FF: Reborn From The Ashes Of The Past (Part 3 on Page 3) - Page 3

I really wish this happens in the show now !! It would be awesome..
Out of words to praise your writing, LadyMeringue !!
The way you wrote their moments in the frozen state were so lyrical..

It was a perfect ending to the earlier equally engrossing two chapters.. In all, a superb read !!
You should publish all 3 chapters to the MATSH scriptwriters !

Originally posted by: imkpiyush

That was one hell of a writing I must say if this happens in that show right now somehow it will be worth watching...

Just got lost in ur writing throught out the story I was imagining the ranveer ishani in that as if it is happening really...

Great writing keep it up...

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Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Wow!
Quite an interesting plot it was. And your writing style is very impressive.
Coming to the story, I wish something like this happens in the show. But alas, tall dreams rarely come true. Anyway loved Ranveer and Ishaani's confession and heart-to-heart talk. If only they had one in the show, all problems by now would have been over.
Though truth to be told I loved Chirkut's part in this. He is right. Even the audience is more than fed up of this Ranveer-Ishaani role reversal all the time.

Thanks a lot dear! 😳 And this story indeed is a product of my plea to the CV's to stop this rubber-band type khechofying drama once and for all. I can't believe that Ranveer is daft enough to believe that Ishaani would still choose Chirag over him. Seriously, he has no clue about how a woman thinks whatsoever.

Originally posted by: matsh

I really wish this happens in the show now !! It would be awesome..
Out of words to praise your writing, LadyMeringue !!
The way you wrote their moments in the frozen state were so lyrical..

It was a perfect ending to the earlier equally engrossing two chapters.. In all, a superb read !!
You should publish all 3 chapters to the MATSH scriptwriters !

I'm happy that you liked it so much! 😃 On any other occasion, I would have considered doing it, but the CV's will end up ruining my perfect imagination of the story and will probably end up focusing the entire story on Chirag with Ranveer and Ishaani as side characters, while Ranveer will once again drown himself him self-pity! Seriously, why can't the guy get a break from this! 🥱

Originally posted by: Lucky.13

Wonderful story dear

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

interesting..

Wow.. Its just awesome dear.. really loved it.. 😳

Originally posted by: njan20

Wow.. Its just awesome dear.. really loved it.. 😳

wow it was just an amazing reading experience.

Originally posted by: ishveerfan

wow it was just an amazing reading experience.

I wish someday Cvs or most probably EK should go through our forum,she will definitely get a bunch of good writers..