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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanx dear

Originally posted by: sreenysa

<font color="#990099">i read four updates now,</font>

<font color="#990099">every thing is going nicely.</font>

<font color="#990099">after reading i have to be with geet na...</font>
<font color="#990099">but some where i am with maan, i dont know why...</font>

<font color="#990099">how can you think this much,</font>
<font color="#990099">thanks for wonderful updates...šŸ‘šŸ¼</font>

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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanx sweety

Originally posted by: pinku04

<font color="#CC0033"><font size="6" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">really maan is hell bent on hurting her... grrr😔😔😔
he is kind of heartless and egoistic person😔😔
poor she... only getting hurt by his behaviour...
kab tak tolerate karegi geet maan ko...
aur ye kabhi geet and baby ko le ke senstive hoga bhi ya nahi... ?????? šŸ˜•šŸ˜•</font>
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wait baby wait

Originally posted by: Rajshree12

Maan is sick..uska kuchh nahi ho sakta...he disgusts me...How can someone be so heartless...he seriously is SICK n disgusting..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

Awesome dear

Feeling hurt for geet
Poor soul is suffering so much
Geet and baby both are suffering due to negligence of maan
Hope nothing will happen to the baby
Geet is hurt and pained
Maan realise soon before it's too late
Waiting

wait sweety wait
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Posted: 10 years ago
Muuuhhh jaanu shant

Originally posted by: NaduluvsZahid

amazing update
maan pe Gussa aaraha hai
waiting for next

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Posted: 10 years ago



PART - 18



RAGEFUL encounter of last night gifted pain and sorrows. After got discharged from hospital,Geet walked back to him. She was walking slowly slowly on crowded roads. Noise is all around,this much that she wont even able to hear her own heart.


Maan furiously waved out of his mansion and straight reached to KM. 'Geet come out.' Maan shout and all come out hearing his yellings.


Dadima glared him at his attitude. 'Maan just behave yourself. Alya is sleeping and i dont want you to disturb her sleep.' Dadima scold him.


'then send Geet with me.' Maan stared her and demands.


'Geet yaha nahi hai. Lekin aap unhe yaha kyu dhoondh rae hai? Maan tell me the truth what had you done now?' dadi got suspecious through his behaviour.


Maan glance all around and left without answering. Dadima got annoyed with his behaviour. Dev sense the tension and followed him. 'bro wait a minute and pls tell me what happened?' Dev know fire rosed fire so he asked politely.


'Geet left home early morning.' Maan told and start moving but Dev obstruct his way.


'bro please try and understand. I dont know the exact matter but please can't you handle the situation wisely. You came here in her search,why?' Dev iterrogate him in his way. He know directly,Maan wont tell him anything.


'because dadima wants her to stay in KM. And after our argument last night i thought she came here.' Maan finally revealed.


'argument?' Dev stared him and Maan told everything. 'bro i dont think apko use force karna chahiye. Bro she is emotionally and physically weak. I know you dont have any emotional attachment with her but cant you for your baby's sake tried to make her happy. I wont say you changed yourself but let her live her life in her own way. Apke sath wo reh rahi hai na but she never demands anything from you,to kya aap usko thodasa time bhi nahi de sakte? Bro she is pregnant and this time she needs love affection and care. Agar aap ye sab nahi de sakte to pls gussa b mat kariye. It will automatically effect your baby.', Dev suggested him to deal her with tenderness not ragefully.


Maan listened him silently and then moved away without uttering a word. He sat in his car and called her last time. Her phone buzzed and he getting impatient,patting his fingers on staring wheel. His call picked up by other side and he ready to burst but stopped by strange voice from other side.


'who's this?' he asked.


She introduced herself as a doc. Geet by mistake left her mobile in her doc's cabin and now she is answering because Maan calling again and again. 'is i am talking to Mr. Khurana?' she asked.


Maan asked for her and she told about her. She asked him to meet and Maan denied instantly.


'look Mr. Khurana,if you really want your baby then come and meet me,but if you dont care and want them to die then its ok.' She said sarcastically which pinched him badly and he moved in a pace.


He entered in Doc's cabin angrily. First time someone forced him to do which he dont want. 'look doc,i dont have muich time to waste so finish it as soon as possible.' Maan command her too.


Doc glared him furiously. 'Mr. Khurana you came here coz of your need. If you want Geet and baby safe then start caring her. Neither she taking food nor her medicines properly. Already her pregnancy is at risk and this negligence will surely cause damage. Look at her latest reports. Her bp is high. Weight is decreasing,hemoglobin count is also low. In morning when she came,she lost her concious on stairs. If my staff wont hold her on time any thing had happened with her and baby. How can you leave her alone in this condition?' Doc show him her reports and scold for his neglecting behaviour towards her and baby.


Maan grew angry but he cant snap back. Geet's condition is indeed critical. He got another lecture and left. Maan reached office and engrossed himself in his work.


Geet was sitting alone on a bench in a park. She glancing all around blankly and think about doc's caution. She already told her if she want her baby safly then she had to take care of herself. 'doc was right. Why i torturing myself. Maan sir to humesha se aise hi the na then why i am expecting anything from him. I am only doing job there for my baby sake. From now i only concentrate on my baby. He is my boss so let him live his life and wont allow to affect me anymore.' she caressed her stomach. 'i am sorry baby,but mumma promised aaj k baad aisa nahi hoga. I will take care of your every need.' Geet determined herself not to react on Maan's behaviour anymore. She wiped off her tears and moved towards his mansion.


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Posted: 10 years ago
hi dear! hope u r feeling better! Thanks 4 updating! superb intense update! Wonderfully written! Geet leaves the hospital lost in her thoughts! Maan is angry n goes to KM n yells 4 Geet! Dadi irritated n warns him 2 keep quite as Aliya is asleep! he wants Geet! Dadi tells him she is nt here n is suspicious n asks if did something! Dev senses th tension n intervenes! he asks Maan wt happened! Maan explains wt dadi wanted n tht he n Geet argued! Dev tries 2 make understand n to be angry! he needs to give time 2 Geet! Maan leaves without a word! the doc calls him! she asks him 2 see him n he refuses bt she tells him if he wants his baby alive den he shld come! Maan goes! the doc tells him abt Geet's condition! she is critical! also shouts Maan 4 his negligence! Maan realises that the situation is serious! Geet siting on a bench in the park! she resolves to b strong 4 her baby n nt to let Maan's behaviour affect her! her baby is her priority! she leaves 4 KM! she realises she is hurting her baby! update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
And I hope she sticks to her resolution
I think she will
Enough is enough
Her baby is top priority
The hell with maan
Its his prerogative to change or not
She has nothing to do with him
Baby is all that matters
And should matter
Seeing as they aren't together
Lecture naa dein toh kya karrein maan
You only think of yourself
While there is nothing wrong in that
But with her condition
You have to focus on her too
Unless of course you want them both to die
Then please carry on
Not that geet gives a damn
Am glad she is thinking of just her baby
And won't let maan affect her
Both doc and dev told him off
Will it make difference to him though
Let's see shall we
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic Update

Maan thinks that Geet left his house and went to stay with Daadima
he was again angry and demands that she comes out at this stage
Maan is only overpowered by his anger and ego so he does not realize
the damage that he is doing to Geet because he has no emotions for her while Geet loves him so his behavior does effect her .
Dev explaining Maan that he should keep Geet happy for the baby's
sake and then the doctor also shows him Geet's report and tells him
to take better care of Geet
now I wonder what Maan will decide I also would love to know his POV
from the night he spend with Geet until now what does he actually
think about Geet .
Geet now realizes that Maan can never change and she has to take
better care of herself and her baby

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Posted: 10 years ago
hope maan ko thori akal aaye jaldhi nice update

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