I am really feeling honoured by the overwhelming response from you guys! 😃😃Lovely OS and amazing work.. It was a pleasure to read.. You captured his struggle very beautifully..
The whole piece is so well written, and some of your lines were just too good... "He had mastered the art of crying without making any noise. In fact, he could do it so ...", ""Feelings!", scoffed his heart,... "Yeah right, he has been giving her everything except his feelings!", "There was a strange eeriness about her eyes - lifeless and blank, as though somebody had snuffed that right out of her. Strangely, her eyes reminded him of himself as of late."...
They just shot into the heart and matched so well with his characterization as we know the old Ranveer..
Keep writing mate, you are onto something there ...!