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Amazing ff.U are a wonderful writer truly.i read 'after the storm' almost in one go and was re-reading clear blue skies😉.I love ur version of rudra and paro,exactly how i wanted them to be,including a good mohini,the selfish mala[i'm really impressed by this characterisation,even i thought she should be like this in the show.i really hope even paro doesn't show much soft corner when they meet],cute shanti,maithili,the extended family of paro and so on.
Some wonderful parts in both ur ffs which i'd like to mention:
rudra having a dream of paro and karthik and sharing it with shanti,the sketches that he made of his family,aman presenting the rose sapling to his sister,mohini kakisa rightfully giving the butterfly pendant to paro,the story behind how aman got his name,rudra carrying shanti piggyback,rudra's adorable way of presenting all those gifts to paro via his juniors,aman's dadi and finally himself... i can go on and on and hope u will continue adding such good moments in this ff.
[my wish is that this ff should have some 80+ chapters,whatsay?😉]
ST destroyed RR and parud with that horrible leap.i hate him and his CVs for doing that.the only solace are the ffs in this forum,esp yours[a prime reason being it has no myra,in whatever way].I know every must have its own twists and turns.Just when i was re-reading chapter 4,i really noticed this mystery man observing parud at airport and it has some connection with that mysterious pizza delivery,right?but i really hope u will not bring negativity in the form of shantanu[like ST] and can i be hopeful[and my earnest request] that even if u do so,u will abide by the name of this ff and parud will be together and this ff will have a happy ending,with parud's 2 sons and their little angel.[rithu,if u want to know why i'm requesting like this,go through this post that i made in RR forum (LINK:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4283796),u may be able to understand my feelings and hope u will consider my request.
that's it,again,wonderful work rithu and keep going!
ratna.
PS:luv ur profile pic!i wish that montage should be made the forum montage too,hai na?