MG FF -Tum Mille......THREAD 2 LINK ON PG 1 APR 12 - Page 56

awesome lovely update dear...maan is caring geet alot ...and he is falling more and more on her cute antics...

Part - 53

Next morning Geet comes to take her kit bag half asleep...

It's in Maan's back bag...

Maan is still asleep, for he had just slept...

Geet wakes him up...

She doesn't know how to address him..."Maan sir, just like Pinky calls..."

And moreover she has lost her job way back and since then she had never spoken with him, hare aakhon se batein toh hothi hai, par seedhe seedhe pukarne ki moka kahan milla?

Geet looks at the sardarji's wife calling him hare suno ji...

Geet then thinks that's it...: she tries to speak but couldn't...this is so hard...suniye

No one but herself could hear that...

The boys are still asleep else they wouldn't have left Maan to sleep...

Sardarji's wife watches Geet...she blushes as if she is the new bride...

Wife: hare zor se bolo, ye tera hi gharwala haina?

Geet blushes thinking that Maan is asleep but Maan has noticed her face blooming like a red rose...

Maan closes his eyes and waits for her next move...

Geet: suniye

This time she literally shouts and sardarji wakes thinking that it's his wife...

Maan opens his eyes slowly and directly into her eyes...

Maan is so happy that his princess has come to wake him...what a lovely morning?

How he wishes she wakes him up like this every morning...

Geet tries to look cold...but her eye tell him that she is equally happy and excited...

Maan: gud morning Geet

Geet: meri kit

Maan takes it and gives it to her...

Geet snatches it and leave only to return immediately...

Maan: kya hua Geet? tumme kuch chahiye?

Geet shakes her head...

Maan: phir wapas kyun aagayi?

Geet: woh woh log

Geet is scared...

Maan gets angry...it must be those boys...

Geet: mein badh mein karloongi

Maan: nahi, tum aao mere saath

Maan takes her with him...

The boys disappear in a second...

Maan waits there itself...one of the aunties comes to the rest room...

She struggles to balance in the jolting of the train...

Maan giveher a hand and helps her...

Aunty: thanks beta

Geet knows that Maan is so caring and he respects the elders very much specially the women...

Dadi ki parvarish haina?

Geet likes to give the credit to dadi and not Maan...

But what about the charm, the magic of MSK...that she should give credit to the MSK, haina?

As they get ready to get down at the next station, all the aunties start praising Maan...

Aunty1: Geet beta, aapse milke bahut kush hai hum, kaas karke aapke ghawale se, usse milke hum bahut bahut kush ho gaye hai, aajkal aaise mundon ko dekhna kushkil hai

Aunty2: aur Geet, woh toh tumme bahut pyaar kartha hai, raat bar kitne bar aaya tha tume dekhne ne

Aunty3: kitni pyaari jidi hai, bagwan ne achcha Jodi banaya hai

Aunty1: haan, tum bhi bahut pyaari gudhi ho, bagwan kare aap donno hamesha aaise hi kush rahe

Aunty2: babaji tum donno ki Jodi ko banaye rakhe

They bless Geet and just then Maan comes to take her...

He is happy to hear that...Maan bhi yahi chahatha haina?

Aunty1: lo aagaya tera gharwala

Maan: Geet, aunties ko thank karo, unhonne tummra khyaal rakha haina?

Geet: thanks anutyji

Aunty: babaji ka lakh lakh shukar hai ki tujhe aaisa pathi milla hai, issko shukriya kar beta, issi ne tummara khyaal rakha hai

Maan: thanks auntyji

Actually Maan thanks auntyji for the compliments, that too infront of Geet

At Amriatar station...

Maan takes the luggages in one hand and gives the other to Geet to help her get down...

Geet doesn't care to take even a single bag...

Maan is more than happy with that...

As far as Geet is with him Maan doesn't care a damn about anything else...

She feels like a boss here...apni mitti ka kamaaal...

Ye toh Delhi nahi hai, yahan MSK is just a guest...ye Geet ki maidan hai...yahan ka khel toh Geet ke haath main hai...abhi aage dekho Geet kya kya karthi...

Lucky and his friend have come to pick them up...in two wheelers...

Geet is worried...kya Maan two wheeler chala payega?

She has never seen him ride a bike, there's no bike at KM...

Vicky always insisted they use a four wheeler as it's not safe to ide a two wheeler in the city...

Lucky: jijaji, namasthe

Maan stares and Lucky steps back...

After reaching a safe distance...he introduces himself...

lucky: jijaji aapne pehchana nahi, mein, Lucky singh

Maan doesn't like anyone except teji...sab pagal log hai...

Maan ko lene bike lekhe aaya hai?

Geet: Lucky veerji, mein aapke saath aathi hoon

Geet quickly opts for a safe ride, she can't trust MSK's riding skills...

That too in the bumpy narrow lanes of Amristar...

Maan stares Geet...what's she thinking?

MSK would let her ride with this Lucky?

Never...he would not take such a risk...haina?

Lucky: tum mere saath bazaar aaogi?

Lucky laughs...

Geet: kya?

Lucky: Geet, beeji ne itna vada list diya hai, dekho, hum sab lekhe aathe hai, jijaji aaye haina?

Lucky looks at Maan and smiles...

Maan likes his warmth...on this Geet thoda spicy hai...hari mirch...

Lekhin koi baat nahi...life mein thoda spice chahiye to make it interesting...

Lucky: Geet tum jijaji ke saath chale jao

Maan likes this...he smiles back now and expresses his happiness to his saala's suggestion...isska kopdi mein thoda toh akal hai...

Geet stares Maan...and she hesitates...

Lucky is confused...ye Geet ko kya ho gaya?

Kahin in donno ki beech jagdah toh nahi hua hai...

Lucky is worried...: kya baat hai Geet?

Geet looks at Maan with a big question in her eyes...

Maan: kya dekhthi ho?

Geet: aap pehle bike chalathe honge? Haina?

Maan: haan, kyun? Mere saath aane se dar lagtha hai tumme?

Geet: haan

Maan: what?

Geet then somes out with plan B...

Geet: aap chahe toh hum scooter mein jaa sakthe, mein achche se chalathi hoon

Lucky bursts out laughing...

Maan would love a ride with Geet but not now, ab toh ye MSK ka izzat ka sawaal hai...

Maan stares Geet...

Geet: toh chalein

Geet gets the scooter key...

Maan: geeet

Lucky: dear jijaji ko gaddi chalana nahi aatha?

Both of them laugh...

Lucky: hum sikhathe hai

Lucky tries to start the bike...

Maan stares him and he moves and makes way for the MSK...

Maan grabs the keys from him...

Maan: abhi patha chalega ki kissko gaddi chalana seekhna padega

Maan looks at Geet and asks her to sit on the bike...

Geet is still not ready...

Geet: par ye samaan?

Lucky: tum samaan ki fikar mat karo Geet, mamaji haina? Mamaji samaan beil gadi mein lekhe aayenge

Enter mamaji...

Mamaji: Luckies chuckies, ye kaun hai?

He looks at Maan and starts thinking...

Geet: mamaji

Mamaji: aur ye usske saath ladhki kaun hai?

Geet: mamajiii mein hoon Geet

Mamaji: Geet, hare Geet

Mamaji galle lagthe...

Mamaji: waise aap kaun hai?

He asks Maan...

Lucky pulls him aside...

Lucky: mamu, bas kar yaar, ye apna dear jijaii hai, Geet ke gharwale

Mamaji: kya? Geet ki shadhi hi nahi hui, aur gharwala? Ye koi naya chakkar hai, jugnu ustaad ka kaam hai

Mamaji suspects Maan...

Mamaji: tum jugnu ki shatir nazar se bach nahi sakthe, smajhe?

He warns Maan...Maan stares...as usual mamaji runs away...

Geet: mamaji, mamaji, rukho, mein bhi aathi hoon aapke saath

Maan stops her...Geet, tum unke saath kaise jaa sakthi?

Geet: aapke saath jaane se toh behthar hogi

Maan: Geet, you are insulting me, come with me

He catches hold of her hand and takes her to the bike...

Geet looks at him and Maan stares her...beitjao Geet

Geet sits and the bike flies...

Geet holds on to him tight to avoid falling...

Maan is thoroughly enjoying this ride...

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interesting prologue
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Geet waking up maan by calling suniye

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Lovely part..Geet so sweetly callled him suniye..Maan happy with Aunties view about them..Man enjoying bike ride

Part - 54

On the way...

People are happy to see Geet back, that too with her hubby riding on a bike...they feel that Geet is really lucky...and the young girls are jealous of Geet...

Somehow Geet feels proud entering her hometown along with Maan...

Car mein jaathe toh kissi ki bhi patha nahi chaltha...

Maan ko ye thoda ajeeb lagtha, par koi baat nahi, apne Mishti ke saath jaana hai toh kuch bhi chalega, even a bicycle ride...haina?

This is fun...and Maan kind of likes this...

Geet keeps smiling at the villagers and a few even call out her name...

"Geeet" they shout as if she is flying high on a plane and couldn't hear them...

"tera gharwala haina?"

They ask her with a stupid smile as if they have discovered something great...

Geet kisske saath chalegi? Apne Maan ke saath hi haina?

Geet acknowledges them with pride...

She is all blushing blushing...

She thinks Maan wouldn't notice her as he is facing the road...

But Maan keeps watching her on the rear mirror, that's what it's for, as there is no other vehicle on the road...

Maan is happy that Geet is getting ready for their relationship...she had started approving it within herself long back and now she doesn't hesitate to acknowledge it infront of others too...

It's only with Maan she is still playing this hide and seek game...

Geet suddenlt shouts...: rukho rukho rukho

Maan applies the brakes as if it were an emergency and Geet falls on him...

She closes her eyes and clings to him tight...she thought they are going to fall...

Maan: kya hua?

Geet opens her eyes and finds herself plastered to Maan...

She can feel his six packs...Maan ke workouts ka koi toh faida hua...

She then jumps down feeling shy...

She calls someone...: preetho preetho

It's her friend preetho...

Geet has asked Maan to stop just to meet her friend...

Maan stares her but he isn't complaining for he is also benifitting from the breaking...

Geet runs to preetho...

She is so happy to see her friend after a long time...

Maan is also happy seeing her with a big smile on her face...this Geet is brimmimg with energy...

She had to restrict herself at KM as she is like a guest there, but here she is free and she doesn't care about anything...

Preethi is surprised to see Geet...

Preetho: Geet, tu yahan?

Geet: tu kaise ho?

Preetho: tu pehle bathao ki woh kaun hai?

Geet blushes...

Preetho: toh yahi hai woh?

Preetho turns and looks at Maan...

Maan is still gazing Geet...

Preetho: woh toh tumme hi dekh rahe hai

Preetho feels shy...she smiles...

Geet looks at her tummy...she is carrying...

Geet is shocked...itni choti se umar mein ye sab kaise sambalegi?

Geet: preethi, tummari shadhi ho gayi?

Preetho: ye kaise sawaal hai? tum dkeh nahi sakthi? 7 mahene ho agye shadhi ki aur isski 6 mahene

Geet couldn't believe it...kya ladhkiyan shadhi issi liye karthe hai...aur isse pehle ki woh apne pati ke teek se samjhe usske bache ka maa ban jaathe aur phir bachon ka parvarish...

Geet is happy that her love story is yet to begin...har jeez ka apna waqt hotha hai...aur pyaar ka bhi...ye bhi koi umar hai shadhi aur bachon ka? Nahi na?

Geet is lucky that she is not bound by any kind of pressures b'coz of her so called marriage...

Geet: itne jaldhi ye sab kaise ho gaya?

Preetho smiles: jaldhi? Meri toh shadhi tummari shadhi ke badh hi hua hai, teri kab honge?

Geet: kya?

Preetho: hare,bache?

Preetho looks tired and pale...

Geet: tum kaho, tum ab kya kar rahi ho?

Preetho: matlab? Mein maa bannewali hoon

Geet: nahi nahi, tum toh teacher banna chahthi haina?

Preetho looks sad...

Geet: kya hua?

Preetho: meri baat chodo, tum bathao, tum kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: mein college jaathi hoon, B.com kar rahi hoon

Preetho is ashamed of herself as she has not tried to pursue her dreams like Geet...

Geet is a fighter...but Preetho is not, she has given up hope blaming her kismat...

Preetho: ye toh bahut achchi baat hai Geet, par har ladhki tummare tarah kismatwali nahi hothi

Kismat achcha ho ya bhura humme bhi apne tarah se koshish karna chahiye, Geet hamesha apne padaye mein pura dyaan dethi, aur sabse apna qwaish ko bathathi rehthi hai ki mujhe panda hai, zindagi mein kuch banke dikhna hai, issiliye toh Teji ne bhi Geet ko support kiya tha...

Aur Geet Dadi ke baat mankke Maan ke seva karne lagthi aur ek gulam ki tarah rehthi toh Maan bhi Geet pe itna fida na hotha...

Maan always loves her rebellion attitude and fighting spirits which Maan too wants to imbibe in his life...

Geet is not the one to sit and complain, she looks for ways to fulfill her dreams and she is happy with whatever life has to offer her...she lives her life her own way...

While Maan thinks about Geet, Geet thinks that she is lucky to have met Maan and is thankful to him for all the freedom she has got at KM...even Dadi is so nice not to blackmail her with all the sentiments...

Yahan rehthi toh Geet ka bhi shayad yahi haal hotha, haina babaji?

She turns back and looks at Maan ...Maan is patiently waiting for her...

Ye Dhust Danav haina, ye itna bhi bhura nahi hai, haina babaji?

Geet: preetho, mujhe abhi jaana hai

Preetho: haan haan, woh tera intrezaar kar rahe hai

Geet: shamko ghar aana, mein yahi hoon, aur channi rajjo sabko lekhe aana

Maan thinks...ab shamko imke kitty party hogi? Maan akhele kya karega?

Preetho: haan, hum zaoor aayenge, sab tum donno ko dekhke bahut kush honge

Geet: toh mein chalthi hoon

Preetho: teek hai Geet, mujhe bhi dher ho rahi hai, meri saas toh naraz ho jayegi

Geet ko ye sare batein ajeeb lagthe, Geet has never encountered any kind of pressures at KM...she has never been treated differently for being a girl...nor has Maan tried to belittle her b'coz she is a girl...

Abhi Geet ko Maan ke barein mein patha chaltha, woh sabse kitna alag hai...haan thoda jaldhi gussa aatha aur woh gussa bhi jitna jaldhi aatha uthna hi jaldhi chale jaatha...dil se bahut achcha hai...

Geet gets back to the bike...she keeps staring Maan...

Maan: aaisa kyun dkehthi ho? abhi bhi tumme mere bike chalane se dar lagthi hai kya?

Geet: nahi

She gets on the bike without any fuss...

She is loving it too...and she has started liking the rider too...haina babaji?

Geet ko abhi abhi apni sari galat famiyon ka ehsaas hua hai aur sachayi ab kadwi nahi bahut hi meeti lagthi hai...

What Geet thought as a curse has truned out to be a boon...she is lucky to have got Maan in her life...

Maan: woh ladhki kaun hai? tummari friend haina?

Geet: haan, hum saath mein padthe the

Maan: toh tummare umar ki hi hogi?

Geet: haan, kyun poochthe ho?

Geet feels jealous...why is he so much interested in her?

Maan: tummare ghaav walon ko koi aur kaam nahi hai kya? sab babaji banke duniya ko dokha dethe hai kya?

Geet: aapka matlab?

Maan: isse dekho, iss umar mein maa banne wali hai, lagtha hai yahan ke logogn ka kaam hi ladhkiyon ko chote se chote umar mein shadhi karwana, bache paitha karna aur unke bachon ki shadhi karwana, issiliye toh hummara desh population mein sabse aage hai

Geet ko patha nahi kya kahein, pehle bar Geet bhi Maan ke baat ko manthi hai, par aaise Maan ke baat ko manna Geet ke liye muskil hai...she keeps quiet...she knows very well that what Maan is saying is 100% true...

Maan: kya hua? Chup kyun ho gayi?

Geet: kuch nahi

She is thinking about her own fate...she is scared to think of a life without Maan...

What would have happened to her had she not met Maan?

Babaji...mein soch bhi nahi sakthi ki aaj mera kya haal hotha?

Aapke lakh lakh shukar hai ki aapne meri madat ki...

Abhi bhi babaji ko hi shukriya karthi...

Maan: gabrao mat Geet, mein tummare saath aaisa kuch nahi hone doonga

Geet is surprised...inko kaise patha chaltha ki mein kya kya sochthi?

But Geet is happy that Maan is with her...

Jaise bhi ho, Maneet ab ek dusre ke bina nahi reh sakthe...

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