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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 6


@khurrna office everyone is enjoying their day coz last night was their boss' wedding... Opss second wedding so all are assuming maan will not come today
Adi, maan's right hand scold them asked them to work but all ignore him
Staff member : y are you so worrird adi sir? Maan sir will not come today said with shurgging his shoulders
Other member also support him
Other staff: yes adi sir maan sir will not come and he is bizzy with his new wife saying and wink at him
Girl staff : lucky girl yaar will become mrs. Msk wow
Another girl: what lucky who want to be second wife
She said, mocking at her
Another girl stuff : why not if husband is msk who will not want? Saying both hi-fi each other
Adi left shaking his head knowing they will not stop
Maan car enter in kc watchmen get shock seeing his car he hurriedly rang the warning bell
Maan came out from car enter with full confident and attitutdw ( remember maan's office entry )
Here in maan's floor all get shock listening warning bell
ohh no maan sir in office' all said
They started running to save themself from maan wrath
Staff: maan sir office arey hai kal toh unki shadi hoi thi na he asked making himself presentable
Other so what shadi nahi dosri shadi' answer
Aur jaldi jaldi clear all this thing hear or you all will get good day with maan sir some one answer them
Maan reached his floor; he is in good mood so not paying attention to any one
Good mornning sir all said
He just nodded his head went to his cabin
Outside; all hushhh bach gye yaar aaj sir deemed to be in good mood.'
Adi : stop you all get back to work or else...
All move for their respective work
After some time adi and some good employees went to maan's cabin with bouquet
Maan: come in
All come in maan saw them with flower knotted his brows
Adi: wooohh siirrr actually yesterday your wedding so we all want to congratulate you
Maan: hmmm
Maan: thank you all for that... anything else?
He said not paid any grattiue
Adi: no sir
Maan stop adi for work other staff moved out
Outside the cabin
mann sir is not happy with second marriage, look he did not say anything when he married to horam ma'am he went to leave for a month here he did not show smile' riya said
how you said like this when he is not happy then y he marry again?' other satff said
may be his wife is not as beautiful as horam' other girl staff said who crush on maan
you girls have no work other then this... uff' some boy staff said
Inside cabin
Maan: adi it project ki budget file mein changes karni thi woh kar di? He asked
Adi: yes sir jjjo bhi ap nai kha tha correction kardi
Maan: then send the file to client tomorrow ok
Adi: yes sir i will send
Maan: you may go adi
Adi went from there and maan bizzy with his work
After some time his phone ring he saw the caller it horam he immediately pick it
Maan: what the hell hor where are you from morning he shout at her
Horam: remove mobile from her ears made face
Maan : hello hello hor are you there
Horam : maan shout kar liya toh mein kuch bolo she said
Maan take deep breathe say what explanation you have?
Horam : explanation... for what ????
Maan : dont tell me you dont know
He said with annoyance
Horam : yes i dont know
She said playfully
Maan: horrr
He gritted his teeth
Horam: ok ok msk dont be angry
She giggled
Maan: are you ok naa he ask with concern
Horam: hmmm
Maan: y you not came on bf he asked
Horam: i was bizzy
She answer not let him doubt
Maan: are you sure
He inquired her
Horam : ha baba and please don't be so over protect am ok and don't make me forget why i call you
Maan : y you call me i am so bizzy
Horam: shame on you msk yesterday you got marry and leaving your new wife you went to office romancing with your file shame shame
Maan: what
Horam: kya what maan agr mein geet ki jaga hoti na toh tumhara murder kar deti
Maan: ya i know... i remember what you did when we are on hm and i receive my office call you made me wirte 'i will never take my call again " 1000 times he said remembering what he did to manaofy her
Horam: hehheehehehe you deserve that
She laugh remember their hm
Maan : hahahaa but the good news is geet is not like you ok and you will not be geet your place always special to me he said with so much faith
Horam: stop laughing maan please y stop running from her
She said with irritate
Maan : am not just want time only and am biizy now call you later
He said and cut call
Other side
Horam : maan please dont make more guilty she thought closing her eyes in pain
@aniee college; she is in very foul mood morning scolding and she came late in class teacher also scold her
Her friends trying to cheer her
Preeti: its ok dont be sad na
Nisha her friend: what happen any why you look so dull from morning
Preeti and riya eyeing her to stop they know about maan second marrige and aniee love for horam and against to this second marriage
Aniee: nothing just tired she said did not told them reason behind his mood
Nisha: ohh we forget congrats yesterday your brother marraige so how was the wedding and your new bhabhi
She asked excitedly
Aniee forwn: dont asked about that she pointing her finger and
From this went from there stamped her foot
Nisha : what happen yaar y she get angry asked in confusion
Riya : i dont know moving her shoulder may be she tired lets go
Preti yup lets go and nisha dont ask aniee about her brother's marriage
Nisha : but y
Preeti : i said na we will tell you some other day but dont ask ok
Nisha made faces ok
@ km
Geet's family came to meet her expect asad
Geet's mother (Sheeren): as salaam o alaikum she greet to Maan's mother
Mariyam: waliakum salam ayee betiya
Mariyam order: nakul go bring Geet say her that her mother and relative come to meet her
Sheeren: kase hai ap aur sultana ji she asked with suger coated
Mr hayat (Geet's papa): woh hum bus geet say milna aur uski kuch things dena aye they jo ghar par hi reh gye thi kal
Mariyam: hum thek hai aur yeh kiya bath hoi bahi sahab ap ki beti ka ghar hai ap log jab chai aa saktey hai us say milna
Geet tai ami said: nahi behan ji humrey yaha beti k ghar kam jatey hai
She mesmerize to see khurrna mansion little bit jealouse with Geet now
(mere ghar ka rule yeh 😔 )
Mariyaam: hum sab purney baton ko nahi mantey
Main while geet also came with nakul she happy to see her parents went to them mariyam move from there giving space to them talk freely and she went to kitchen for arangement of refreshmet for them
Geet: ami abu ap log kase hai
She hugged her ami
Mr hayat: hum thek hai betey ap kase hai
Geet smile: thek hai hum abu bhai jaan nahi ayee
She asked about asad
Sheeren: arey woh kisi kam say gya tha is liya nahi aya
Geet: hmm she sad not see him there
Geet tai ami: arey geet beta apni gareeb (poor) tai ami say bhi mil lijeye ap toh humai bhool gye she said with jealouse
Geet hurriedly: nahi tai ami ase bat nahi hai she explain
Geet mother smirk to see her jealousy face in heart she is happy now evry one mouth shout no one will say anything to them and show fake love when geet marry to msk
Mariyam, sultana (she is maan's chichi) came with servant
Sheeren: is sab ki kiya zarort thi hum toh bus geet say milney aye they she said seeing so many snacks
Mr hayat also refused
Mariyam: bilkul bhi nahi ap sab pehli bar aye hai hum asy ap ko janey nahi dengye bina kuch eat kiya
Geet smile with mariyam
Sulatana support her: bilkul aur please geet ki tai ami dont say that you will not eat in daughter house; she said actually mocking her
Tai smile sheepishly: woh asi bath nahi hai




to be continued...
don't know you all like aur not finger cross

hi all and sorry to all for very very late

pls ignore typing and grammatical mistakes

my stiches paining alot i can not sit for long my mom scolding me 😔 she did not let me sit and typing



NOTE

part 6 by Fariya...

Posted and Proof-read by Pooja

do leave ur feedbacks plz...😊

Edited by Pooooooooooooja - 10 years ago
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GIVE IT FAST
WAITING
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ye maan bhi na...shaadi ke baad apni nayi dulhan ko chodke office agaya...koii usse samjao...aur beech main ye horam kyun hain..😡usse jaldi ghar se bahar bhejdo😆other wise maaneet story will not proceed...😆 waise honey moon ka kuch plan kia kya...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: svani

ye maan bhi na...shaadi ke baad apni nayi dulhan ko chodke office agaya...koii usse samjao...aur beech main ye horam kyun hain..😡usse jaldi ghar se bahar bhejdo😆other wise maaneet story will not proceed...😆 waise honey moon ka kuch plan kia kya...😳


fariya n hm... achha joke tha 😆

i will have to look into that 😳

wiase wo abhi pori thik nahi hui hai...

evn i want to kill horam soon... 😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part
maan is stupid
he went to office

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update fariya and pooja...
ho god yeh maan bhi na kitni workholic hai..
shaddi ki next din hi office chela gaya..
poor geet..
aur beech mai yeh horram😡
ahh mujhe yeh horram pasand hi nahi arrahi hai..
geet parents came to geet 's house great..
eagerly waiting to see maaneet moments..
continue soon dear..
great update..
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Originally posted by: Poooja


fariya n hm... achha joke tha 😆

i will have to look into that 😳

wiase wo abhi pori thik nahi hui hai...

evn i want to kill horam soon... 😆😆


😆 characters se pehle ye blush hojati han ki shayad iska hm horaha hain...let her take rest...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan loves horam very much but in dis he is hurting her.
Annie is thinking Geet as low class girl.
Its right she love horam but dat doesn't mean she mock Geet.
Geet father nd brother loves her a lot.
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nice part.. give eng translation for hindi
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nice update
waiting for maaneet scenes...

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