OS:MaNan's Face-Off---20/02/2015

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So guys I m back with an OS...this is out of frustration from me or Nandini u can take anything as I cant see her insult anymore...n I want sherni Nandini but not cry baby...So this OS is the continuation from the last scene yesterday[epi-149] where Manik breaks the glass.So guys I m not adding anything related to Precap as we all know Nandu will be back...This is just MaNan,Navya n Fab5...N MaNan's Face off finally.I don't know how CV's r shaping it but I want something like this...

As we have seen Manik's switching On n Off moods...this OS is the result for it only...Hope u ll like it...

MaNan's Face-off

Manik breaks the Glass n was bleeding, Nandini gets worried n holds his bleeding hand where Manik felt healed with her touch.Nandini tries to removes glass pieces n somewhat hurts herself.Manik comes back to his Monster mode n jerks her hand,Nandini gets angry n shouts at him.

N:Manik...y r u hurting urself...u r angry on me right then hurt me,take out all ur frustration on me but not on urself.

Nandini takes out her hanky n ties to his wounded hand where Manik feels relieved but again comes to him Monster mode n removes that hanky n hands over to her.

M:No need to show any concern Miss.Moorthy,U hv been expelled right then get the hell out of here...just leave n don't show ur face again.

Nandini notices every mood of his ---means sometimes nice n sometimes angry n gets pissed off.

N:Fine if that's what u want then how can I say no to u...atleast u will not hurt urself if I m not around u.

Manik smirks :Really...

N:Yes really...

M:Whatever

Nandini puts her hand on the door where the broken glass piece was left n gets hurt

N:Ouch...Nandini's hand starts bleeding

Manik gets worried n tries to hold her hand but Nandini stops

N:No...don't ...don't even try to touch me...u have lost the rights...

Manik gets shocked listening that line...Nandini ties the hanky to her hand n leaves...

Manik also leaves from there in anger...

Nandini msgs Navya n Cabir to come n meet her for the last time as she was leaving.

After Meeting Nandini ...Cabir comes back to Jam room n Manik comes with a bandage ...

All gets worried n but Manik brushes off when asked...

They practice continuously as Manik was wounded but was not stopping bcz of anger n what Nandini said was haunting him.

In the evening Navya barge in Jam room n questions Manik

Navya:Nandini kaha hai...

Manik in his Monster mode:Main uska PA nahi hun jo uske bare me saari info rakhunga...so just get lost n let us practice...

Navya:Tum insaan ho ya raakshas

Dhruv:Navya...listen woh ghar gayi hogi ...tum uske ghar jaakar patakaro

Navya:Nahi woh abtak ghar nahi pohachi... Humne aakhri baar Manik ke saath choda tha use hai ki nahi Dhruv

Dhruv:Haa...Buddy kaha hai Nandini...tune kuch...Manik interrupts

Manik:Buddy ...sabko pata hai...kahi kisi kone me baithkar roh rahi hogi

Navya:Tum na...

Mukti:Navya ...relax tumne clg me check kiya

Navya:Humne pure clg me check kiya...uske ghar par bhi phn kiya par woh waha nahi hai

Navya leaves from there thinking that Nobody is affected by her disappeance...

Manik:God...Ye Madhubala kitna drama karti hai...Chalo lets practice

Cabir notices his every mood ...

Mukti breaks the silence:Manik mujhe laga tu use dhoondne jayega

Aliya:Ya the way u were running on that day to search her ...n now u r so calm...

I was wrong abt u...u dint change Manik

Manik gives a smile

Mukti:Haa jis tarah tu uske liye bhaag raha tha worried tha,pagal hue jaaraha tha...aur achanak gayab hogaya after we got the news that Soha is dead...even we thought ki tune sach me... u killed Soha...

Manik was shocked to hear that:What...really guys...tum logo ko bhi aisa laga...u don't have faith in me kya

Cabir slowly understands what's the matter between Manik n Nandini.

Aliya:We trust u Manik but the way u were behaving like that we thought by mistake u might have killed Soha

Dhruv :Haa buddy jab tu 24 hrs ke liye underground hogaya tha hume toh aise hi laga ki shayad tujhse galti hui hai...but Nandini came to us for help n said that she wants to help u in this case.

Manik:Seriously guys u know me...Cabir...tujhe bhi aisa lagta hai

Cabir:Lagta hai...mujhe toh yakeen tha ki tu Nandini keliye Maar sakta hai kisiko bhi bcz u were so protective abt her n maine ye use bola bhi.

Manik was going crazy now :Guys seriously we need to talk...how u ppl can think about me

I know Mujhe ye sab pehle hi batadena chahiye tha...but now no secrets...she is out...

Cabir:Secrets...inka toh pata nahi but I have something to tell u...jo tujhe nahi pata but inko pata hai...

Manik:What...

Cabir:I m sharing the flat with that Madhubala...woh bhi Mukti ki meherbani se

Manik gets a shock hearing that:What...aur tu mujhe ab bata raha hai

Mukti:Manik it was bcz of me...

Manik:K...then ab toh koi secret nahi na

Mukti:I have one...

Fab4 :What

Mukti:I love Abhimanyu

Fab4 all together:That chole delivery boy urf that peon

Mukti:Yes...dot ask me further...how n all

Cabir finally tries to ask Dhrulya as he was fishy abt them:Tum dono ka bhi kuch hai toh batado

ALiya suddenly says:No...no secrets from myside

Dhruv gets surprised as he was ready to confess but Aliya interrupted

Cabir then looks at Dhruv:Dhruv tere paas bhi kuch nahi

Dhruv:Hai...I moved on from Nandini n I like someone but she is not ready to express her feelings so I cant reveal her name...I hope u guys will understand...

Manik looks at everyone n thinks...how did I miss all these things

Manik:K guys...no troubles in our life's any more...Aliya interrupts

Cabir gets confused at Manik's reactions but not for much time

Aliya:Yaa offcourse the trouble maker is no more to create troubles

Manik gets worried n was feeling bad hearing about Nandini

Cabir to himself "ab toh asli trouble shuru hogi Aliya...U hv striked the right chord today"

Fab5 after a group hug , leaves the clg

Cabir says to Manik that he ll come with him today as he don't want to hear that Madhubala's ranting...

Its evening...Manik n Cabir were having their drink in Manik's bedroom

Manik was worried bcz of Nandini but was equally pissed off with Nandini's words n what Fab5 were thinking abt him...

Cabir disturbs his thoughts...while talking to Navya on call

Cabir:Madhubala ji aap khana khake sojayiye aaj main ghar nahi aaunga...

After sometime he shouts

Cabir:What...Nandini abtak ghar nahi pohachi...kaha gayi...

He then cuts the call

Manik gets worried now...

Cabir:Manik ...tere aur Nandini ke beech kya baat hui...kaha gayi woh ...do u have any idea...

Manik getsup grabs the keys n drives off to Nandini's home without replying to Cabir

Manik comes to know from Chachi that Nandini is with Navya...Manik gets very angry n calls Navya

Manik:Tum pagal ho Chachi ne kaha Nandini tumhare saath hai

Navya:Hum nahi tum pagal ho...humne Chachi se kaha ki woh humare saath hai...taaki woh ghabraye na ...aur hum khud use dhoond rahe hai...kyunki tumhe toh koi fikar hai nahi...pata nahi kya kehdiya use...jo aise chaligayi woh


Manik gets more worried now n recollects that he told her to leave n not to show her face again

Manik runs to college n checks each n every class like a mad person...n every possible place at clg

Manik calls Cabir n asks to whether he came to know about anything...Manik feels helpless...

Manik:Cabir ye sab meri galti hai I asked her to leave...

Cabir:Calm down Manik...tu mere ghar aa fir dekhte hai kya karna hai...main tujhe address text karta hun

Manik:No Cabir I have to find her

Cabir:Dekh Manik...Navya yahi par hai so hum baithke sochte hai ki Nandini kaha jaasakti hai

Tu pehle aaja

Manik lands up at Cabir's place n he finds Nandini over there...

Manik runs n hugs her very tightly out of fear...as his true feelings comes out seeing Nandini safe after somany hours.

Nandini doesn't respond to his hug n was feeling hurt with his grip bcz it was more harder this time...

Nandini:Manik leave me...u r hurting me

Manik:N I told u that if u disappear again it wud b harder...

Nandini pushes him hard so that the hug breaks...n shouts:U have no right to hurt me Manik Malhotra

Manik holds her by shoulder:Then Y did u disappear

Nandini:Kyu kya hua...u only said to leave na...n u dint wanted to see my face as I dint trust u

Manik:Nandini listen...

Nandini:U listen...u know what Manik...Tum khud nahi jaante tumhe kya chahiye...

Jab mann kiya mere paas aagaye jab mann kiya chod diya...u say I dint trust u na...but did u had trust in urself...

Manik leaves her n looks at her in shock...

Nandini:Let me ask u a question...Y did u disappear after Khurana filed case against u...

Manik dint had any answer...

Nandini:Let me tell u bcz u urself thought that Soha is killed tumhari wajahse... u thought ki galti se hi sahi tumhare haatoh se woh margayi right...

Manik gets confused:Woh...Nyonika...Nandini interrupts

Nandini:Seriously Manik...tumhari Mom ne kaha n u disappeared ...u actually believed her

U dint even think that y to disappear when u dint do anything...u wud have stayed back n fight na...but u dint that means u were afraid that somewhere u were feeling that Soha is killed by u...hai na

Manik gets shocked listening that...

Nandini:Tumhe pata hai ...tum sirf apne bare me sochte ho Manik not others...if u think its correct then its correct if u think its wrong then it shud be wrong u don't think otherwise

Tumne mujhse kaha na ki maine kaise tumhe trust nahi kiya...i was unconscious Manik n I dint know what happened but u were conscious na...n u know what happened then Y dint u defend urself infront of Cops...Y u needed me or ur Mom...

She showed me the video n I got confused at that moment but have u ever thought that Y she bought me over there

Manik:I know that Nyonika did this deliberately

Nandini:Ohh...that means I was correct...U believed ur Mom whom u hate the most in this whole world but u did what she said n disappeared instead of listening to ur heart...n u came back n blamed me

Manik:Aisa nahi ...

Manik:No Manik...one thing is cleared today...that ur weak...weak from ur heart...tum darte ho...darte ho apneliye ladne se...u fight for others but u cant fight for urself...u think everything is give n take N u can handle everything but u cant...bcz ur heart knows that u can lose some things for gaining something n that's y u r feared...n ur fear clearly cums out in the form of anger Manik.

One last thing...today its over finally u know Y...u dint trust me actually but I blindly did...u hurt me somany times but I came back forgiving u n stood with u after knowing that what is my priority in ur life, U said everything is irrelevant n u blamed urself for being with me when ur friends needed u but I dint leave u ...i took every single word of urs but dint react bcz I know u were angry n dint mean to say that...but I was dumb n I was blindly trusting u.

Actually mujhe na usi din chale jaana chahiye tha jab Khurana ne mujhe blackmail kiya to walk away from ur life for ur album...but I was so dumb that I thought u ll not perform if I disappear n u ll b hurt that I dint trust u n postponed my journey n woh sab hogaya...agar usdin chali jaati toh shayad accha hota.But today u gave me reason to walk away from u n now I m free from u...Maine ye sab isiliye kiya bcz i wanted to give u a suggestion that fight for ur happiness Manik n others will b happy seeing ur happiness ...dont b afraid of such small hurdles in life when u r correct ...n stop blaming others when u cant achieve anything...bcz life throws problems at u again n again,start listening to ur heart don't b afraid of it.

Nandini leaves from there n Manik was left speechless


Nandini comes out n thank Navya n Cabir...actually all this was planned by Nandini n Cavya helped her to show what Manik is doing in his life...this was decided before Nandini left from College

So guys...don't know what I ranted but this was my frustration ...Hope u liked it

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dushturain thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay I can't resist...Kresh dont hate on me for using SRK pls😆



okay on a serious note, I loved the idea how Nandu disappeared and Manik became worried and forgot all his gussa and hugged her...I think this might happen...


but mostly I loved how Nandu confront Manik at the end!!👏👏 I so wish Nandin will do sth like this give him a piece of her mind...


Kresh u r a rockstar.



Edited by dushturain - 10 years ago
kresham thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ohh God it became so long i dint even realize😳😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it:-):-):-) i wish somthn like this wd hapn but with a happy ending:-):-) i cant c manan seperation
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow awsm os
loved it
very nicely written

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Originally posted by: crazy5

Loved it:-):-):-) i wish somthn like this wd hapn but with a happy ending:-):-) i cant c manan seperation

Obviously...read Last lines of Nandini again...Baba will run for her after that right...bcz his heart wants Nandini😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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mind blowing...i would love to see this in the show yaar...this face off is much needed for manan...
thanks a lot for writing this yaar...u penned it so perfectly and sensible writing...
i dont want nandini as a cry baby...manik should get this kind of treatment from nandu...then only he will learn...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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kritu my sweetheart..aa jhappi pa le...yes you are my angel sweetu...🤗
it was bang on...👏
Edited by Aliyagogoi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I Would love to have something like this happen
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it...
Want to see Nandu's girl power...this is so awesome.
Seriously Nandini needs to give a piece of her mind to THE MANIK MALHOTRA...

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