~When only LOVE remains~ SANDHIR FF |UPDATED PART 13 HAVE A LOOK!!| - Page 2

Originally posted by: Honey-FLAB

Res. :)
Not sure of when I'm gonna unres though. xD

Originally posted by: saddahqrocks

😲

😡😡😡

U better know that soon enough...warna...

ok i guess u got d hint

Nope I didn't get the hint xD
And sorry I hardly unres my comments so yeah, I won't do that

Originally posted by: Honey-FLAB

Nope I didn't get the hint xD
And sorry I hardly unres my comments so yeah, I won't do that

Originally posted by: saddahqrocks

yeah...mujhe pata hain u hardly eva unress

Learnt frm experience

Lekin ths time its not about me

Its about my friend...who has given equal contribution in all d chapters

AND im very protective of all my frnds

Toh iss baar aapke unress se pehle agar Harshu ka update aa gaya na

Toh

Toh

Toh

Toh agli baar pm hi nhi bhejungi jaao

CHAPTER# 1:
"Sanyu !!" An impatient randhir hollered. " Kitna time shona ??" They were gonna go 4 a movie that evening and randhir was getting impatient to leave."Haan, Haan ... Bas aa gayi "She came out , adjusting one earing, the other one dropping perfectky from her ear, down into a silver drop , complementing her black and silver synthetic saree with a net sleeved blouse and doris neatly and delicately criss crossed around her back . Randhirs jaw dropped into a perfect O. Sanyu laughed, her tinkling laugh making her seem even more irresistible to randhir. "Chale ab ?? Mujhe baad mein ghoor lena Movie miss ho jaaegi " ! she said , lightly punching his arm. "Tumhe aisa kyun laga ki main theatre mein movie dekhne wala tha ??? Mera plan toh kuch aur dekhne ka tha"Randhir retorted , moving closer to sanyu making her blush furiously."Tum bhina Randhir ... Chalo abjaldi!". sanyu replied, pulling him out of the door. After a 15 min car ride, they reached the theatre. They needed to hurry , as ,even though randhir had booked the tickets ithe flg done at home used up quite a bit of time. So without wasting time , they quickly settled into their seats. The lights wnt dim. The movie started. True to his words , randhirs eyes were more on sanyu than on the screen. Now, of randhirs eyes were on sanyu, how could she look at the screen ?She blushed and burried her face in randhirs shoulder. He smiled at her cute antics. She blushed even more. They were engrossed in their sm-bl-sm game when suddenly the lights came on. It was interval(Argh! Kebab mein haddi) They got up n came out towards the anack bar n sat sown on a secluded bench. T didnt want to eat anything there as a lovely dinner made by sanyu n ramu kaka was wimaiting for them at home n randhir loved ghar ka khana . , if it was made by sanyu. They just sat n talked for a while."Randhir ek min ruko."Main thoda paani leke aayi"Sanyu said after a while."Arrey arrey... tum ruko , main laata hun. He got up to go to the water filter. He came back in a few mins with two cups of water in his hands. As he came namear , he saw sanyu slumped on the bench aleeping. He smiled . "Meri sanyu ... kitna kaam karti hai poora din .6 baje tak office ka kaam , ghar aake ghar ka kaam... Phir subah phirse office k Thak gayi bechari... Accha hai kal saturday hai . Utni rest mil jaegi use. Par abhi toh na chahte hue bhi uthana padega. "Sanyu ... sanyu dear. Movie is starting, he said shaking her. But she stayedbstill. "Wake up shuna. He spoke a little louder this time

Really nice part harshu

Originally posted by: vrinda65

Really nice part harshu

U write so gud

N cumin to update it was gud kick start to sumthin new

I guess d news is sanyu is pregnant

N dr. Ka...chodo y to say evrythin

N sanyu u better update fast

N also i hv updatd chaptr 5 do give it a luk

Nn drop ur commnts

Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

Woah!! I'm glad that the wait is finally over... Phew!!
I've waiting impatiently for this particular fic to get updated..
Firstly, congratulations Harshu on making your first writing debut and I must say that you both are splendid writers.

Now coming to the update... Wow!
The chapter has been flawlessly penned down with sheer radiance.
I loved how the chapter started with a cute SanDhir moment. Ah! I loved how you have described the scene so well... That was serene and beautiful. Now words indeed.
Sanyukta being so shy and Randhir being so flirty made them look like newly weds.
Gosh! That theatre scene was so adorable and romantic. How did you get such amazing ideas???

Uh-oh! I'm feeling kinda weird about that last part. It was so omnious-ly scary.
The hospital's description was so eerie... I never wish to see such a hospital ever in my life.
And by judging Randhir's reaction, I feel that something akin to fatal must have happened to Sanyukta...

Duh!!! I hate cliffhangers!!! Why did you end the chapter at such a crucial point???
Now give me the next update soonish!
I'm dying to read that already...

Regards
Keya

cute lil SanDhir moments
N end is scary