Khamoshiyan FF (MG-MN-AK) Part 9 1/4/15 - Page 3

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hi thanks 4 da pm bt read n commented already! update soon
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Please excuse me for my terrible Hindi I don't speak Hindi and this is my first FF which I'm trying to write and if you guys like it then I'll continue writing I need all ur positive n negative comments to carry on n improve

Thank You :)

Part 6

Nupur: Aaahhh!!!!

Nupur: Khushi stop it pleaseee im sorrry

Khushi: Nahi meh tumhe nahi chodunghi whining like a little baby she ran behind her with a BIG jug of orange juice

Nupur: Khushiii nahi plzz meine kaha na sorry

Khushi: Sorry can not make a dead person alive

Nupur: Khushii ur not dead

Khushi: Han per meh mare sakti ti na

Nupur: Kushi tu kitni badi notanki hai tuje pata hai .. by god

Khushi: Last warning ...1...

Nupur: KHUSHI !!!!!

Khushi: 2...

Nupur: MUMMY!!!! AAAHHH

Geet: Kya hau??? Huh kushiii yeh tum kya kar rahi ho

Nupur: Oh thank god

Geet rushes to khushi and grabs the jug

Khushi: Diii wapas karo

Geet: Nahi yeh juice pene keliye hai nahane ke liye nahi

Khushi: Theik hai

khushi slyly gets the glass of water on the table next to her and pours it on nupur

Nupur: KHUSHII!!! yeh tum ne kya kiya pura bhega diya

Mum: Yeh kya hora ha hai ??

Mum: Nupur tum bheg kaise gai??

Nupur: Maa...

Khushi: MAA!! Yeh dekho nupur ne kya kiya mujh per meri hi ice cream gira diya

Nupur: Tum ne hi to kaha tha

Khushi: Huuh juthi meh tumhe aisa kyun kahugi

Nupur: Mujhe kya pata

Mum: Ek minute pehle mujhe batao kya hua

Khushi: App ko yad hai hum jab ice cream khne gaye the aur waha MERI favourat ice cream thi

Nupur: woh meri bhi favourat hai

Khushi: Lekin woh mujhe milli!! Aur nupur ko nahi kunki sirf ek hi bachi thi ... Aur jalan meh woh use mujh per gira di *sniff sniff* dekha apki zalim beti ko

Nupur: Acha or tum ne jo kiya woh .. Maa khushi ne janbujke papa se mujhe dat kilvayi aur phir pure raste mujhe jala jala kha rahi thi

Geet: aur isiliye tumne uski ice cream usi peh gira di

Nupur: Haan hehehe

Mum: Hai bhagwan sare namune mere hi gham meh bhare ne the... Acha thik hai pehle kushi tum jakar naha lo ... Aur tum jakar kapre badal lo0 or apne bal sukhao

Both quitely cleaned them selfs up

Later at night all three girls tucked in bed ready to gossip

Khushi: dii apka interview kaisa tha

Geet: Kya batau tumhe pehle to jub meh office ke under gayi tho lek ladke se takrayi aur nurvasness meh maine uspe chiladiya

Nupur: bichara

Geet: woh bichara nahi hai usne bhi kuch kam nahi chilaya aur phir meh ek sweet si khate pite ghar ki ladki se mili pinky woh itna bolti hai ke subhe se sham ho jaye lekin uski bak bak band nehi hoti

Khushi: wow dii appka din tho bohat hi intresting tha

Geet: yeh tho shurvat hai picture abhi bakhi hai
Phir meh adi sir se mili
Adi sir bohat hi ache he uno ne mujse ache se bat ki
Aur phir meh upne boss se milli woh hi mere interview le raha tha aur meri phuti kismath nikli ke mera boss woh hi admi tha jise maine takrai

Nupur: Arre yeh woh hi scean hai jho CMB mein tha kya baat hai

Geet: CMB??

Nupur: Uffo... chal mere bhai meri budhu behain

Nupur: mera din toh bohot hi sweet aur simple tha maine humare collage ke upcoming talant paraid ka form bhardia hai aur phir main sabko mere acting skills dekaungi haayy!!! ..aur phir karan johar mujhe apni agli film main lega aur woh bhi sharuk khan ke sath HAAYYY!!! meri toh life set hai by god

Geet: Nupur tum kyun hawa me mahel bana rahi ho

Nupur: kaisi di ho tum meri motivate kare ki baja tum mere talant pe doubt kar rahi ho tut tut tut tum dekhna ek na ek di yeh zaroor hoga... Hai na khushi?

(Both turn to khushi ) Geet & Nupur: Khushi!

Khushi: huh... Jii kya huwa

Geet: tumhe kya huwa achanak se itni shant kyun ho

Khushi: kuch nahi

Nupur: kya tum abhi bi ghusa ho us ice cream walle incident ke wajase ??

Khushi: nahi meh bass thak gayi hoon

Geet: oh acha thek hai chol soo jate hai good night

Nurpur & khushi: good night

Edited by cutestar12 - 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Well written! the sisters share a lovely bond! Geet relates wt happened! update soon
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Please excuse me for my terrible Hindi I don't speak Hindi and this is my first FF which I'm trying to write and if you guys like it then I'll continue writing I need all ur positive n negative comments to carry on n improve

Part 7

weekend morning

Knock! knock!

Dad: Geet! Nupur! Khushi!

Dad: Tum loge oot gaye??

Geet ( yawning.. while rubbing her eyes) ji papa

Dad: Niche chalo breakfast time

Geet (quickly sits upright) ha papa hum ate hai

She could hear Loud foot steps fading away

Geet: Khushi nupur ottho papa bola rahe hai jaldi

Khushi: hmmm

Geet: hmm nahi otta plzz

In order to wake khushi up she pulled khushi in a sitting position which she succeeded in as khushi straight away got out of bed

They both hurry up down stairs and place them self's in there respective seats like innocent little angles waiting for their father to finish his morning walk in there small yet lavish garden

Dad: Yeh dekho meri achhi bachicya aggay ... Lekin yeh toh sirk do hai yeh nupur kaha hai

Geet and khushi glance at each other speechless

Khushi: hamer ghar ki dramebaze apni beauty sleep le rahi hai

Dad: Yeh kaisi beauty sleep hai jo subhe hota hi use ek dayan ki humshakal bana deti hai

All of them burst into laughter

Nupur (while climbing down the stairs still half asleep and messed up hair which looked as if she got a electric shock) : app loge adhi raat mainen itna shore khy kar raha hain??

A moment of silence as all eyes are glued on nupur till reaches next to the table and they all start laughing again at nupur's innocence and the fact that her state is evidence for their fathers mean joke

Dad: (letting out a deep breath after a short period of non stop lauging) chalo ajj ka humara laughter therapy hogaya ab mujhe yeh batao ke tum dono ki classes kab shuru ho rahi hai ( facing kushi n nupur) aur tum office kab join kar rahi ho

Khushi : coming monday humari classes officially shuru honge

Geet: aur meri bhi office Monday se shuru horahi hai

Dad: acha theik hai tho...

Nupur ( interrupts) mujhe bhook laghi hai!!
Aur pancakes khaneke ka maan kar raha hai
(making a pouty face looks towards geet with her huge puppy dog eyes) Dii

Geet: kya hai

Nupur: apko pata hai app kitni achi cook hai

Geet:(in a sarcastic tone) hai itni achi ke tum sitha hospital ponch jaouge haina

Nupur: HUH dii yeh ap kya keh rahi hai by god apke hath main toh jadhoo hai

Geet glares at nupur with her narrow eyes while nupur gives geet her 100 Walt smile

Nupur: PLEASSSEEE!!!!!!!!

Geet: thek hai jarahi hoon ... Umm khushi?

Slowly taking a plate in front of her, khushi hides her face in order to avoid the situation seeing this geet raises her voice

Geet: KHUSHI!

Khushi: jee dii (peeping from the side of the plate)

Geet: raises her eyebrows and taps her foot while trying not to smile at her sisters antics

Khushi: Dii Kachra!

Geet: (confused) kya

Dad: tut tut tut.. Khushi, geet ko kachra bola rahi ho??

Geet: meh kachra?? Raising her head up at the sealing Hai Baba jii

Khushi: nahi dad, dii plate pe kachra tha app nahi

Nupur: hai bhagwan tu mujhe tuhale ab yeh bhook mujhe se saha nahi jata... Dii

Geet: Khushi

Khushi: jee

Geet: chalo

Khushi bangs the plate while getting up, glares at nupur and starts mumering both geet and khushi enter the kitchen and start preparing the pancakes.

Edited by cutestar12 - 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! superbly written! Their dad is wonderful! Nupur is hilarious! She makes Geet n go n make pancakes! update soon
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Teaser 1

Khushi: tic tic 1

Geet: tic tic 2

Khushi & geet : (giggling) tic tic 3

Teaser 2

All three girls screem PAPA!!!!!!!

CRASH!!!!!!!!!!
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Please excuse me for my terrible Hindi I don't speak Hindi and this is my first FF which I'm trying to write and if you guys like it then I'll continue writing I need all ur positive n negative comments to carry on n improve

Thank you!!

Part 8

Later in the evening (dinner table)

Mum: geet, nupur, khushi zara niche aker meri madath karo khane lagane ke liya

Three of the girls : coming!!

As usual geet and khushi run down the stairs together while singing old movie songs geet enters the kitchen and khushi stops and stickes her face infront of the mirror right next to the kitchen door and starts fixing her hair

Geet: khushi yeh plates zara table pe rakh do

Khushi: (takes the plate and heads off to the dining table while singing) aaa zara karib se jo pale mile naseeb se aaja

Mum: isse kya huwa

Geet: gana gahane ka bhoot char gaya hai

Mum: ufff phir se?

Geet simply nods with a cute smile while watching khushi set the table and singing beyond off key And walks towards her to place the food on the table and slightly slips but keeps herself balanced

Khushi: Aye bhai jara dekh ke chalo aage hi nahi pichhe bhi

Geet: uffo khushi bass kare nahi toh mere kan phat jayenge aur mere raste se hato

Khushi: (Purposely bending next to geets ears she began her awful tuneless singing) Hum jis raste pe chale us raste pe thi preet khadi (sticking her tongue out at geet)
Geet: khushi!!! ( In reflex geet slaps khuashi on her shoulder but unfortunately misses as khushi ran back up stairs giggling)



*Next Morning*
(In the car off to the picnic point)

Nupur: car trips bohot boring hoti hain by god hum kitne ghante se gadhi meh ghum rahen hau kub panchenge

Geet: nupur hume sirf 7 minute pahle ghare se nikhle the thori hi daree aur

Khushi: chlo antakshri khele

Geet: theik hai ( starting from nupur sitting on the left hand side to khushi comfortably sitting in the middle she starts the game and the last letter R ends on khushi)

Khushi: Ruk ruk ruk ruk... Ruk ruk ruk arey baba ruk, o my darling give me a luk Dil meraa dhadake tere liye, dil meraa tadape tere liye Gussa teraa wallah wallah, nakhre tere uff uff uff Love love love love tumse love huwa

Nupur: chii kitna poorana ghana tha ... Dii tumhari bari A

Geet: aaja aaja mere raanjhana, ve aaja aaja
tere des sajan, aayi teri dulhan
doli le aayi, dekh tere aangan
zara daaman mere aachal se baandhana
aaja aaja mere raanjhana, ve aaja aaja
aaja aaja mere raanjhana, ve aaja aaja

tere jo waade, reh gaye aadhe
main woh nibhaaungi oh humdam
saat samandar lang diye maine
tujh ko badhaane hai chaar kadam
saathiya...

Nupur: Ya... Ya se konsa gana gahun

Khushi: tic tic 1

Nupur: ruko meh soch rahi hun

Geet: tic tic 2

Nupur: Ek minute yaar

Khushi & geet : (giggling) tic tic 3

Nupur: (mouning like a baby) thats not fair koi ya se gana nahi hai meh nahi khale rahi hu...

Dad: Yahoo! Yahoo!
chaahe koyi mujhe junglee kahe, kehne do jee kehta rahe
Hum pyaar ke toofaanon mein gire hai, hum kya kare
Chaahe koyi mujhe junglee kahe
Yahoo! Yahoo!

Geet & khushi: papa thats not fair yeh cheating hai

Dad: aisa koi rule nahi hai ke koi bap apni beti ki madath nahi kar sakta

Nupur: thank you papa your the best ( in excitement she reaches out to hug her father as nupurs hands imbalances the steering wheel and the car gets out of control)

All three girls screem PAPA!!!!!!!

CRASH!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by cutestar12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 updating! marvellous update! superbly written! the have so much fun! update soon
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oh no yeh kya hogaya...plz kisiko kuch nehi hona chahiye...

superb but at d end scary update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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part 5-8
nice cute updates///
loved it...
but last past was shocking...hope all will be fine...

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