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gravshrav23

@gravshrav23

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: arshi21
I agree with gravity.

i think she longed for him to call her...to hear his voice...maybe to know that he cares and misses her.

I feel for both of them :'(

bechara trying to be all happy and yet she sunaoed him and she is trying to not let him affect her and he affects her all the more.

Cant wait for more "adventures" of their ;)

@bold- Wahi toh..he is "trying to be all happy"...uska dil kitne somersaults maara DT ke bina...woh janna hai..:))

She has this IRRESISTIBLE aura of longing over her naa, Arshi?? So relatable...so exciting...

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#252

lovely...

loved the photo wid her parents..

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-Gan-

@-Gan-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#253

The last line is a killer... Says it all...

The phase of not knowing the feelings of the other side.. Add a bit of ego to that .. Pretense indifference is the best way . Loved how you incorporated the pics together .. I am curious to know now how the indifference is creating havoc in him 😉

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maaloo

@maaloo

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Beautiful Columbia.. Adventure.. wow..

so did he see the pix? was he expecting her call?

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Awww I can totally imagine this for sure. Uncertainty just sucks in anything. But on the bright side He saw the pictures. Hope to read one from his point of view, his uncertainty perhaps. Well done. The picture with mom and dad was really cute, he looked really natural and happy. :)

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taara113

@taara113

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

every time i see another pg no. added my excitement reaches another level...i don't even know how to express how happy i feel reading this...
as always you killed it with the last line...
i will wait till the time this safe girl gets adventurous again...
n yes like many i'm dying to see his reaction to this indifference...it did appear a bit in- They need to stop this, but then it ended with him giving into his addiction...maybe now its time for him to turn into the angry rkb in real (the reality in the fiction..haha) for some time...
well whatever u will make them do it will be great...
so keep it coming C...
eagerly awaiting the next

And C in reply to your reply (im still to figure out how to reply to a comment and not a post)
I'm happy my comment was well taken. And I selfishly wish that the romance always stays and blooms in your mind because till that continues to happen we will continue to have so much fun with your fiction. and the unsaid romance line...dil khush ho gaya..

Edited by taara113 - 11 years ago

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yashasvi barfa

@.Yashu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#257

superb C its brilliant i also do on new year something new and last line is killer

Edited by ybarfa - 11 years ago

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: gravity23

@bold- Wahi toh..he is "trying to be all happy"...uska dil kitne somersaults maara DT ke bina...woh janna hai..:))

She has this IRRESISTIBLE aura of longing over her naa, Arshi?? So relatable...so exciting...

EXACTLY. I see she is everybody's favourite. From kaushal ji to ruhanika to aly and sangram and toshi ji. Basically EVERYBODY loves her. How can he not? How can she not? (Not love as in romantically just generally also) thwy talk and behave like friends but aeem diatant and the moment he comes something in her closes as if she is trying to stay indifferent and just neutal towards him and he does the same. Why is it that eveeyone loves both of them are both of them are close to everyone else but not each other?

And this aura of longing like you said..it seems hanging over them alll the time. Maybe she has this secret thrill of liking a bad boy? And the bad boy has this secret thrill of liking a smart sudhri hui girl?

See what funfiction does to us ;)

anything we think :P

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Nikita99

@Nikita99

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#259

Hey there,

This morning g I watched Divyanka ' s interview and she talked about having children in future and giving them good life. It reminded me of Karan ' s interview where he said something around that he love children. So I am wondering if you could write around this. Thanks in advance!