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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#531

Simple yet sweet

and then I want chocolate milk shake

abhi issi waqt

par kaise??

patha nahi

Simple sweet [art Ri

Esp the Senior Rawte part

well demanded Sree

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Shivani P

@Lovelost_shivi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#532

Super Duper Amazing Yaara... I loved it... update soon...

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 10 years ago

#533

A beautiful trip down the memory lane...

childhood...*sigh*
it was so beautiful and peaceful part of life filled with all the energy and happiness...

the lovely thing I like about yr writing ritu is...u don't exaggerate things...keeping it simple and spreading its beauty is ur forte...

loved the flashbacks ...it did remind me of my childhood...

continue soon.

love.

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#534

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb... as always
Amazing...
Loved Mr Rawte's POV it was Wonderfully Written
Loved Arakshi's childhood memories Sooo Beautiful n Lovely
They are complete now
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 10 years ago

#535

super awesome update di...Love it lots...from starting to end it's fantastic...all emotions you portrayed just beautifully...I love that FB part...super cute!!!and then Arakshi scene...lovely...Please con.sooonn!!!!

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#536

Mr. Rawte's pov was well written. Even Mr. Rawte was a strict person he missed his son.

I loved the part where Mr.Rawte, Arjun n Sakshi consoles each other. Aise hote hain family. Mr. Rawte ne Arjun ko Sakshi ke saath bhej diya. He knew Sakshi baahar se dikhaati nahi ki vo kitni disturbed hain.

Mrs. Rawte is fine now😃😃😃

Aww I loved it when Sakshi was preparing chocolote milkshake & both went to their past. Mai always brings smile on my face.

Kiss😳😳😳 Hmm Arjun now sees his would-be-wife in Sakshi. Jaldi se usse apni patni banaalo phir toh tumhe neeche sone ki zaroorat nahi padegi😉😉😉

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#537

My love for Maai overpowers everything Ritu.I blame you for this coz you have sketched these two characters sooo beautifully that I just cant resist her charm.

Finally Arjun's mom is alright.

1 Chotu sa request pleej**puppy/gorilla/elephant/monkey/hippo eyes**

Na na not the one that you are thinking.

Now that you have penned Arjun's father's POV , his views & thoughts about his son & future daughter in law,I would love to see the budding relationship of him & her daughter in law more because Saakshi never got the love of a father.A father's role model was majorly absent in her life.Pleeezzz**puppy/gorilla/elephant/monkey/hippo eyes**

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#538

**sniff**

Kya di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Amio diet e asi.. r tumi ei update die bosle..

Not fair.. Mummmyyy!!!!!!!!!

But it was an awesome update..

Thank God Mrs. Rawte is safe now..

Mr. Rawte's POV was beautifully written...

Awesome work di...

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: PoohLover
resss resss yoohooo :D

Unres😳

yes yes me doing happy dancing hehe,i waited for this sooo sooo much,it seems soo kiddish but kya karein aadat seh majboor 😆😆
Awww Bharuuu... hahaha I do it too so I understand😛 Me is happieee to see ur comment at the top too😳😳

Senior Rawte Pov,somehow he is not entirely in fault here,he wanted to have a good status,a good standard of living and somehow in the rocess he neglected the most important,precious thing he can ever have,his son arjun but better late than never,he cant go back in the past and make up for his mistakes but he can surely grab the moment now and make up for it 😊😊

Yes yess now he shall deffo make it up to his son anddd of course now he has a daughter-in-law to care for too😉

Hehe the small conversation between the father-son duo was soo sweet and funny...loove it 😃😃

Arjun is very protective about sakshi,i really love their bonding not just being in love but also great great friends and each other supporter in whatever the situation is 😛😛

Tune to thaan li hain nah to make me all senti senti...acha sorry mat bolo becuase this was beautiful how they are there to support each other always and senior rawte was soo cool with his lil dialogue at the end and his wink😉😉(i dunno how to write that "thaan" or something like that,hindi problem lol...i meant you've decided to make me all senti...samajh gayi nah)😆😆

Hahahahahaaa you're so cute! Yeshh it is thaan li! Ab senti karne ka haq banta hai mera😛 Pshhh your hindi is getting sooo good!😃 See ab main tujhe bengali bhi sikha doongi and Shree can help too LOOL🤣 And then you know what we'll dooo😛😆 I'll make u understand the lyrics of all Arijit's bengali songs
Just kidding🤣

Awww maai...just loove her ❤️❤️

Flashback flashback yes yes flashback my all time favorite part 😳😳...titli and chotu acp arjun are sooo mischievous and cute hehe

Milkshake milkshake i looove milkshake...its good to relive our childhoood from time to time and be as crazy and child like as we used to be...i loove doing that 😳😳

Hehehee now I know that you make super yummy milkshakes so when I visit you I want a chocolate Oreo one and I want your Ferrero Rocher cake with it too.. samjhi? Such cute emos!!😳

Milkshake wala kissy...awww sooo sooo romantic

Rituuu rituuu the update was totally worth waiting for and me stalking this thread 😎😎

Super duper like this beautiful and happy updateee⭐️

I miss childhood too and all the fun...but you can count on me to make you feel not 100% but atleast half of it crazyyy and naughty as you were before *wink wink* 😆😆

Merciii merciii rituu rituuu and loove you meri maharani writer

Awww.. love youuu for stalking it hehehe and also motivating me as always. What would I do without you?😳🤗

Originally posted by: skrafty
Res//unres
Awesome update
Loved it
Amazingly written
Loved the POV's
Especially Mr.Rawte's
Arjun's mom is fine😊
I also want chocolate milkshake😛😛
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon

Hehehe I made everyone wish for chocolate milkshake😆

Thanks sooo much Shravani!🤗

Originally posted by: Swara85
Ress..

Unress..
Mr.Rawte's Pov made me emotional..😭Specially the first para..He is feeling guilty for his mistakes, but glad that now he is making up for of that..So happy..! Sure he will treasure his freshly found family and the moments he get to spend with them.😃
Arjun and his convo was so sweet and special moment was when he put an arm around his shoulder..No words needed when a father does so..❤️
Ahh yes yes.. now he has time to make it up to them for everything😳
A hug from your father just makes your day, haina?😳

And when he says he need some time with his wife, then winked and Arjun's reaction..cute..and fun..😆
Trees, grass, wind, leaves..haye.. no..no no no..I'm getting distracted..

Bahahahaha... you're like me! Nature dekha toh distracted😆😆
Spring is coming Yeah that was random😆😆

Arakshi as always were sweet..😳

When he imagines Maai and her talk..that was so beautiful..Whenever I read such scenes of Maai, it always makes me feel peaceful and calm..😳

Awww..I'm happyyyt😳

Chocolate milkshake...with a ball of ice-cream..My mouth started watering..😆I used to have choco chips also in it.😛
"we're never too old for chocolate and especially, chocolate milkshakes" ..So true..My mom still scolds me when I ask for a chocolate..😆

Hehehe.. although my mum shares it with me when I want some😛 I looove dark chocolate! Oooh choco chips

And the road runner..Aww..! You did take me to my childhood days..Thank You.🤗

I used to lovee it😆😆 Beep beep! Don't thank me.. I loved writing it😳

The flashbacks were awesome..👍🏼Loved them..! Kabhi-kabhi memories like these, present se jyada acche lagte hai.

Again the last scene with Maai was ❤️

This update was BEAUTIFUL...👏And I'm so happy reading this..!
Cont soon and thanks for pm.

PS.: I'm not stressing myself..But you know reading your stories acts like a stress-buster..even Avni Di, Kunchu, Shree, to name a few, their stories too make me feel sooo happy..
Loads of Love to you all..🤗😳

Ahh thanks sooo much Swara.. it really means a lot.. you taking out so much time and writing such a huuuge comment! I am soo glad that my stories make u happy😃 Hope you're feeling better now! Love you too🤗

Originally posted by: Humzy
wow beautiful update
loved it
very nicely written
continue soon

Thanks soo much!😳

Originally posted by: NainaSM
sooo cute
arakshi supporting
mai Mr rawte superb
arakshi kiss omg
romantic
continue soon

Thanks a lott Naina🤗

Originally posted by: kunchu
Simple yet sweet
and then I want chocolate milk shake
abhi issi waqt
par kaise??
patha nahi
Simple sweet [art Ri
Esp the Senior Rawte part
well demanded Sree

Heyloo KK🤗

Hahahaa see mujhe bhi chahiye thi.. but nahi mili Khairrr

Glad you liked it.. thanks soo much!🤗

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: _Shivani_
Super Duper Amazing Yaara... I loved it... update soon...

Thanks soo much!😳

Originally posted by: fly.high
A beautiful trip down the memory lane...

childhood...*sigh*
it was so beautiful and peaceful part of life filled with all the energy and happiness...

the lovely thing I like about yr writing ritu is...u don't exaggerate things...keeping it simple and spreading its beauty is ur forte...

loved the flashbacks ...it did remind me of my childhood...

continue soon.

love.

Heyloo Birdie!🤗

Aww thanks sooo much.. that really means a lot😳 I really hope you like where the story is going.. 😃

Thanks so much for leaving a comment!

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb... as always
Amazing...
Loved Mr Rawte's POV it was Wonderfully Written
Loved Arakshi's childhood memories Sooo Beautiful n Lovely
They are complete now
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

Thanks sooo much Niki.. glad u liked it😳

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58
super awesome update di...Love it lots...from starting to end it's fantastic...all emotions you portrayed just beautifully...I love that FB part...super cute!!!and then Arakshi scene...lovely...Please con.sooonn!!!!

Thank youuu Gausii🤗

Originally posted by: Nethravathi
Mr. Rawte's pov was well written. Even Mr. Rawte was a strict person he missed his son.

I loved the part where Mr.Rawte, Arjun n Sakshi consoles each other. Aise hote hain family. Mr. Rawte ne Arjun ko Sakshi ke saath bhej diya. He knew Sakshi baahar se dikhaati nahi ki vo kitni disturbed hain.

Mrs. Rawte is fine now😃😃😃

Aww I loved it when Sakshi was preparing chocolote milkshake & both went to their past. Mai always brings smile on my face.

Kiss😳😳😳 Hmm Arjun now sees his would-be-wife in Sakshi. Jaldi se usse apni patni banaalo phir toh tumhe neeche sone ki zaroorat nahi padegi😉😉😉

Thanks soo much .. glad u liked it 😃 Hahaha that'll be happening soon😛

Originally posted by: Areesha566
beautiful update
love the fb's

Thanks sooo much!😳

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
My love for Maai overpowers everything Ritu.I blame you for this coz you have sketched these two characters sooo beautifully that I just cant resist her charm.

Finally Arjun's mom is alright.

1 Chotu sa request pleej**puppy/gorilla/elephant/monkey/hippo eyes**
Na na not the one that you are thinking.
Now that you have penned Arjun's father's POV , his views & thoughts about his son & future daughter in law,I would love to see the budding relationship of him & her daughter in law more because Saakshi never got the love of a father.A father's role model was majorly absent in her life.Pleeezzz**puppy/gorilla/elephant/monkey/hippo eyes**

Aww.. thank youu!🤗 Waise I don't think Maai would have been as loved if it hadn't been for you. 😳

Hahahaa ab toh maine woh wish bhi poori kar di😛

Coming to your request.. yeah of course! Even if you hadn't mentioned it, I would have tried to do the same anyway. As always, I hope I can keep it up to what u expect😳

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
**sniff**
Kya di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Amio diet e asi.. r tumi ei update die bosle..
Not fair.. Mummmyyy!!!!!!!!!
But it was an awesome update..
Thank God Mrs. Rawte is safe now..
Mr. Rawte's POV was beautifully written...
Awesome work di...

Hahahaa... amar likhte koto mushkil hoyechilo bol! 😛 Anywaay, glad u liked it Eshuuu🤗

Thanks soo much!