SS Parud: True colors

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Hello dear friends of the Forum, a new attempt to keep alive our beloved characters of RR, the stranger much, I would love to see they soon on the screen, I hope you liked this short story, with great affection all. Waiting response all of you! 😛Anny14


"Is necessary to the silence of the reason to cure the monsters" M. Foucault

First shot

Although both did not know each other well, and for this reason was for me very difficult to elucidate why this girl resorted to me, a stranger, in a moment so difficult. I finally opted to ask her. -What the hell are you doing here at this hour of the night ? first error. The only thing I was hurry inconsolable crying that resisted in his throat. She cried as I never heard crying. She rubbing his tears, between moans that confused an incoherent babbling that I couldn't hear anything. She cried without suspicion, without realizing its disastrous state, in a way that inevitably touched me.

And my second mistake. Embrace it with all my forces wanted to start that infamous pain of his soul. -Paro! -What happens? She cried harder and her eyes were closed with unexplained pain. Anger and immediately after, the terror after a few seconds that challenged my perception of time. Bring her to my office, I sat down it across desk and squat in front of her, wait for a response. She only cried...

Their movements were clumsy, foolish, without rhythm. Gestures weren't wearing their almost perfect face, and in his body be could glimpse of fatigue and pain, what she had spent hours before? For a moment I thought she was crazy. Soon I would be stop thinking (properly I guess). While I try serving the coffee, she crouched on his knees covering his face with both hands, her hair fell to the side and I saw his back, crossed by the incandescent red sashes of what looked like strings, or lashes. I was thoughtless and why no doubt. When the last strength left to used my reasons, I lost the alternatives and found only a sense. I take the first aid kit and i carefully clean and cure each stroke in her Immaculate skin and then she fell asleep in that position, sobbing and tired with their hands on the face resting on his knees.

The dark is the color of mystery and was that the mystery seduced me. And my third error, the worst of all. That night for the first time, takes a woman to my house. I weight her trying not to touch his wounds, his face was so close to mine, I wanted to stem the tide of my thoughts and only managed to get puzzled. She moaned in whispers, in their dreams of pain and tormented me to hear it. That made me both wants her, craved embraces her and protect her. I support her in bed and stayed sat by her side, watching the blood on their hands and clean them carefully, I knew that Paro was alive of miracle, but by that refuge is in me? I would have sworn that the only thing that felt for me was panic; their eyes were always full of fear. Except for one time in the desert...

She didn't want to do it, but that bloody man forced her to do so, as it was his life or yours, there were no more options. Saw Bindi die that night, she saw how his Takur murdered her best friend, : - had I not seen it never would have believed it.- Then it fell into the hands of Bima, this Hound hit her so hard that he felt his poor bones to almost break. It is true that it would have probably been more prudent not to surrender to the authorities once had done that, however and although it was in self-defence, as forgetting that. It is a murder... but she had no choice, her life was in danger. And she knew that the Takursa would not move a finger for the killer of Bima.

Of all the men he most feared was that the BDS officer. He had rescued it days earlier. His Eagle eyes, instill her terror. - I didn't know his name, but knew where to find him-; thought and ran to the barracks almost breathless. This Guy such liked his work, and so much was that it was sticking a sword in an enemy to frighten a woman. By the way, which he moved or stopped to watch her, as a bronze statue of arrogance, was a cold soldier. His almost impassive face wasn't playful, or derisive; he was serious, austere; but as Bindi had said wonderfully good-looking.

Seeing he Paro couldn't issue a single word, his hard tone it frozen her and she pour out all his pain before his eyes. And, at the bottom of the eyes brown deep swamps, a force that attracted the will, and that added thrill the deepest fears, as she could be lost forever on them.

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Second shot

To Tejawat did not like to get dirty hands, for that was a horde of useless men that obeyed him blindly, and feared him more than anything in the world. No one disobeyed his orders, no one questioned it. Nobody had much power not in his city, and he knew it very well. He entered the Haveli with an air of superiority and scowling, stood in front of two of his minions and ordered them:-in a couple of hours to get rid of the bodies, looking for a remote place, where they do not find them! Don't burn them, there are patrols wandering the city. First error. Takur don't clarify what bodies or where should leave them.

It was a night full of missteps, Bindi and Paro should not have gone to the terrace. They should not have seen weapons. He wouldn't have had to silence them. Tejawat just wanted to relieve and get rid of all the pressures and frustrations of a bad day. Mala came out of the bathroom after a long shower, with a simple and elegant black sari. Tejawat with relaxed eyes without arguments or anger, looked at his beautiful wife fix damp hair. -You can spend a whole day with her and still feel only a colleague, but everything you need is a few minutes of conversation, to feel like true lover again. -He thought. Second error.

He said with a smile:-would pay for one of those thoughts that you have beautifully distracted.

-Bima brought some news about the missing girls ? -She asked trying to control its concern.

-Bima still no return yet. - he replied deflecting the look. -Takuranisa comes to sleep. The day has been too long. -He said.

He didn't want to follow the course of the talk, as with everything in life, there are good things and bad things in the talks also. Some conversations can make you feel on top of the world, while some other conversations can be beaten down and exhausted to spend the night. He didn't want to lie to her, but he could not tell her the truth. Beyond romantic radiance sometimes, unintentionally, in some conversations we just knowing too much or leaving a trail that sooner rather than later it will end up being used against us.

Mala leaned on the bed beside him , he took his hand almost by instinct or custom, and stayed with his eyes closed listening to as his breathing to fall completely asleep soothed. Mala head turned and didn't stop. She couldn't sleep, full images that tortured her that it sticks all over his body. And then in horror she quickly look at him, he slept without feeling any remorse, she dropped his hand slowly, gave repulsion touch it...

Fifteen years on its side and had never felt so much disgust. The man who had made his life a paradise of happiness was nothing more than a beast disguised as a gentleman. She had seen him kill Bindi with your own hands, strangle her without mercy. And then with all your cold blood clean their hands with a tissue, as if that could remove him as much soil. Then he ordered to Bima take care of Paro. She couldn't believe it; they loved her like a daughter. Mala is covered mouth to not shout of despair, not...

Everything happened very fast. While Bima beating Paro without mercy ; Mala approached him from behind and take his sword and grasping it with both hands and with all its strength buried it in the back of the hound. Mala stayed froze, sawing Bima body subside, convulse a few times until his glassy eyes were inert. She watched Paro not is moved, She was terrified of seeing so much death to its around, Mala ran to the Haveli, were stopped after a column and she hear his husband order:-don't burn them...

She locked with key in the bathroom, opened the shower and slipped below with all her clothes, while saw the blood diluted in water; she started weeping and weeping with all her desires. She swear that need to unmask the liar and find out the truth until the ultimate consequences... would who has not asked God, a miserable test, to be able to argue a seemingly far-fetched theory but that, against all odds, it is real as life itself? Who has not thought once that the end justifies the means?

Tell me, what do you think... feedback is wellcame!

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Edited by Anny14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good one dear.
Only if Mala showed such guts in the serial.
And loyalty to those who trusted her.Alas...
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Both pieces were super amazing dear loved it. Great writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: JJKKL

Good one dear.
Only if Mala showed such guts in the serial.
And loyalty to those who trusted her.Alas...

Thank you dear, 😛always thought that Mala (Sadiya Siddiqui. An excellent actress of fact) should be a brave woman, but her character was adrift in the series and when Tejawat (Tarun Khanna) left the Show lost all hope of seeing a bad 'sleeping with the enemy', that an interesting track would have been.

I do not know whether by costs of production or what, all the characters ended up in the Haveli Ranawat. Even Leila had to shoot at Haveli scenario. And the wonderful scenes of Rajasthan were in the memory of our eyes...at least. It is only an SS with my desires and dreams even are some updates I hope they like you! With love. Anny14❤️

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Originally posted by: Marvel-freak

Both pieces were super amazing dear loved it. Great writing.


Thank you very much, I loved your gif, are great!😛

I know that so far looks like a dark police but the next shot brings a bit of subtle eroticism, Hope you like it,

love Anny14❤️

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Third shot

Paro was in an unknown room, in the midst of the gloom, with their hands tied behind the back. Rudra found knots and slightly loosen the ropes that had her completely immobilized, Rudra watched his arms and his wrists while he felt through their veins run the blood with fury, strings were gripping in the flesh and although the surface was soft made him rubbing on the skin that was becoming more and more pink and sensitive. Rudra approached the hand and began to stroke to Paro. She was unfeeling, stood unwatched Rudra's act.

Her body did not react to contact; she was not going to do it. Rudra's hands were a little rough; however his caresses were not painful, impatient, or cold. He knew how to play to leave a trace of heat over the surface of the skin. They slowly were calming the rubbing of strings. She remained still and turned the face could not withstand more blatant contact, until that time she had not lost detail anything and watched him with bright pupils.

She seemed to crave more understand what this man intended to his caresses. He turned away and she felt anxious tingling go all over your body because I wanted to feel his contact. Would the kind of madness or illness be losing her? Could not... I don't want his caresses was a jallad!

Rudra: -Do not you like to touch you, right? - But also, don't want that me away?

- How did he have come to that conclusion? wonder Paro with bitter surprise. He didn't like that they stopped it, but it had supported those strokes to avoid that the take out hasty conclusions. She wants to be strong; it would not fall before him again.

Paro: - Where we are?

Rudra: -It is evident - he whispered - in my house.

His voice unleashed a whirlwind of feelings in her mind, he's safe and arrogant, and read me as an open book. Paro didn't want to show is vulnerable before him again last night she had cried too much, and it could not tell him anything.

He half sat in the chair across from her, and he looked at her from above overlooking it, Paro felt the tension between, on an exhausted body, it seemed that he wanted to devour her or kill her. He was not confused or doubted. His patience was admirable. Slowly lower the closing of his brown leather jacket and removed it without observing her, Paro blinking or once, its white face barely illuminated in the darkness.

Rudra side tightened and he gave a moan of pain dry, short and deep, which put more alert to Paro yet, blood began to sprout at the height of his ribs through his white shirt. Then he lifted it to observe his wound, showing the numerous scars that crossed her body, he thought that perhaps the hiding much more, his eyes were fixed on her belly taut and muscular. Paro saw he had tanned skin, fighters athletic body, so... this is the skin of the warrior, she thought. Your body is how my soul feels at this time. A single tear escapes his eyes while she could control it. Then another small drop furrowed his cheek. -Not... He is nothing admirable! What madness or illness is taken her? I could not... he is a jallad!

Rudra looked at her and his eyes were puzzled to see it. She cried and looked at him with admiration. Why? Her tears glistened in the dim light, she was a wonderful show, he felt tightness in the chest that made him hold air, shook his throat he couldn't say anything. His hazel eyes were flooded most beautiful thing I had ever seen and almost most disturbing. What trick of fate an angel would become a murderer?

At this moment Aman through the door hurriedly and stood next to Rudra.

Aman: -greater need stitches in the wound, he said.

Rudra: 'No time, what news you brought me?

Aman: -Officers find two bodies on the road, is a Takur's man and a girl ... - Aman gazed at Paro's reaction, but she only bowed with deep pain. And a new shipment goes to the border that evening, the data is safe.

Rudra: - Let's go Aman. He told and went out the door and headed man with surprised face standing at the door: If you want could feed her but not untie her. Not only was surprise there was a glint of childish mischief in the older man, evidencing their curiosity about the girl.

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While later reached the morgue...

The body of the victim had just a scratch on the face and neck and yet the body of Paro was completely bloodied and crashed, he closed his eyes at the sight of that little body trying to get rid of this man with one hand I could crush your head, he didn't trust anyone, because they would have been to treat her like suspect, after they taken a painful confession, she was find culprit by law, they couldn't do otherwise, then she would have to receive their punishment. That the way as he should be acting, but...

Rudra looked at the coroner and asked: - What do we have?

Man of 41 years, Cause of death a cut in the back of the victim, between the 7th rib and left shoulder blade wound, directly affecting the heart and severe cuts and bruises made hours after post mortem. The sharp object is a ceremonial sword that belonged to the deceased. No traces and reviewed.

- Female, 21, Cause of death strangulation. Besides strong shocks caused by a metal object and bruises on his back and arms, also broken right wrist and a shoulder dislocation produced post mortem.

The bodies were found on the outskirts of Birpur, post mortem wounds indicate that tried to cover up the crime. Or move bodies. The place and the location where they were found not match the causes of death.

Rudra went hurry to his office, He don't like the morgue smell, the white sheets cover bodies, wounds in the back of Bindi, exactly like Paro, his mind spinning at full speed and could not Paro pull your head. Alone in her room, in her bed, her body crushed to death by that bas***d.

Well; what's done is done, no use lamenting now-thought Rudra trying to self-control while remembered how looked this lifeless and that maybe Paro had could take a place on morgue too.

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Tell me, what do you think... feedback is welcome!

Please 👍🏼 hit the like button. Thanks! 😆 Anny14

Edited by Anny14 - 10 years ago
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I lived the third part aswell. You are a great writer. Can you pm after you write because I don't come on the forum so often. :)

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