

all lost in her studies

little kiddish

little mature

and most of all very introvert

still she managed to have gem friends

what happens wen she is about to arranged married her TEACHER..??😲

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Sundari

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Important Note:

I am here; as i need your advices for further updates; as we are heading to maaneet wedding, i would like to know if you want to see something specific in their wedding; and also share that i am bad at writing rituals, so if you want to see them then i will add else skip the details. i will try to more focus on shadi fun and the emotions of maaneet as the undergo this phase of becoming eachother's spiritually.

all suggestions are welcome; pls do guide me 😊

...and i will be updating soon (hopefully😆😆)

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IMPORTANT: pls check my note in the post above.

Part 24

So it was just one day to her marriage; the thoughts gave her goose bumps, she sat there blushing on her bed as she woke up this morning and saw his good morning text, a romantic one.

"chand so gaya hai, mere chand k jaagne se pehle

Suraj ko bheja hai, ye paigam le kar

Haule se jagana usse, kahi sapna tut na jaye"

She read it again and again; didn't even have in herself to reply back, but had to! She replied back all the while typing, her hands were shaking...

"sapno k tutne ka abb koi darr nahi

Milar nayi haqiqat likhenge

Aapke saath se badhkar kuchh nahi"

In reply he sent back a smiley and they started their day finally.

Both the families were to shift in a marriage hall today where all the rituals will take place. All the guests were due to come today, some the very close ones had already come and she was tired meeting them all and getting squeezed in their hugs, finally she caught hold of her mom and warned her that no one will come to her room now, she needs to get ready soon if they don't want to be late for the rituals.

She came out after taking a bath and shouted immediately seeing some people in her room. Then she sighed after realizing it was just her friends, Pari, Disha and Shruti, and didn't wait another minute before starting to tease her.

Disha: god! U scarred us; aise shout kar rahi hai as if we are guys!!

Geet: tumlog jao bahr I need to dress up.

She said ignoring the comment, she knew trouble is up very soon specially with the devil Pari being here; latter in the night she had realized her prank and was hell angry now!

Pari: chal ab itna sharmane ka acting mat kar... we are all girls here.

Shruti: haan... aur zyada hai to take ur clothes inside the washroom.

Geet: parr inside they will get wet na...

She pouted.

Pari: oh... My innocent Geet, then what will you do after marriage? I mean you will share your room with your hubby na, tab aise towel me washroom se bahr aa jaogi?

Oh my... she was right; she needed to know how to change inside washroom without getting her clothes wet otherwise ho will she manage with Maan being in the same room? And she shied with the thought itself.

Her thoughts were interrupted with a push from 3 of them...

Disha: chalo jao ab... Aaj se practice start karo...

Now she was inside the washroom with pouty face and clothes in her hand. She somehow struggled with her clothes and came out all dressed up. She gave a stern look to them as her clothes were wet from different places, and all 3 gave her a sheepish smile. Before Geet could give them a good scolding her mom came inside the room in hurry...

Rano: Geet... ready ho gayi? Chalo beta, we are leaving now or rituals me late hoga, we need to start ur mehendi soon, it will take time to dry! Tum teeno bhi chalo.

She instructed and left in hurry; Pari followed her as she had something important to discuss 😆

While Shruti, Disha helped her in last minute packing.

Here @Maan's palce

Maan was hell frustrated with Rahul tailing him since morning; not even leaving him for a minute alone!

Maan: what the hell is your problem?

Finally he shouted not knowing what exactly he wanted.

Rahul: you! You are exactly my problem. Now would you pls lend me 10 mins from your busy schedule, so that I can tell you in detail about my problem(s).

Rahul snapped back equally, even he was frustrated as Maan was hell busy instructing everyone with the arrangements as well as managing calls from office.

Maan left an exasperated sigh.

Maan: fine speak!

Rahul composed himself... 'O god! How to say this? Where to start? Bhagwan kisi ko aise din na dikhaye; I have to teach my jiju how to romance with my sister... arghhh! I hate you Maan for the first time for being so pure at thoughts!' he controlled his emotions and spoke with a calm face.

Rahul: do you know something called as romance?

Maan gave him a confused look first then an angry glare.

Maan: what do you mean? Obviously I know.

Maan said with finality as a matter of fact. And Rahul looked at him amused.

Rahul: really?

Maan nodded; but he wasn't convinced.

Rahul: ok then tell me what do you call Geet?

At that Maan started to laugh holding his stomach, and Rahul frowned.

Rahul: what is there to laugh just answer me.

He glared at him but Maan continued to laugh while replying.

Maan: only you can ask such foolish questions. I call her Geet only, that's her name right!!

And Rahul hit his head! 'iska kuchh nahi ho sakta... detail me samjhana padega...uff!'

Rahul: that's not what I mean. I mean don't you call her something else like sweetheart, jaan or any other endearment.

He spoke fast this time not wanting to embarrass himself; Maan obviously was already turning red-cheeked! 'uff... even men look good while blushing; Rahul concluded!'

Rahul: dekh Maan... girls like to be called that way... its makes them kinda feel special... tum samajh rahe ho na... I know you love her, and even if she knows that still you need to express yourself, and love not spoken in words creates distances so you should be open with your partner and express your love verbally too sometimes...

He kept on ranting, and Maan was nodding his head listening to him like a good student.

Rahul: why have you become Noddy now? Speak something.

He said frustrated with Maan's nodding act.

Maan: what to say when love guru is in full mode giving me gyan; I am just listening patiently.

Rahul: what do you mean.

Maan: I don't mean anything.

Maan came in defence mode seeing Rahul understood his taunt.

Rahul: no! I will tell you; you mean I am babbling all rubbish here and wasting my and your precious time.

Maan smile sheepishly at him...

Maan: well sort of I mean the same.

That made Rahul quite furious... h'ere I am trying to help him; but this is MSK, who can get him out of his i-know-everything misconception'

Rahul: really... you know everything... then tell me how does a woman gets pregnant?

Maan's eyes popped out at his blunt question; even Rahul thought he went over-board in his frustration, but looking the shocked look in Maan's eyes he smirked; 'abb mazza aaega.. Sab pata hai na tumhe? Just answer this one'.

Rahul: bolo Maan.

He pushed him more; hurting his ego now!!

Back at Geet's house

Pari followed Rano down, calling out to her.

Pari: aunty... aunty! Ek important baat karni hai.

Rano: bolo beta!

And Pari narrated Rano about her worries.

Rano: toh abb kya Karen? Uss jhalli ko kaun samjhaega... I can't do that!

Pari: kaise baat kar rahe ho aunty; aapko hi samjahana padega.

Pari spoke worriedly; she didn't want to bang her head on wall taking the responsibility of teaching Geet about married relation; she had already seen the demo in the morning.

Rano: nahi nahi beta... mujhse nahi hoga... tum sab friends mil k usse samjha do na pls pls...

She pleaded; and Pari agreed half-heartedly not able to see aunty like that already she was hell busy with marriage preparations.

Same time at Khurrana house

Maan cleared his throat loud...

Maan: I know very well about it...

Rahul: hmm tell me

And he smirked.

Maan: see there are two types of reproductive cells, both are haploid; one of them is found in males which is called as sperm and the other is found is females called as egg cells; when they both fertilize they form a diploid cell known as zygote; that is nurtured inside a woman's womb for 9 months; that's the pregnancy period and finally the baby is delivered after 9 months. During pregnancy a woman faces may hormonal imbalances that may sometimes lead to complications but by taking proper precautions and regular advices from doctor we can avoid that.

Finally Maan finished his speech about pregnancy and Rahul's jaws hit the floor. He kept staring at Maan not blinking even once; and Maan smirked looking at his expressions and was too proud of his answers.

Rahul: what was all that.

Maan: it was answer to your question; you dumb man.

Maan said and smacked his head.

Maan: now stop your rant; we should settle in the marriage hall and start with rituals.

Rahul closed his mouth; and hit himself again on his own head for pulling such stunts with Maan! Then smiled... 'pata nahi kya hoga inn dono ka' he murmured and thought to leave the topic for now.

Both the families had settled with their guests in the marriage hall... it was a nice place with a big garden for reception and a building with apt no of rooms to accommodate guests.

The first ritual today was of haldi; first haldi would be applied to Maan and some of the haldi applied to Maan will be applied on Geet first as per the rituals jisse wo uske rang me rang jaye' then the fresh haldi will be applied on Geet.

Maan sat on a small stool; ready to be painted yellow, a smile all the while adored his lips; they still hadn't caught a glance of each other even after being under the same roof for more than an hour now. His friends surrounded him and some distant cousins whom he hardly knew, but his friends... They were big devils; upon that devils ka sardar; Rahul!

Adi: Maan... Should I call your articles? We can send them for verification; tumhari shadi ka audit tum hi karna 😆

Maan glared at his business partner-cum-friend; he had first time got a chance to tease Maan, will he let that go? Before Maan could retort Rahul poked his nose.

Rahul: chalo abb badi-badi aankhen mat dikhao; it won't work. I know you are also enjoying all this.

Maan too smiled and they all cheered.

One cousin: be careful with the gifts; or you will be taxed on that.

One of his cousins joked to which Maan immediately replied...

Maan: all gifts received in the event of marriage are exempt from income tax.

All had a good laugh on that; but how can Maan not speak for his first love. Then his whole body was smeared with haldi and some of it was taken out to be applied on Geet and Maan left to bath.

Precap: haldi on Geet; mehendi... I don't know actually will have to type n see 😆

PS: a big thanks and hugs 🤗 for waiting, this one is shorter than my usual updates, but that's all i could manage in one day.

will be regular with this one too, don't worry 😛

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Part 25

It was time for haldi to be put on Geet; well obviously she was no less red than a tomato... and the comments of all her friends and cousins were adding up to it. She couldn't even shut them this time like always as being the bride she was supposed to behave in a certain sophisticated way! But nevertheless it was a great feeling to get colored with yellow turmeric which carried the touch and feel of you better half, or soon to be better half. Her thoughts were on cloud nine and her face gave away all the required hint of it.

Pari: Geet! Abb thoda dreamworld se bahar aa jao and we can start your haldi!!

That brought her out of trance; she looked down to find haldi placed in two bowls, the smaller one had the one applied to Maan already and the bigger one was the fresh. The comments from all side started again and she smiled with her blush accepting it all today; after all these teasings will not return.

All smiled and the ritual started with Rano first applying haldi on Geet; followed by others, and with all these naughty girls after 10 minutes it looked more like holi than the haldi ceremony. Every face was painted in yellow; but the one glowing most definitely belonged to the bride.

Geet was now resting in her room a bit after bathing with milk to clean all the haldi; she was given only one hour to bath and rest before her mehendi starts, too less for a beautiful bride but she managed. She was about to close her eyes and rest for the last 15 minutes when hurricane hit her room, and as if in a row 8 people entered who were her all friends and cousins. She rolled her eyes, gaya mera resting time... baabji!' she pouted cutely looking up while all of them settled beside her on her bed.

Geet looked at them and knew there is no escape for her from this people so she just resigned to her fate n gave a fake smile...

Geet: so how come u all are here?

Shruti: don't be so surprised dear... Where else we will go? We will be here only with u all the time and helping you with everything.

She stressed the everything part, little did Geet understand what else it may mean nor did she wanted to; and her cell beeped with msg, name flashing Maan. But to her bad luck before she could pick one of her cousin jumped on it...

Cousin: woo... Jiju ka msg hai, itni bhi kya besabri?

Geet shied a bit but composed and spoke sternly.

Geet: give my phone back.

The girl got a bit scarred, it was not like they were very close so she immediately returned the phone; and Pari whistled on that!

Pari: wow... You are ready to rule baby! Husband ko bhi aise toes pe rakhogi with your stern voice.

That shut Geet immediately; uff... ye Pari na! She knows when to say what to shut me up.'

Geet: Pari dear... Come straight. Taunt karne ki zarurat nhi.

Pari eyed her to send others out; she knew the topic she wanted to discuss for that she needs Geet alone, as Geet will not be comfortable in front of others.

Geet got her sign and she turned to all others...

Geet: why don't you get started with your mehendi; it's getting late and with so many people around it sure will take time.

It was an indirect way to say leave her alone. Poor dulhann was not left to rest by anyone; and if relatives were less the msg from her fiance would be ready next moment; and then this mad Pari was also sitting on her head.

They started to leave room now, her cousins left and even her friends had to go for some work which left behind only Pari with Geet in the room.

Pari: thank god. All left me alone with you. I have something important to say and not getting a chance.

Geet: aisi kya baat karni hai, that u asked me to send all out?

Pari: haan meri Maa batati hu... Will u let me start now?

Geet: hmm...

Geet sat coolly in semi laid position on bed; while Pari was trying hard to think where to start the topic from.

Geet: will you speak! Or the great silence is your important baat?

Pari: haan na...

And an idea hit her head.

Pari: so Geet... Where are you guys going for honeymoon?

Geet gave a weird expression... is this her important baat?' but chose to ignore putting a fight.

Geet: I don't know... We didn't talk on that yet!

Pari: what?! How can be you so careless? Itni important baat discuss nahi ki.

Geet: chill babes... Waise I have heard somewhere "when couple is on honeymoon, the place doesn't matter!"

And Pari chokaed on water she was drinking!!

Pari: what! What did you just say?

She shrieked in horror! does this girl know what else that means?

Geet: I said exactly what u heard. Now is the enquiry commission over?

Pari: no! Achha tell me you know what couples do in honeymoon?

Geet: Pari yaar pehele shadi toh ho jane de! And how would I know? This the first time I am getting married na!

Pari: arre u didn't see in films kya...

Geet: haan right! Such things are shown in movies like taare zameen par and 3 idiots, after all that's what I watch.

She spoke sarcastically.

Pari: but 3 idiots had that kis* na...

Came her instant reply, and Geet hit her head, she started with her cribbing.

Geet: what! Tum ye sab gandi baat karne k liye..., for this u wanted me alone! Chi chi babaji kya zamana aa gaya hai. Friend ho k aise baatein karti hai, bachao apni bachhi ko.

And Pari held her ears.

Pari: Geet... Geet... stop!

And Geet stooped cribbing...

Pari: ye gandi baat nahi hai babes... its pre-marriage knowledge! And friends are only supposed to help on that.

She said proudly, to which Geet gave a blank look. pre-marriage knowledge??!'

The ambiance was beautiful with dim lights and sweet fragrance; Maan stood at a distance from Geet, both were staring right into each other's eyes which spoke of lot of passion. Then he started to walk towards her with predator steps till she was cornered to the wall... and in next second Geet closed her eyes as his hand came up to push her curls and tuck it behind her ears, while the other one naughtily rested on her waiste line teasing that one centimeter exposed buttery soft skin of hers... she was not yet done absorbing those feelings and his warm lips came down and intruded her territory... she gasped opening her mouth to take a deep breath which was no less than an opportunity for him, the next moment she felt his tongue playing with hers in a love dance. His hand at her waiste was now being more naughty, it had already slipped inside her shirt now slowly moving upwards and halted at her... while he kissed her deep, deeper... Mmmhh...' she moaned.

Pari: GEET... Geet!!!

Geet: huh... uhh!!

Pari: kaha kho gayi? We were watching this video.

Geet: hmm... mmm!

She hummed... she was in no condition to speak right now... such effect of that silly video and this stupid Pari; she atared to imagine herself with maan in that video! what all I started to think... chi chi babaji!'

Pari: oye hoye... do I see someone blushing...

Geet: pls na... don't tease me now!

She requested; her breath was still heavy...

Pari: ok ok... Achha pehle batao what was that couple doing in the video?

Geet: Pari...

Pari: nahi nahi... batana padega... bolo what would you call that!

Geet: "Mutual act of passion"

She spoke slowly, that was the only decent set of words she could give that act to! While Pari whistled!

Just then Rano entered the room and asked Geet to start with her mehendi as it will take much time to dry due to the rainy season. Geet left with her after instructing Pari...

Geet: you will be hosting the sangeet ceremony with Rahul bhaiya... pls co-ordinate with him.

Here at Maan's room.

Maan was sitting lost in deep thoughts... Or to say a fight (someone was missing heart n mind I think)

Mind: there is now relation between both of them

Heart: tum rehne do... What do you know about romance anyway? If Rahul is saying then there must be something.

Mind: haan as if you are the king of romance.

It said sarcastically and Maan was really pissed off... At the same time he saw Rahul standing there in his room giving weird expressions.

Rahul had come in to check if Maan was done with bathing and taking rest; but as he entered the room he saw Maan lost in deep thoughts, byu the expression he could guess trouble coming his way... god pls let him not think about the topic I am dreading... pls pls' he prayed mentally before breaking his thoughts.

Rahul: Maan why are u sitting like this?

Maan: I am thinking!

Rahul: thinking?? What is it?

Maan: hmm... I was thinking, what is the relation between romance and pregnancy?!

And Rahul choaked on his breath, he was way speechless didn't know if enlightening Maan about it or committing suicide which was a better option? But his misery didn't end here, he tried his luck once.

Rahul: but why are you thinking about that?

Maan: you are the sole reason of all this confusions; see at that time you were talking about romance, then you straight jumped into pregnancy, I didn't get the logic! Now tell me how are they related.

Rahul: what do you mean how are they related...? There is a physical relation between romance and pregnancy (gals don't get naughty na)

Rahul blurted in anger and then realised what could that mean... So he tried to do some damage control

Rahul: uh... Wo i mean... Yeah! If romance is more the chances to get pregnant are more.

He finished not knowing what else to say, it was way too embarrassing. But Maan seemed to convinced... 'Hash...!' Rahul sighed in relief and he was about to escape from the room when his next words came in like another bomb.

Maan: you mean to say pregnancy is directly proportional romance.

Said Maan; as that was that he could understand by the explanation and obviously the word 'physical relation'

Rahul: huh what???!!!

'By physical relation he understands that there is a physics equation between them? Arrghhh!!! God pls call me to you' he was mentally pulling his own hairs to have even brought the topic up in front of Maan.

Rahul: you know Maan... Wo... Now I have to go and practice for hosting your sangeet night... We better discuss this latter OK!

He made and excuse and rushed out. He vaguely heard Maan saying arrey... Rahul ruku; clear my confusuions first!' but he didn't wanted a heart attack at this age staying with Maan more and discussing this topic. Also he needed to do that as he was going to host Maaneet sangeet night with none other than miss Pari; as if Maan was any less, she will also eat his head. 'Geet k babaji... Saare pagal meri kismat me hi likhe hai?' he cribbed.

He was walking without looking and straightly banged on something... no someone; and she was about to fall but he held her. After both calmed their heartbeats they both realized whom they collided with!

Rahul: Pari! Who else could be the one walking without looking in front.

He taunted.

Pari: as if u gave a horn before colliding... even you were not looking in front; don't put all blames on me.

She bit back. The fight would have continued if it was other day; both realized they need to work together for now.

Rahul: anyway... let's keep fight for some other day... we cannot spoil the function in that.

She hummed in response and they sat together discussing and practicing.

After the discussing was over;

Pari: we can talk without fighting if we want.

She commented and he agreed with a smile.

It was time for mehendi now; at the mehendi hall, mehendi was being applied on Geet, 2 girls were busy one with her hand and other with her feet and Geet sat there smiling; she loved to apply mehendi since she was small, but this was special; her wedding mehendi will have the name of their love, it is also one of the 16 singar that a new bride does. She had always believed the sayings like the dark color of mehendi indicates how much your husband loves you.' She was shying secretly now, if someone saw her then endless teasing would start.

Cousin: achha Geet bata aur kaha kaha mehendi lagana hai.

It confused her... while Pari hit her head. can this girl not be quite; later Geet will eat my head only' she thought.

Geet: kaha means what? On my hands and feet where else.

Cousin 2: arre don't you want to apply on some secret places?

She said and winked. All others were hiding their smile; but Geet's reaction made them shut.

Geet laughed out loud and all looked her wide-eyed.

Cousin: why are you laughing.

Geet: you said na to apply mehendi on secret place?

She nodded.

Geet: what will be use of that, no one will be able to see it anyways.

She spoke bluntly not understanding their idea and prank; the smile on their faces was gone and they all left her in peace.

sometimes I wonder; ye sach me itni innocent hai, ya sabko pareshaan karne natak karti hai?' thought Pari; shaking her head.

Precap: OMG... Geet's mehendi didn't go dark, now how will Maan prove his love?

So... How did you like the unofficial paathshala kiss 😉 that happening in real is far away... so thought to give u all a trailor 😆

By the precap I think u can guess that a romantic confession is up in the next part! Stay tuned!

And all the new students here; welcome to Paathshala; I hope u are enjoying learning with Maaneet 😛

And do check my game of the week thread and participate; tuesday is the last date...

Game Week 2 - 18th to 24th March 2015

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Surprise... Surprise... Surprise... 😆

its a surprise for me too i suddenly got some free time today... and came up with this 😉

Part 26

The songs and dance continued till dusk; all the hands covered in mehendi and faces covered with smile. Geet's mehendi was all dried up, she had applied mustered oil so that it is removed easily from her hand, as she shouldn't wash it today so that the color goes dark.

Geet was sitting at the main hall, some dancers were dancing; while Pari was feeding her some snacks as she couldn't eat herself due to mehendi; but more than feeding Geet, Pari was eating herself. 😆

Geet: oye bhukkad! I am the dulhann not you. So concentrate on feeding me right now; you can eat to your hearts full later.

Geet snapped irritated.

Pari: jitna mil raha hai usme khush reh; surely you cannot do anything to me now with your mehendi clad hands.

She said and stuck her tongue out. She was just trying to tease Geet. Geet made a fake baby face and turned her head.

Pari: alle... mele baby ko gussa aaya?

She said in manaofying tone bringing another morsel to her mouth and Geet nodded cutely.

Pari: good! Ye sab nakhre na apni piyaji k liye bacha k rakho.

She said smirkingly and reversed her hand from Geet's mouth to her own and ate that morsel herself then burst out laughing.

Geet: PARI!! Tu ruk ja... dekh lungi mai tujhe.

Before Pari could actually manaofy her; she was called by someone to look into something.

Pari: ab muh phula k mat baithna; we will continue fighting later but for now smile ok? Mai aati hu!

She said and ran making Geet smile to herself.

A few moments later Rano came and helped Geet remove the dried up mehendi from her hands; while she was doing that her cell beeped and all her attention turned to it thinking it was Maan. She was getting very restless to get her hands on her cell so Rano hurriedly removed all the mehendi from her hands and feet and instructed her to go to her room and rest. Geet nodded and quickly rushed to her room with her cell texting Maan.

Geet was lying on the bed in her room still texting Maan, very busy to notice when Rano came in her room to check on her; the stern voice of her mom brought her back.

Rano: GEET... Ye kya tareeka hai? Thik se baitho.

She spoke sternly, actually Geet was carelessly lying in bed, her dress little disheveled and so was her hairs; 'itni Badi ho gai ye Ladki, shadi k din bhi koi hosh nahi hai! Aise koi baithta hai kya? Kab kon Milne aa jaye aur aise dekh le? Uff aajkl k bachhe kuch sochte, samajhte nahi hai!'

She kept murmuring and Geet pouted.

But on closer look; her mom was not wrong too; she is dulhann and anyone can come anytime to meet her, she needs to be little presentable. 'Ye sab na Maan k wajah se hua hai; he makes me forget everything' she cribbed and slowly got up to hug her mom.

Geet: sorry mamma... Abse aisa nahi hoga. Promise.

She pinched her throat and Rano smiled at her. Geet did a happy dance mentally seeing her smile.

Geet: waise sari galti meri nahi hai. See ur damad; wo mujhe pareshaan karte hai, how am I to think all these when he is in my mind.

Oops she bit her tongue for speaking more than required and Rano smacked her head.

Rano: chal badmash.

Achha ab mai chalti hu thoda kaam hai.

She started to leave but Geet held her hand.

Rano: kya hua beta?

She turned and got shock of life to see tears in eyes of her princess. She sat beside her and wiped her eyes immediately...

Rano: sshh... sshh... Kya hua ro kyu rahi hai? Jhagda hua kya Maan beta se?

She asked worried, to which Geet made an irritated look and nodded in NO

Rano: toh firr? Kya hua bata toh mujhe!

And suddenly Geet hugged her hard.

Geet: mumma... Mumma

She sobbed hard making Rano worried. After few moments only she realized why she might be crying, she lifted her hand and started to caressed Geet's hairs softly...

Geet: mujhe... mm... mujhe aapko chod k nahi jana.

She sobbed in her mother's arms; while Rano kept her close to her chest. Tears threatened to fall from her eyes too, she controlled with great difficulty.

Geet: nahi jana mumma... Pls.

Geet repeated and snuggled to her mom more if that was possible. Few drops fell from Rano's eyes too, for how long can she hold back; it's the most emotional phase of a woman's life.

They stayed in hug for some time calming themselves then Rano gently parted her. She cupped her face and kissed her forehead.

Rano: aisa nahi kehte bacha... Ye toh duniya ki reet hai. Betiyon ko toh ek din Jana hi padta hai; hum sach se bhag nahi sakte na?

Geet nodded in no while tears still kept falling... Rano wiped them again.

Rano: meri rani beti hai na? Aise nahi rote, waise bhi tum kaha dur ja rahi ho, issi sheher me ho! Aur Avantika ji kitni achhi hai tumhe kitna pyar karti hai, dekhna tumhe meri aur tumhare papa ki yaad bhi nahi aaegi. Aur Maan beta toh kitna dhyan rakhte hai tumhara; fir bhi aise ro rahi ho.

Rano said choaking; it is not easy to console Geet when she herself is so emotionally charged about sending her daughter away to a new house all alone.

But Geet was nowhere to calm down, she kept sobbing clinging to her mom while she was saying soothing words to her.

Same time two persons were standing outside seeing the scene; they didn't dare to come in, lest they get weak and started to cry too; it was Mr. Handa and Yash. Rano's eyes met with her husband, silent message passed between them to make her calm; he quickly removed the water droplet that had formed at the corners of his eyes and turned to see Yash there already crying, he hugged his son.

Rano was all the way more emotional seeing all ready to cry buckets out. She saw that Geet was also little sober now as her cries had reduced she just kept clinging to her. A plan formed in the mind of coolest mom immediately, she whispered to Geet.

Rano: Geet aise nahi karte beta. Agar aisa hai toh mai tumhare papa se keh deti hoon, shadi hi cancel kar denge! Firr tumhe kahi jaana nahi padega!

At that there was silence for a moment and then...! Geet suddenly separated from her mom and wiped her tears fast... WHATT! Shadi cancel? No no... aisa nahi ho sakta!! Here I can't wait for shadi and the nature is conspiring otherwise!' she thought, it's you only' said her inner voice sarcastically and she shook her head hard in NO! The other three were seeing the change in her expressions with those two words, and having hard time to control their laughter.

Geet was finally done with making her face clean off her tears; she looked up to her mom

Geet: nahi nahi mumma... mai kaha ro rahi hu... dekho! See ek bhi aasu nahi hai. Papa ko mat bolo!! What if he thought something bad about avntika aunty or Maan! Nahi nahi...!

And she continued with her rant of all that she thought in those two minutes while Rano was about to burst out laughing; Mr. Handa signaled her not to break the bubble and he came inside the room with straight face.

Mr. Handa: Rano... Ye kya ho raha hai yaha?

He then turned towards Geet.

Mr. Handa: Geet...?

And before he could speak a word Geet jumped in...

Geet: kuchh nahi papa... mai aur mummy toh bas aise hi baat kar rahe thhe...

N she gave an extra-broad fake smile; but her mom was all set to cancel her wedding today kya dushmani hai mujhse?' she cribbed.

Rano: arre kaise kuchh nahi... ye aapki ladli ro rahi hai; kehti hai aapko chhod k nahi jana...

Mr. Handa: arre toh isme rone ka kya hai hum shadi...

He stopped; making Geet's heartbeats high... no babaji pls.. Shadi cancel nahi... plsplspls' she prayed like hundred times in that 2 seconds with eyes closed tight. Her breath stopped in next second as her dad continued...

Mr. Handa: hum Maan ko kahenge ki wo yaha shift ho jaye...

She opened her eyes instantly with a wide smile and then frowned immediately; as all were laughing on her, mummy-papa toh thik hai but her brother joined too laughing like an idiot.

Yash: dad... seriously! I can't believe ki iski shadi hone wali hai... such a cry baby; bechare mere jiju, fass gaye...

He spoke between his laughter... and Geet stuck her tongue out at him to which he gave a thumbs down; she immediately looked at her papa with baby face...

Mr. Handa: bass... abb koi kuchh nahi kahega meri chiiriya ko...

He spoke with finality and ruffled her hairs. He would call her "chiriya" a bird; whenever there will be talks of her marriage, meaning she will leave his house and fly away to her new world; and that would make get him way too emotional. Geet knew that so she tried to lighten the mood...

Geet: haan aur iss bilav ko bolo yaha se jaane!

She snapped at her bro; she would always call him "bilav" means a cat, whenever her papa calls her chiriya.

Yash shook her head and all of them joined in a family hug.

Later, Rano left Geet alone and asked her to sleep for a while.

As she was left alone she though how she made fool of herself and all were laughing on her... but then love does that to you! How can she not react when her shadi was in danger; she blushed thinking how much maan will make fun of her when she will tell him all that. She hid her face in pillow and slept with a smile.

Few hours later... @Geet's room

Geet had called her mom; and she had come running thinking there was a problem. But Geet's so-called problem made her frustrated.

Geet: mumma kuchh khane ka de do pls... Bahut bhook lagi hai!

Geet cribbed cutely.

Rano: abhi toh tumne nashta kiya na, i saw Pari tumhe khila rahi thi.

She said frustrated; already her mind was diving in several parts supervising all works, and here this girl was behaving like it was any other normal day.

Geet: oh pls mumma aap jaanti ho apni bhukkad Pari ko; khud kha li sab mujhe kuchh nahi khilaya...

Rano: hayye rabba ye aajkal ki ladkiyan bhi na... Humare zamane me toh shadi k samay sab bhuk-pyas marr jati thi... Issse pata nahi itni bhook kyu lagti hai...

Rano cribbed making Geet pout;

"Kyu nazar laga rahi hai meri bachhi k khane pe Ranoji"

They both turned to find a smiling Avantika at the door.

Rano: arre Avantikaji aap... Aaiya na ander.

Rano welcomed her in and eyes Geet to sit properly in front of her sasu-ma; Geet straightened up immediately.

Avanitka moved in and someone followed her. She introduced her also...

Avantika: aiiye na bhabhi ander...

Ye Maan ki mamiji hai; meri bhabhi. Aaj hi aayi hai shadi k liye, bahu se milna chahti thi.

She introduced mamji and tuned to her now...

Avantika: aur bhabhi ye Ranoji hai Geet ki mummy aur ye Geet hai; aapki bahu!

Rano said namaste bhenji' and Geet was also about to say namaste auntiji' when her eyes fell on her sasu-ma who was signaling her to touch feet; she was experienced in reading the signals department by now, she immediately bent and took blessings of mamiji...

Mamji: jeeti raho beti... Khoob khush raho

She too blessed her and they sat; Rano left the room in pretext of work, she wanted to leave Geet alone with her in-laws so that she knows how to handle "relatives".

Geet sat with Avantika and mamji and they had some random chats initially... it was getting comfortable slowly except some comments like bahu toh sanskari dhundi hai Avantika' and all. Avantika was hesitant as mamiji strongly recommended her brother's daughter for Maan; but was clear NO on her reason for which is still not known to anyone. Then suddenly mamiji exclaimed...

Mamiji: yeh kya... bahu ki mehendi toh peeli padi hai. Thoda bhi rang nahi chadha..

She spoke pulling one of Geet's hand suddenly that for a moment Geet thought she would fall! Both Geet and Avantika were stunned!

Even Geet hadn't noticed her mehendi yet; and it was so highly disappointing that a tear or two might fall from her eyes she feared but forced a smile.

Avantika pulled other hand of Geet and closely examined; she too was disappointed to see the color as orangish... still couldn't show in front of mamiji...

Avantika: kuchh nahi hota kal tak rach jaegi bass haath suna nahi dikhna chahiye...

She tried to reason with a forced smile, she had seen Geet's face too and could predict her plight. But mamiji had got a good chance it seemed. She continued without thinking...

Mamiji: kaisi baat kar rahi ho Avantika...? Mehendi ka rang nahi chadhne ka matlab jaanti ho na? Pati ka pyar nahi milega... tumne Maan beta ko puchha toh than a shadi pakki karne se pehle? Ya...

That was enough to bring tears to Geet's eyes... She lowered her head not to show it. But it made Avantika's temper rise up nobody makes my children cry' she thought but couldn't have said something harsh too...

Avantika: kya bhabhi aap itni modern ho k aise baatein karti hai?

That "modern" word did its work; she knew how much her bahbhi liked to be called modern.

Avantika: aur mehendi k rang se kuchh prove nahi hota; mere Maan-Geet ka oyar toh aap dekh hi lengi.

She spoke looking at Geet like assuring her and also it was clear but polite warning to her. And they both left Geet alone after few more minutes...

As she was left alone the only thing that kept echoing in her mind was mamiji's words... She gave a look at her hand the rubbed it together, then ran to find some oil and poured half of the bottle and rubbed it in her mehendi, still no result. She sat thud on her bed and tears stared to fall now uncontrollably from her deer eyes.

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Part 27

In a short span of 20 minutes everyone in Geet's floor knew her mehendi didn't go dark and now the bride was crying her eyes out. Some called it a childish act while others sympathized; but only few could really understand how she actually felt! She was still alone in her room sulking not opening the door for anyone.

Rano: Geet darwaza kholo beta.

She tried again; it had been 20 minutes her baby was crying all alone for silly reasons and she was here just waiting for her to open the door, she felt too helpless and herself like crying; after all was such an important day for her princess.

Geet: mumma mujhe kissi se baat nahi karni.

Came her teary voice; Rano felt very bad, and immediately summoned her friends so that they can also try to make her calm. But Geet was more upset than they thought, and didn't even open door for her friends including Pari.

Pari was hell frustrated not being able to talk Geet out of her state and was moving all lost that she didn't realize when she banged on a hard frame.

Rahul: woo woo... Easy madam, ye toofan ki tarah kaha ja rahi ho?

She was about to retort, but then she had a bigger problem to solve right now!

Pari: you know what... Just forget it. You can't do anything other than acting Mr. Cool.

Oops... That's hurts the male ego badly!

Rahul: really? Tell me what is it then? I accept the challenge.

Pari: ja kar dekho... Aapki behen kop-bhavan me baithi hai muh phula k, because her mehendi didn't go dark n now she thinks Maan Jiju doesn't love her.

Rahul's head spinned hearing her talks and Geet's logic. He kept gaping at her wide-mouthed.

Pari: kya hua? Bolti band ho gai kya Mr. Cool ki? Kaha tha Maine you can't do anything.

Rahul: OK I admit I cannot convince Geet on that but tell me anything else and I assure you I will do that.

Pari: fine then. Now only one person can calm and convince Geet and that is Maan Jiju, you have to make them meet without elders noticing.

Rahul: what?!!!

Are you mad or something. They are not supposed to meet after haldi till marriage is done. If anyone knows then I will be dead.

Pari: bass ho gaya? Sab hawa nikal gayi kya? I knew it you can't do it. You men can only boast your ego and zero at getting any work done.
And you are heartless too... Go and see how badly she is crying. Khud ko bada bhai kehna easy hai kuchh kar k dikhao tab toh prove hoga na...

And she continued endless, and sunaofied him big time till his ears were almost about to bleed; with no other option he pressed his hand on her mouth to stop her...

Rahul: chup... Bilkul chup
I will do that OK?

He spoke looking at her eyes straight, but was unable to take them away; their gaze locked and the intensity was high. Only when someone came looking for Pari they parted feeling embarrassed. But someone recovered fast.

Pari: you have 20 minutes otherwise you lose and I will have to think on something.

She went off with a wink; challenging him and teasing him simultaneously.

Abb toh izzat ka sawal hai Rahul, dude you can't lose in front of that bak-bak queen; have to do something, think fast. After some thoughts he finally chalked out on a plan about what to do.

Rahul straightly went to Maan's room and pulled him to the back of the marriage hall. Maan kept on asking where he was taking him but Rahul didn't open his mouth until they reached the place just below the window to Geet's room. He called someone and a person came with temporary wooden stairs. Rahul left a long breadth, now the actual task begins.

Maan: if the suspense film is over, can I now know what is happening around here; his highness?

Rahul: hmm...

Maan: hmm what? Shoot!

Rahul: this is stairs,

He pointed at stairs showing Maan.

Maan: I can see that.

Rahul: that is window...

He pointed upwards towards window this time and Maan glared at him hard.

Maan: what exactly is the matter, I'm asking.

Rahul closed his eyes hearing his loud and stern voice and slowly spoke.

Rahul: you have to climb this and reach Geet's room to manaofy her, she is crying as her mehendi didn't go dark.

Maan: Whattt!!

Maan's eyes popped out hearing the first half of his sentence; he will do what? Window crash his would-be wife's room, but why? Wait! She is crying? How come she didn't tell me and everyone else seems to know about the same.

Rahul: Maan Maan!

Rahul shook him out of his thoughts, "go she is crying uncontrollable." He said making as innocent face as possible so that the auditor inside Maan doesn't wake up and start questioning on anything and everything.

Maan: aahhnmmm! And why do I have go from window can you tell me exactly, I thought doors are meant to enter and exit a room!

Gayi bhains pani me'; that was exactly the question Rahul was fearing. Knowing Maan, he would never disobey the rituals and elders words, but this was an emergency can't he once understand... grrr!

Rahul: woo... woo... Haan! Geet is not opening the door for anyone na... so we have only this window as last option. You go up and I will hold it so that you don't fall.

Though Maan was not satisfied and he gave a suspicious look to Rahul, still he had to agree as there his love was crying uncontrollable and here he is standing firing questions at the one trying to help him.

Maan: thanks yaar...

Rahul: ja ab jaldi!

Maan: hmm...

He started to climb up while Rahul held that stairs in place for safety.

Slowly, step-by-step, first right leg up then the left one, look up, don't look down; keeping all this precautions in mind finally he reached the destination but the door seemed to be closed? He shouted back...

Maan: Rahulll! Ye window closed hai.

Rahul: push kar k dekho; it must be opened.

Inside he was praying for it to be open or else Maan will fry him. Seems like his prayers were answered, Maan disappeared inside the room and he sighed in relief.

Rahul: hash... Abb uss Pari ki bachchi ko dekhta hu; zyada smart bann rahi thi; Rahul se panga! But I have to distract all others from Geet, if they kept sticking to the door they may hear Maan inside. And he ran to get the works done.

Inside Geet's room...

Maan entered inside to find her lying on the bed, he head was dug in pillow and the whole of the pillow cover was soaked in tears. His heart cringed to see her state but he felt angry for her childish behavior. That was not a big matter that she was shedding her pearls like that.

"Geet"

He called her softly, not to startle her but got no response; so he moved towards her and shook her a bit from her shoulders calling out her name again, a little louder this time.

"GEET"

She jerked up feeling the touch and hearing his voice in her room.

Rahul reached in front of Geet's closed room, many guests surrounded it along with Rano, and her friends but Geet was not paying any heed to their request to open door.

Rahul: ye aap log kya kar rahe hai, aunty please aap toh jaanti ho Geet ka mood abhi thoda kharab hai bas, usko thodi der akele chhod dete hai thik ho jaegi!

He tried to convince them sweetly secretly praying and eyed Pari to help him.

Rano: parr beta...

Pari: aunty wo thik keh rahe hai, mai hu na; aap jaiye aapko kitna kaam hai, tension nahi lijiye mai dekh lungi uske mood ko.

Rano: thik hai, ab tum dono ho toh meri chinta kam ho gai, parr uss pagli ko samjhao aise koi apna mood kharab karta hai kya apne special day me?

She sighed and decided to give it a break; also she took the guests away with her as they were gossiping about it though that's not what bothered her more than the sadness of her daughter which was the main concern; also she kept the matter out of reach of her husband's ears for she knew his low level of patience at such matters.

Rahul came near Pari and smirked flaunting his win.

Rahul: so Ms. I-am-the-best, you have anything more to say now?

But he was surprised to see her sweet smile.

Pari: well to be honest; I was sure you can do it while I can't and thus I tried reverse psychology, and it worked. Indeed good job done, I am impressed!

With that said, she left from there leaving him in thoughts about her smartness, thoughtfulness as well as honesty; not forgetting to mention, he was himself highly impressed.

It was unexpected for her to find him there and she was so startled that she thought it was a figment of her imagination, but then she did feel that tap on her shoulder.

Geet: aap? Aap yaha kya kar rahe hai?

He took her by a surprise when he came forward without any words, his right hand framed her face hold her left cheek while the other wound around her waist to give a slight pull making the distance between to reduce.

He caressed her cheek so tenderly that she almost felt dizzy, as the hair strand lying there carelessly was tucked behind her ear, only then she came to sense a bit and immediately gave a gentle push in order to reduce the nostalgic closeness.

He came back to the senses and finally realized the purpose for which he was here, also he blushed with the thought of getting carried away; not his mistake though when she looked breath taking after the turmeric showing its effect on her complexion!

There may be leisure later to admire the beauty of his lady, right now the task in hand was to make her happy and take her worries away.

Maan: ye kya haal banaya hai Geet? Is this immature behavior expected out of you?

He spoke in the most ordering, teacher-like manner scolding his student for a silly mistake made on final exam answer sheet. But the effect it had on the other end was beyond repair; it struck to her like a big blow and she couldn't handle his careless attitude towards her feelings.

She turned back; look at him with fire in eyes that he almost gulped his saliva seeing her red in anger eyes, the reason for which he could hardly comprehend. She with long strides started moving towards him and stood right in front of him holding him by his collar she almost shouted...

Geet: how dare you Mr. Maan Singh Khurrana! How dare you call my fears and insecurities as childish behavior?

Did you once try to know if they ever existed?

Did you ever say what you feel about me in words, forget that you didn't even reply to my confession, and just let it pass! Do you know how that feels when your love is not reciprocated, do you?

Do you know what it means to me if henna in my hands leave a dark color or not, all way of life I have been believing it to be a proof of partner's love; it does mean to someone like me who is not as logical and practical as you are. And if you do not wish to entertain such behavior from me thinking it to be childish, then why are you here for anyways? Go away and enjoy!

After letting out all her frustrations, which she didn't even know if they existed she left him and turned away from him so to hide her face as tears threatened to fall, and equally waiting for a reply from him.

The moments that followed passed in silence, as both were trying to calm their heartbeats, she from the outburst and him from her close proximity, all the while she was yelling at him he kept his eyes closed as her scent made it difficult to breathe; but he did hear all that she said, and realized how not confessing his love to her had been her worry and this small incident with spices just added to the frustration.

He smiled inwardly knowing he was heading to the most embarrassing moment of his life when he would finally open the secret of his love to her, and almost laughed to imagine her expressions.

She was facing the other side waiting for him to

Say something, but for a long time he didn't she turned...

Geet: ab chup kyu khade hain? Jaiye...

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Part 28

Geet: ab chup kyu khade hain? Jaiye...

And words froze in her mouth as she found him right in front of her sitting on his one knee, making her high on anticipation and almost ready to faint.

The same moment he remarked.

Maan: hear me out fully, will give you better chances to faint.

Oh dear! Did he read her mind? Anyways she waited for him to start and saw him take a deep breath in, then he lifted his head up and locked her gaze with his and at that moment his eyes gave away all that was in way to his lips.

Maan: Geet! I never thought I will ever fall in love, for the person I was, too boring and a tough one at work! But then love has its own way, and this I came to believe only after I saw you.

Her breath hitched as he started to pour his heart out, she for a moment stopped to breathe, what did that "I saw you" doing there? They were arranged to marry! Must be...

She kept contemplating when he continued further...

Maan: yes it is not that I love from yesterday or when our marriage got fixed or when the proposal came up, but the very time you entered my classroom that day, same time you entered my heart.

Her eyes popped out like saucer balls and mouth in O shape, not knowing what to make out of it. She kept hearing further...

Maan: but that was just the start, I knew not of love then! thus had tried to ignore the feeling and the reason of same, which happened to be you.

And she recalled how he had been trying hard to ignore her, not making it evident though and her eyes widen more in realization.

Maan: hmm... But there's a limit to everything, you must have forgotten the little act you put up with that boy to help him propose your friend, but I can never forget that moment as that was the moment of realization to me, the moment had taken away my breath and that didn't come back until the next day when I discovered that it was all a drama put up! It made me so happy that no one can imagine the extent of that.

She gasped loudly, reliving those moments, how he had witnessed the scene and scolded them, yet hiding his feelings in the mask of reputation; then the next day, his concern when he had questioned her on the same! Oh lord!! She had never imagined this to be the matter behind; and even if she would have, it would only feel wrong that time, while now it feels so good so divine, his love was as pure as his thoughts and he himself.

Tears build up in her eyes to realize the depth and purity of his feelings.

He immediately stood up and wiped the pearls away from her eyes, thinking she felt otherwise and misunderstood him

Maan: Geet, its nothing like you think; see it was just not in my control what I felt, but it was never in my mind to make you involve in things other than studies and spoil your career; and so I never approached...

He was silenced by a big force, and that was her body slammed to his in a tight eternal hug; she threw herself to him with such intensity that he almost stumbled, but the wall at the back gave support and he reciprocated her hug with same intensity.

He was glad she understood and accepted his feelings so well that he never had to explain or give reasons what so ever! That was a bond that was built, slowly brick by brick with little efforts on both sides.

All the stupid thoughts from the evening had now left her mind and only his words reverberated there giving her the feeling of being the luckiest girl in the whole world, little could she contain her emotions and thus pressed herself closer to him hiding her face in his chest as he smoother her back gently and murmured 'I love u' in her ears. They stayed long in the hug.

Gently they broke off, and he settled her hair and caressed her cheeks, then gently leaned in and kissed her eyes sucking away the pearls that threatened to fall, slowly moving down kissed her cheeks removing all the traces of the tears from there and she went redder every moment, he hand came to rest on his shoulder in order to support herself and that's when his attention went there. He gently pulled it to himself and admired the design for some time, then took it to his lips and kissed the back of her palm making her whole body tingle with sensations unknown. She blushed harder if possible and he smiled admiring her blush, and then teased her

Maan: do we still need to get this darker to prove my love to you?

She gave an annoyed look, and then a challenging one and mouthed a yes! Maan looked at her wide eyed while she cracked out seeing his expression; he was about to pull her to him again which would have resulted to another hug when the there was a knock at door.

They immediately separated in embarrassment, and next second her eyes widened in horror! OMG!! She was in room with her fiancee all alone when they are not allowed to meet till all the rituals are finished, what if someone finds out about this and that knock, who has come? She panicked...

Geet: Maan aap... haan aap na yaha chhup jaiye.

She pushed him and tried to shove him under the bed, but then pulled immediately

Geet: nahi nahi... yaha nahi! Haan waha

This time she tried to hide him behind the curtain of the window, but again dropped the idea

Geet: nahi yaha bhi nahi... haan bathroom me!

She tried to pull him again when he held her hand tightly and stopped both their movements and put his finger on her lips to queiten her.

Maan: chup... bilkul chup!

She kept looking at his eyes, locked in his intense gaze when again a knock disturbed them and the voice of a frustrated Rahul could be heard.

Rahul: darwaza kholo Geet.

She panicked more...

Geet: Rahul bhaiya... oh no! what will he think if he finds you here? Aap yaha kyu aaye?

She had almost reduced to tears now and gave him an accusing look, while Maan mentally hit his head seeing her antics; just a moment before she was so over-whelmed and now accusing him, Women are such a pain!

"Maan"

Came a voice from outside and Maan rushed to the door immediately opening it before she could eat his head more.

Rahul: aisa kya karr rahe ho that it took so long to open the damn door.

He barked as soon as he entered and closed the door again behind to not make anyone suspicious of Maan's presence there. red color flared her cheeks with his comment and Maan blushed equally, and Rahul shook his head at their antics, and mentally making note of teasing Maan later he quickly handed him something from his pocket and left saying,

Rahul: make it fast; I'll be waiting for you downstairs.

Maan nodded and he left the room leaving them alone again. She came to him this time with a stern expression,

Geet: so Rahul bhaiiya knew about you being here?

She demanded answer and he slightly nodded.

Geet: couldn't you have told me before?

She complained cutely and he pulled her again from her waist and opened that small bottle that Rahul came to give him.

Geet: ye kya hai?

She asked as he opened the bottle and strong smell hit her nostrils

Maan: sshhh!

He silenced her and quickly poured few drops of oil and applied to her hand fully, then made her sit and applied to the mehendi at her feet too, she tried to protest as she felt very shy and ticklish when his hands reached up till her knees till where the mehendi was applied but was silenced again, this time with his big eyes.

Once done he sat beside her, and she leaned on his shoulder holding her by his arm.

Geet: abb toh bataiye, what oil is that?

Maan: hmm... eucalyptus oil (nilgiri ka tel) hai, it is known for making mehendi dark.

She looked surprised at the effect her small wish of having dark mehendi had on him; eucalyptus oil was hard to get at the place they lived but still he managed that somehow for her, and unknowingly she bent ahead placing her rosy lips on his rough cheek, a kiss of appreciation and acknowledgment of his love and care. He was stunned at her boldness and immediately looked at her face to find her flushed face, but along with that it had deep love and contentment to have his love, in reciprocation he kissed her forehead slightly conveying silently how much happiness she gives him with her mere presence in his life.

Though it was hard, but they had to part; just a matter of 2 more days and then nothing can separate them as they will be tied together in a knot so strong and sacred called marriage.

It was difficult for Geet to sleep that night, with the new found information of his feelings was her. Every next second she felt like standing up on bed and dancing crazily celebrating her luck. Some say love is complicated, but her babaji had been generous enough that her love was strong and simple and would soon be stamped on society with their marriage. She laid on bed most part of the night dreaming with open eyes and slept later with a sweet smile.

Precap:

Geet: mai kya karu ram mujhe Buddha mil gaya!

Maan: kon budhha ... mai? 😲

Previous updates...

Hold onto me parts 1-7

Hold onto me parts 8-11

A/N: thank you for keeping patience with me, i am not binding anyone to me and my stories you are free to read it or not at your own as i cannot promise time and frequency of updates. another thing is; Yes I am soon going to stop writing as soon as all my on-going works come to an end! it is all a personal reason, very little to do with likes/comments/ reponse!

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