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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice
geet is now getting maan's point how he is different from other n how lucky to have maan in her life
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part
Geet loving the bike ride with maan
She is proud too
Geet n preetos meet brought the change in geey
She is thinking how good maan is by heart
Never ill teeats her
Even dadi too

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Part - 55

At home...

All are eagerly waiting for their arrival...

Geet's mausi has made her favoutrite dishes...

Geet could smell the aroma even as she enters the house...

Geet couldn't wait to taste them, how long has she missed her maisi's food?

Nakul too makes good exotic Punjabi food but that's no match for her mausi's simle aloo ke parathe ya rajma chawal, haina?

Geet is very excited and she runs inside the house not knowing that Maan is also with her...she is not alone...

Maan is keft behind and he peeps in and finds no one inside...

Geet has gone straight to the kitchen to see her mausi...

Mausi is making laddu for her...

Geet rushes and grabs them in both hands...

Mausi stops her...: Geet, kitne bar kaha gandi haat se chuo mat, sab ganda ho jayega

Geet: par maa, mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai, ek leloon

Geet tries to take one...but her mausi wouldn't let her touch it...

Mausi looks at Geet and is shocked to see her alone...

Mausi is worried...: Geet, tu akheli aayi ho? damadji nahi aaye

She looks disappointed that dadi has sent Geet alone...

Geet just remembers that Maan has come too...he would be waiting out...

She has totally forgotten him...hotha jai hotha hai, maike jaathe toh sasuraal wale paraye ho jaathe, pathi bhi, haina?

Maan ka ye pehla visit nahi hai, woh pehle bhi yahan aaya haina?

Ab usske haath pakadke toh nahi la sakthi...aane do ussko...

Geet cooly answers...: who bhi aaye hai

Mausi is more shocked...: kahan hai woh?

Geet: woh?

Geet thinks abhi tak nahi aaye? Kahan goom ho gaye? Itni choti ghar mein koi goom ho jaatha hai kya?

Aur ye toh MSK hai, koi bacha todhi nahi...

Geet goes back to call him...

Maan is standing at the door still not deciding whether to enter the house or not...

Mausi comes after Geet and is shocked to see Maan waiting outside like a stranger...

Mausi: ye kya hai Geet? tumne damadji ko bahar hi kada kardhiya, aap kyun rukh =gaye ho? andar aayiiye

Mausi turns to Geet and stares her, who knows a daughter better than a mother...

Mausi apologises for Geet's mistake...: aap bhura mat mano, Geet ko ye sab patha nahi hai

Maan keeps looking at Geet and is smiling...

Ab toh Maan bhi Geet ko achche se jaanne laga haina?

Geet is angry...she is getting scoldings from her maa b'coz of Maan, she didn't ask him to wait outside, he should have come in with Geet itself, it's all Maan's fault and daant toh Geet ko padthi, haina babaji?

Yahi KM hothi toh Dadi Maan ko daandthe, haina?

Mausi: Geet, aaise kade kade kya dekhthe ho?

How dare she stares damadji?

Geet: par maa, issme meri galthi kya hai?

Mausi: chup, pagal ladhki, najaane tum kab samjogi, jao, Maanji ke liye mittai lekhe aao

Geet murmurs to herself...laddu toh mere liye bane haina?

Maan: nahi nahi, pehle mujhe fresh hona hai, hum train se aaye haina? Issiliye gande ho gaye hai

Mausi looks at Geet...dekha damadji ko...tum bhi haina?

Geet stares Maan...Maan is puzzled...why is she angry? She should be happy, she is in her home...

Papaji just comes...

Geet goes and hugs him...i

papaji: kaise ho beta?

Mausi stares him...ye kaise sawaal hai?

Damadji ke samne beti ki haal chaal poochthe hai kya?

Damadji bhura manjayenge na? woh kya aapki beti ko sathathe hai, inko dekho, aapki beti ne inko kitna sathaya hoga?

Mausi is right...Geet ne Maan ko kitna sathaya hai...

Geet: papaji humne toh aapko bahut yaad kiya?

Papaji: humme bhi har waqt teri hi yaad aathi hai beta

Wah wah kay papa aur kya beti

Mausi reminds him that Geet is not alone here...someone else is with her ...

Mausi: suniyeji, damadji bhi aaye hai

Papaji: aayiye aayiye, meinne aapko dekha nahi

Mausi: beti ke samne koi bhi dikhayi nahi detha aapko

Maan loves their affection, that's why Geet is also very loving and caring, she takes good care of Dadi...and that's why dadi wanted Geet as her bahu...

Maan just smiles...

Papaji is happy to see the changes in him, he is looking cool this time...

Aakhir Geet ne Maan ko badal hi diya...

Beti kisski hai? papaji is proud of his daughter...

He knew Geet can bring happiness in anyone's life...

She is such an optimist that she keeps looking for the little joys and forgets her worries...

Maan: namasthe ji

Actually Maan wanted to say namasthe babaji...Maan always remembers him as the baba who changed his fate, Maan hated him first but now he is grateful to him for giving him Geet...

Any ways Maan can never forget that babaji...

Papaji: ab toh mein bahut kush hoon, mujhe Geet ki chintha karne ki koi zaroorat nahi padegi, aap haina?

Maan: haan, ab Geet meri zamedari hai

Maan never takes his eyes of Geet, Geet doesn't like it at all...

He is continuing his gurna even infront of her parents...

Papaji: shukar hai bbaji ki, ab meri Geet ko ek achcha sa pariwaar milgayi hai aur ek achcha sa jeevan saathi bhi

Papaji hugs Maan and blesses him...

Papaji: Maanji, aap ne toh meri ek bahut badi bhoj halka kardhi, shukriya Maanji

Maan: ye toh mera farz hai

Papaji: Geet beta, damadji ko Teji ka kamre mein lekhe jaana

Geet is still angry...Maan looks at her nakras and smiles...

She is still a kid at heart...and even her brain is very young...and after coming here she has become more childish...after all she is with her parents na?

Geet: aayiye Maanji

Geet teases him...she is reluctant to accept Maan as a part of her family...

Now he is given the priority...that which Geet enjoyed all these days...

She is not erady to give away her place to any one...she is the princess of her own little kingdom...

Maan may be the Prince of Delhi, but this is Amristar...

Geet runs and climbs the ladder that is the staircase, without even waiting for Maan...

She is confident as it's her house and she is used to it...

She wants to show her might to Maan and she tries to climd fast...

But since she has not used it for a long time and is used to the wide and comfortable stairs of KM, she misses her steps on the ladder and looses her balance as usual...

Maan who has been following her catches hold of her again...

Maneet eyelock...mahi...

Geet relieves herself from his clutches as she is getting nervous and shy...

She moves ahead of him but Maan follows suit as he is afraid she might fall again...

She goes to the terrace room and opens it...

It's kept locked when Teji is off for his duty...

Even Lucky is not lucky enough to use it in Teeven ji's absence...

But mausi has got this room specially ready for damadji...

They have managed to get a bed for the steel cot...it's a mediun size cot...

The room is also too small comparing to Maan's master bed room...even Geet's room in the OH is much bigger...

But Maan doesn't complain as far as it gets Geet closer to him...

Maan looks around...

Geet: kya dekhthe ho? aapko pasand nahi toh aap bhi hummare saath aagan mein so sakthe

Maan: ye toh bahut chota hai, par hum donno le liye toh kaafi hai

Geet: kya?

Maan just smiles...

Geet: aap aaram karo

Geet stares him and tries to leave...

Maan ctaches hold of her and stops her...

Maan: hare, kahan baagthi ho?

Maan pulls her closer...

Geet ko toh ye nasdikiyan bahut pareshaan karthe hai...woh kudh ko sambal nahi pathi...

She tries hard to maintain a distance while Maan is trting to diminish the distance between the two...

Maan won't let her stay away from him even for a moment...don't know what happened to him now, he keeps following her like a shadow...

Geet: haath chodo

Maan: nahi chod saktha

Geet: mujhe jaana hai

Maan: tum mujhe chodke nahi jaa sakthi

Geet: kya?

Maan: Geet, mein tummra mehmaan hoon

Geet: toh mehmaan ke tarah raho

Geet warns him to stay in his limits which is not so easy for Maan...

Maan: Geet, ye tera ghar hai, mujhe toh tumme hi madat karna padega

Geet: kaise madat?

Maan: mujhe abhi nahaana hai

Geet stares...: kya? aap pagal ho gaye ho kya?

Geet thinks that Maan wants her to help him bath...

She gets angry and starts walking off...


Part56

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice
maan wants next step in relation n geet very away from it.

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Posted: 10 years ago


Wow lovely omg cute superb update..te way my maaneet in her mika bechare my maan his geet left him and rush inside bechare standing out without knowing wat to do was lovely cute..te way mausi ki taunt as a mother was lovely..te way mausi ki shock seeing her jalli geet who forget her hubby and still like a kid was lovely..te way papaji too forget my maan but my maan was happy to see him as he is te one who gave him his geet naa..te way geet ki gussa tat my maan getting all her pamper was lovely cute..my maan where u got tis piece yar..opps geet baby thinking my maan asking her to give bath, geet baby don't wory tat day will cum soon..i love te update so much yar
Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Geet not liking the attention maan is getting from her family
Will geet share the room with maan
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice ud
geet not liking every one
giving intention to maan
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part.. Geet wants everyone to pay attention to her but family is paying attention to Maan..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 56

Maan: Geet, rukho

Maan is not letting her go...

Geet: aap ko nahaana hai toh nahalo, mujhe kyun rokhthe ho?

Maan: woh Geet, yahan ka washroom kahan hai?

Geet ko bhi ab attached bathroom ki aadat ho gayi haina? Geet ko abhi abhi yaad aathi ki yahan neeche kooe ke paas sirf ek hi washroom hai, jahan sab nahaathe

And MSK ko toh cold water se allergy hai...he is used to the royal comforts of KM...

Infact,Geet too has become like him...

Geet has to get him hot water...she is not used to doing things for others, here her papaji never lets her do work, even though Nandini id younger, she does all the household duties, like helping her maa, no one should ever ask Geet for any favour, her papaji will get angry...

Now this Maan is making her work...Geet is not at all happy...

And she can't ask Nandini to help her too...

She has to do it herself...

Agle bar toh Maan ke liye ek assistant lekhe aana padega, haina babji?

Mein kya inki naukrani hoon?

Geet curses her fate and keeps staring Maan...

Maan: Geet, kya soch rahi ho?

Geet: aap ko mere saath aane ki kya zaroorat thi?

Maan: what?

Geet: yahan aake bhi mujhe chain se jeena nahi dethe

Maan: Geet, mein toh sirf tummare liye aaya hoon, aur mujhe koi shok nahi apne kaam chodke aaise jagah pe aane ki jahan koi wash room bhi nahi hai

Geet: kya? aap kya sochthe ho? yahan haina wash room, aap thoda intrezaar karo, mein aathi hoon

Maan: tum mujhe chodke kahin nahi jaa sakthi

Geet: aap kya kar rahe ho? ye gaav hai, yahan aap mere peeche goomthe toh log mere barein mein kya sochenge?

Maan: kya? mein tummare peeche goomthe rehtha hoon?

Geet: issko kya kehthe?

Geet shows his hands holding hers and stoping her...

Maan leaves her and she goes...

Maan comes after her to make sure she safely gets down the ladder...

Geet goes to the kitchen to get the water ready and she forgets everything seeing the laddus in mausi's hand...

Maan waits for a while and comes down in search of Geet...

Mausi finds Maan looking for Geet...

Geet is busy eating her laddus...

Mausi: Geet, maanji aaye hai

Geet: toh?

Mausi stares her...she snatches the plate full of laddus from Geet...

Geet is disappointed...

Geet: hare babaji, ab mein chain se ek laddu bhi nahi kha sakthi?

Mausi: Geet, Maanji tumme doondh rahe hai

Geet: maa, laddu wapas do

Mausi: Geet, jao

Geet: kyun?

Mausi: hare buddu, unhe kuch chahiye toh?

Geet still doesn't remember the hot water...

Geet: aap kyun nahi jaathe? Mujhse hi sara kaam karwathe ho ab

Mausi laughs...: woh tera gharwala hai, tujhe hi karna padega

Geet: ye kya musibat hai?

Geet goes finally...: ab aap ko kya chahiye?

Maan: Geeet?

Geet then remembers...

Geet: oh teri...mein toh bhool hi gayi

Maan: Geet, mein kab se intrezaar kar raha hoon, tummare gharwale abhi abhi washroom bana rahe hai kya?

Maybe a makeshift bathing room?

Geet: nahi, aap na ek minute rukho

Maan is not ready to let her go this time...

She always goes and hides...and Maan has to find her again...

Maan: tum nahi jaa sakthi

Geet: toh aap ke liye garam pani kaun lekhe aayega?

Maan is happy that she has the courtesy to provide him hot water...

Maan: jaldhi Geet

Geet comes back in a couple of mnutes...

Geet: aao mere saath...

Maan follows her to the back yard...

Maan: tum yahan kyun lekhe aayi ho mujhe?

Geet wants to have some fun...she takes him to the well where the male members usually bath...she has got his water ready in the washroom already but still she wants to see what he does?

Geet shows the well...

Geet: nahalo

Maan: what?

Geet shows the bucket, rope and the pulley...

Maan: isse kya hoga?

Geet: hare, aap ko ye bhi nahi patha?

Geet shows him how to draw water from the well...

Maan tries to catch the rope and pull it for he wanted to help Geet...

He ctaches hold of her hand instead...

Geet leaves the rope but Maan holds on to it...

Maan: Geet, ye kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: yahan toh sab aaise hi nahathe?

Maan: kya? tum bhi?

Maan can't imagine Geet bathing in the open...

Geet: aap bhi na? aao mere saath, aap toh ladhkiyon ki tarah sharmathe ho

She takes him to the wash room(?)...

Maan peeps in and looks at Geet...

Geet: yahan sirf ladhkiyan nahathe hai

Maan: mein yahi nahtha hoon

Maan's things have not yet arrived...Mamaji is on his way...

Geet hands him the towel and soap...

It's not the brand Maan uses but it's a new one...

Maan takes them and looks at her...

Geet: kya?

Maan: mere kapde?

Geet: Kapde andar aake pehenlo

Maan: kya? tum mazak kar rahi ho?

Geet: hare babaji? Mein kahan pasgayi, rukho

Geet runs in and comes back with lucky's vest and pyjamas...

Maan wouldn't even touch them...

Geet: toh aap mamaji ke aane tak intrezaar karlo

Maan needs to bath...

He is OK wearing the same clothes after bathing...

Geet: ab mein jaoon?

Maan: tum yahi rukhegi toh bhi mujhe koi problem nahi hogi

Geet: aaahhh

Maan: mera matlab hai, mujhe aur kuch chahiye toh tum lekhe aathi

Geet: aur much nahi milega? Yahi aapke liye zyada hai

Geet leaves ...Lucky comes with the bagaages...

Geet takes Maan's clothes and goes to give it to him...

Maan is shouting...

Maan: Geeet Geeet

Geet runs to find out what's wrong...

Maan is not used to the slippery floor...he might have fallen...

Geet: kya hua? Aap teek toh haina?

Geet knocks the door hastily...

Part57

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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nice ud
in geet house no attach washroom
maan have to come down goes in back yard
geet arranged warm water fr him
maan feel happy geet concerning fr him

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