BEST FANFIC EVER!! (NO NAME YET)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OKAY this is an Abhi-Pia fan fiction! IT'S soooo good. My friend Mina wrote it and I decided to post it here, with her permission. It is already finished, it's short but amazing. :) Enjoy!

One day there was a girl named Pia. She was young and pretty. Her neighbor was a boy named Abhi. He was in love with Pia. Pia didn't love him. She didn't know he existed. Abhi was sad. Pia loved her other macho neighbor his name was Nahar. (they are not brother and sister in this fan fic) and he loved her too. He would bounce her up and down on his muscles and Abhi would watch sadly as her hair flowed in the wind and Nahar smiled and he bounced her on his muscles some more and then hugged her.

Abhi came in between them and he said to Pia "Hi Pia."
and she responded:
"Hi Abhi."
and Nahar said "Hi Abhi."
and Abhi said "Hi Nahar."
and Abhi looked at Nahar hugging Pia and he was sad and Pia saw that. She said whats wrong. Abhi said I love you Pia and I want you to be with me.

And Pia said fine I will go out with you if my Nahar doesn't mind. Nahar smiled he said no I don't mind you guys have your fun, come back by tomorrow.

They went and they had lots of fun at a dance bar club thing and they came back and Nahar said did you have fun? Pia said yea we did okay. Nahar was happy and said now Pia is mine. Abhi you can have her later. And Pia said no im not a toy that you can throw back and forth. I'm only Abhi's not yours Nahar. I realized I love him not you okay? So bye! Nahar was sad.

And she went with abhi they got married and lived happily ever after. THE END!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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heheheee 😆 😆 😆 that's so funny.they really make a cute couple.sachin and niyati.i really think they shouldn't have made him bad but i guess on the other hand they had to do it for the story.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for reading it.. Awesome, isn't it? I really think so.. My friend Mina is a good writer, don't you think?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i like you
ur very confident
and i luv ur FF!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: IF-Lover

thanks for reading it.. Awesome, isn't it? I really think so.. My friend Mina is a good writer, don't you think?

yup it's a nice story

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