Khamoshiyan FF (MG-MN-AK) Part 9 1/4/15

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Geet Singh Shekhawat

Maan Singh Khurana

Nupur Singh Shekhawat

Khushi Singh Shekhawat

Arnav Singh

Mrs Naina Singh Shekhawat

Mr Rajveer Singh Shekhawat

Pinky

Adii

Nandkishore/NK

Mr Shukla

Tammna

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Part 1: Scroll Down

Teaser 1 : Page 2

Part 2: Page 2

Part 3: Page 3

Part 4: Page 3

Part 5: Page 5

Part 6: Page 5

Part 7: Page 6

Part 8: Page 6

Part 9: Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago

Please excuse me for my terrible Hindi I don't speak Hindi and this is my first FF which I'm trying to write and if you guys like it then I'll continue writing I need all ur positive n negative comments to carry on n improve

Part 1

The sun rises on a beautiful house near the city and as you take a tour around the house you come across a big room shared by 3 amazing and fun loving girls who lay on a bed peacefully sleeping and as the sun enters the room it wakes the first girl and as we see her eyes opening, a sweet smile appears on her innocent face welcoming a new day. When suddenly we hear someone's footsteps coming towards their room to wake the 3 girls

Mum: geet, nupur, khushi uto tum logo ko college ke liye dher ho jayegi.

Geet: good morning mamma.

Mum: good morning beta. Acha ab tumahri bheno ko bhi utha do. verna tum sub late ho javoge.

Geet: ok mamma

and she exits the room leaving her oldest and mature daughter in charge of waking her two sweet yet childish sisters Geet. Walks towards her sisters and shakes them and says

Geet: nupur... Khushi uto varna hume der ho jayagi

Nupur : di bas thodi der or plz

Geet : hmmm ...khushi at least tum tho uth jao kuki tum hai bohhot der lagti hai tayar thane ke liye come now get up

Khushi : no di I need my beauty sleep 5 more minutes plz

Geet : khushi dont worry tum bohot khubsurat ho u dont need beauty sleep... Ab utho... Varna... Varna mein (she scans the room in order to find a way to get her stubborn sisters to wake up and her eyes lay on a large jar of water and a naughty smirk appeared on her face) mein tum logo par ye bada jug pani ka dal dongi

Khushi and nupur giggle and say: okaai di (as they already know that geet it to sweet and doesn't have the guts to do that)

Geet : meh mazak nahi kar rahi hun ( she makes a irritated sound and pouts as she crosses her arms)

Seeing this both khushi and nupur each open their right eye

And say : aww di were sorry as they both squeezed her between them self's geet sweetly say its okaii and pours the big jug of water on top of them

Nupur and Khushi: Ahhh di yeh apne kya kiya

As Geet quickly ran out of the room khushi and nupur ran right behind her the 3 girls ran playfully across the corridor and down the stairs as geet was about to take cover by placing her mother in front of her however they finally caught her And hugged her while pouring a glass full of water

Geet: ahhh yeh kya tha

Nupur and khushi: umm punishment

Geet :punishment? Hai baba ji bhli ka toh zamana bhi nahi hai aur yeh punishment kisliye hai tum logo ko dare hone se bachan ke liye? In fact...ju should thank me instead

Khushi : punishment for spoiling my beauty sleep!! (baby face)

Geet, nupur and their mother stood there looking at khushi for a minute while khushi purposely breaks the eye contact and says

Khushi : umm ab kyh hume collage ke liye dar nahi ho rahi hai hmmm?

Mom : are hai jaldi jao aur tayar ho jao

The 3 girls rush to their room and quickly get dressed, as being the oldest and mature geet wears a beautiful pink anarkali outfit, nupur wears the same one in blue and the only odd one out is khushi due to her being the youngest she's more loved and modern which is why she wears a white top up to her knees and a denim blue skinny jeans

The three girls come down for breakfast and see no one on the table so they decide to wait for there father to come (5minute went by)

Nupur: maa papa kaha hai

Mum: vho tho tayar ho rahe hai thoi hi der me ajaenge me tu teeno ke liye abhi khana lati hun

(Khushi rolles her eyes and a cheeky grin appears on her face) she slowly gets up and sits on his dads (hand/head) chair

Khushi : ahem...beta geet tum theyar ho interview ke liye

Geet : umm ha papa ... (giggles)

Khushi: hmm acha (pushes her imaginary glasses up)

Both nupur n geet start laughing

Khushi: Nupur

Nupur: ji papa

Khushi: tum jub collage to please kuch parhiy be kerlena mein pesa barbad kern eke liye tum mein college nahi bhege hraha hun. Mein itni menet se kama ta hun or tum ho parhi ka name hi nahi le rahi ho While she is imitating her father she gets a tap on her shoulder but she does not bother looking who taps her shoulder and continues her incredibly big lecturer to nupur Papa : ( ahem) Khushi : (enlarge in shock and turns her head to see the father there) oops (she gives a innocent smile and gets up and goes and sits on her chair)

All : good morning papa

Papa : good morning tum sub ready ho college ke phela din ke liye

All : ha papa

Papa : beta geet tum theyar ho interview ke liye All three look and each other and start giggling

Geet : ha papa lekin mein bahot nerves hun

Papa : dont worry beta sub kuch thik hoga

Khushi : ha di aur vese bhi jo bhi aap ko dekhe ga wo aap ko dekher hi flat ho jayega aur aap ko internship ke liye select ker lega kyun nupur di 😉

Nupur : khushi tum bilkul sahi ke rahi ho aje to di kya gazab dha rahi he

Geet : mama dekho na in do no ko muje thang karher

Mama : are tum do no kyun thang karher ho meri beti ko 😉

Geet : mama aap bhi

Mama : acha ab chalo breakfast ker lo

They all had their breakfast with full on masti. All the three girls went to their new college.

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Posted: 12 years ago

thanx for your suggestion i will surely think about it 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

"hum ladkiyan"
or "apni gharasti"
or"ghar aagan"
i liked da cncept very much

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you for your suggestions here is a small teaser for you

Teaser 1

My name is shela...nahi nupur nupur ki javani hayi kya bath hai
(while singing the song she leaves khushi and quicky runnes toward the classroom

A hand slowly reaches out toward khushis shoulder. DiiDii!!! ...

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Part 2

geet, nupur and khushi finally reach college

Geet: nupur khushi ki de yan rakh na voh college me nahi hai tume tho pata hai voh seniors kaise hai

Nupur : don't worry di agar voh seniors ko khushi mile gayi tho voh khud bhag jayenge khushi ki bakwaas sun ke by god (slightly giggles while looking at khushi's weird but funny expressions)

Khushi: DI!!

Geet: acha ab mujhe der ho rahi hai me jarahi hun all the best for your first day of collage khushi our nupur thori parai kar na our han ab koi be ladke ke sath scene math create kar na ajj kadko ko baksh de na plz

(khushi giggling in the background)

Nupur n khushi both give geet a warm hug n wish her best of luck for her interview

Khushi: geet di tho chali gaye ab

Nupur: ab kyha? chalo ander

Khushi: nahi mujhe bohot darr lagraha hai

Nupur: kuch nahi hoga me tumhare sath he rahungi promise

Khushi: okaii

both enter inside the building n look around trying to find their way

Nupur: aaahhh

Khushi: kya huwa di

Nupur : dekh vaha 2nd year ke liye dancing our acting ke classes hai tuhe tho pata hai mujhe a badi actress bana hai our un filmy ghano pe dance karna hai

My name is shela...nahi nupur nupur ki javani hayi kya bath hai
(while singing the song she leaves khushi and quickly runs toward the classroom

Khushi: dii rukho app ne tho kaha app mere sath honge di mujhe nahi pata mujhe kaha gana hai dii!!!!!

Nupur:ha mein tumhare sath hi hun sirf abhi nahi meh tumhe bade me milti hun theke hai upna dheyan rakna

Khushi: ab meh kya karun (crying face)

A hand slowly reaches out towards khushis shoulder

On the other hand Geet had 3 interviews Mittal Construction, Kapoor Construction and K Construction she had give her interview for the Mittal Construction and Kapoor Construction only left was K Construction but because of some emergency at K Construction the interview was held at their office and the interview will be done by the MD of the company of K Construction.