Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#541

Heyloo🤗

I am back with the next chapter! It's turning more and more into a family story, but I am hoping that you're liking it... wherever the story is heading. I realise it's very simple and straightforward, but while writing it I always have this warm feeling in me. Anyway, just hoping that you're not getting bored of this story since it seems to be heading the "simple" way.

A little note about this chapter: I don't know if temples are open at midnight (most likely no). But please can we leave reality aside just for this little fact and read.😳

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I hope the text conversation wasn't confusing to read!

Hope you liked the chapter.. do leave your comments😳😳

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#542

Res//Unres

YAY!!!!!!!!

Me first🥳🥳

Awesome update

Loved it

Loved the text convo

Arjun's proposal was so sweet and simple

Just loved it

Arjun and his Dad baked a cake for Sakshi😃

So sweet

And the last part

It was just beautiful

Waiting for the next part

Continue soon

Edited by skrafty - 10 years ago

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#543

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing..
Sooo Magical Sooo Beautiful
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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Shivani P

@Lovelost_shivi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#544

I loved it... awesome update... continue soon...

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#545

I suddenly drop the knife on the table and put my arms around him. "Thank you, Papa," I whisper, holding on to him as I would have once held my father

Now that is what is called as a father daughter moment.

Trust me on this one Ritu.These last lines gave me goosebumps 😳

Just before darkness falls around the room, I feel a gentle wind blow through my hair. My gaze falls upon my mother's photograph on the table and that's when I think I hear her laugh. And then, I hear a whisper, as low as the sound of a gentle breeze, "Happy Birthday, Butterfly."

I am very sorry to say but this FF is the one that makes me crazy like an emotional wreck not for the leads love story but for the leads booming relationship with the other characters.First it was Maai-Arjun & now it's Saakshi & HER Papa🤗

Tumko **Kick**

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#546

Yes...I was on holiday...😃😃😃

Awesome update...

Mr Rawte was scared that his son might not propose Sakshi...😆😆😆

Yes...sometimes we need to Thank god for everything he gave us...😃😃😃

Liked text conversation...😃😃😃

Liked Arjun's simple proposal...😃😃😃

Mr Rawte & Arjun baked cake...😃😃😃

Last three words are the words that I was waiting in the whole update...😳😳😳

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#547

nice update
after so long arjun got his loving and caring family back
and even sakshi got what she craved for her father in form of mr rawte
man lagtha hain senior rawte ko bhi sakshi ne bhut impress hain ki arjun ko uski
wajah se dant pahdi 😃 😆
sakshi's b'day and on that day senior wished before arjun 😉
arjun asked sakshi for marriage and she just frooze 😊
arjun is worried for her that she would miss her mom
b'day surprise was nice and it made sakshi real emotional it was first time that her papa wished her
on her b'day
thanks for pm

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anitasharma

@anitasharma

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#548

Superb update
arjun's proposal was simple but cute
direct from heart
so sweet of mr. Rawte
because of him sakshi is getting a father's love
waiting for next part