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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Thank you so much for the love and appreciation. I am on it for the next parts.. will Post as soon as I finish! Love the patience you people have for me :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is amazing girl
loved it..
continue soon
keep writing
with love
RIDDHIMA
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 7

Hard-est was the time when I had left him, with his baby on my womb and the college and the graduation ceremony. But I never knew, I would be put of such sort of a situation. I have seen Ms. Renuka transform for her son, her efforts to be the kind of mother he wished. I also see Piuu in my front, whom I can't live with out.

DILEMA it was!

CONFUSION it was!

Sir! That's all I want to say, nothing else to add, to see all united is my dream

Interesting! Very Interesting! (as Vardhan sir kept an eye on the three of us!)

I passed by those corridors, Vardhan sir, had put up a problem of an IIT level on the very same black board which had turned white with markers now! Its been long I have answered such questions. I had even remembered me and Randhir fighting to solve them. Now it was the very same test time. Piuu was intelligent, very intelligent, far more intelligent than her peers, she could even crack the GRE and TOFEL and even some IIT-JEE questions.

Maa, that question seems easy, but why haven't anyone tried?

(It dawned me, I thought Like father, Like daughter)

Piuu, beti, okay! Lets try!

There I was with a marker on my hand, but this time I let her try and there he was, with a marker on his side.

Ohhoo! Aggarwal...opps Aggarwals, this is not your level

Really? Randhir!..

Ohh! Lets compete then,

Naa! I'm letting my daughter try!

Ohh! Okay! Yeh toh tumhari tharah farzi nahi lagti

Uncle, Im Pria Aggarwal, main kissise nahi darta. Lets begin, aur jab main jeet jaongi, apko maloom hoga ki kaun farzhi hai!

Ohh! Attitude ahh. I like it!

The series of the conversations made me realize that they are so much alike, and I felt so guilt in stealing away a father from a daughter and daughter from a father.

I broke from my trance to see them compete with my daughter racing ahead of him.

Yaaay! I won! And you are the farzi uncle now! (with a smirk on her face)

Wow! Ms. Engineer senior, your daughter is really smart. I am sure ki yeh uski Fa...a..ther... per gayyi hogi (Father ..the word was very hard on him)

Acha! Bachu.. how old are you?

Fear dawned on my face!

Edited by LilyPoove - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

I will post the next few chapters after 3-4 days! Hope you all liked the journey so far! :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update...eagerly waiting for the nxt one
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The update was great!
Eagerly waiting for the next one!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
loving the journey
update soon
loved the scene between ron and piuu
piuu is microzerox of ron
he he he
keep writing
update soon
with love
RIDDHIMA
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
hey read just now awesome story
continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Hey...just read ur story...
It's amazing fantastic.awesome, fabulous...
It brought tears to my eyes...
And priya is so smaaart...
Loved it...
Pleaseee update sooon and please pm me...
Lots of love,
Ananya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb story.loved it
pls update soon

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