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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: daringdarlo
Amazing ya...
Wat do I say about this???
This is flawless 😊
I sooo love it... 👏
U r an amazing writer..

Thank u
vl update asap

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: gargpurvi85
That voice is???😲
Cliff hanger...😲😡😕
Anyways..😊
Fab update!👏👏
U jus described every part of it so well...👏😉
Plz update next ASAP..
kudos 4 dis chap..

Thank u so much
vl update asap

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: ILuvParsh
Awesome update dear...Loved ehsas-rd convo..Nd d fb scenes...Update soon :)

Thank u
vl update asap

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: shavi2311
randhir nd ehsaas talk was too emotnal...
college momnts was prfct...

dnt knw whose voice is tht...waitng fr tht...

updte soon...

Thank u
vl update asap

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: yashika.angel
READ the whole ff in a go...
awesome story
waiting for nxt prt eagerly
update soon...😊

Thank u so much
vl update asap

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Part - 21

V- sanyu ..

S- vidushi tum aa hi gyi .. kitni der laga di ..
V- m sorry .. tumhari call ate hi mein aa rhi thi par wo traffic bht tha raste mein so late hogyi ...

R- tum yahan kya kar rhi ho ... himmat bhi kaise hui apni shakal dikhane ki ..

V- woo .. randhir

S- ise maine bulaya h yaha ..

R- par sanyu

S- maine vidushi ko maaf kar dia h ...

R- okk ... he looked at vidushi in a digusting manner ..

R(to himself)- ise maaf kardia,lekin mujhe q nhi krti huhh ... par maine ki bhi to itni badi galati thi na

Every one was talking about many things .. sanyu showed everyone ehsas's pic

K- ohh wow sanyu ehsas is so cute

Y- oh ji sanyukta ji bilkul apke jaisa h sweet sa Sanyu smilled ...

Randhir was quite all the time,he was just making up his mind that he have to leave her ..

Everyone was talking to sanyu even vidushi too was talking so nicely to sanyu ... vidushi tried talking to randhir too but he ignored ...

After some time...

R- sanyu i told u na there is another surprise for u ..

S- haan,kya h batao na jaldi ...she said excitedly..

R- 1 mint mein abhi aya

S- jaldi karo randhir

He went out and came along with her parents and her best friend kanika...

Tears of happiess started coming out of
her eyes ...

S- maa,papa,kannu..

She hugged everyone ..

S.m- beta mujhe pata tha k tu itni jaldi haar manne walon mein se nhi h

S.d- m so proud of u my beta

Kan- aise kaise haar man leti akhir friend kiski h ... she said proudly

S- m so happy today, papa mein bht khush hoon k apko mujhpe proud h aur maa ko mujhpe itna bharosa tha ..

S.m- ho kaise nhi akhir beti h tu hmari

S- aur kannu kaisi h tu .. mere nephew/
niece huye mere ya abhi tak wait kar rhi
ho..

Kan- twin h,ek nephew aur ek niece .. la nhi payi ... she made a sad face..

S- arey koi baat nhi,mil lungi bad mein .. aur jiju se bhi toh milna h na .. and she winked at her ...

Every one was having good time all thanks to FITE vacations ...

R- so sanyu kaisa laga mera surprise

S- it was good randhir

R- m glad that u liked it .. i wanted to say something ...

S- haan bolo na,ehsas ki chutti ka bhi time hone wala h use bhi lene jana h

R- don't worry about it wo maine vardhan sir ko bol dia tha wo le ayenge

S- thank u randhir .. haan bolo tumhein kya bolna h..

R- wait...

He went in front of everyone ...

R- GUYS I WANTED TO SAY SOMETHING TO EVERYONE ESPECIALLY TO U SANYU ...

everyone was looking at him .. but he was not getting nervous ...as he was just apologising for everything he has done ..

I WANTED TO SAY SORRY TO ALL OF U .. I KNOW I DID WRONG JISKI VAJAH SE SANYU KO APNI HI DEATH KA DRAMA KARNA PADA .. THE SOLE REASON FOR ALL THIS WAS ME .. I ACCEPT IT .. I WAS RESPONSIBLE FOR EVERYTHING

Tears were coming out of his eyes... he wipped his tears and cleared his trought to speak more ...

I KNOW K MAINE JO KIA WRONG THA,MUJHE TUM PAR TRUST KARNA CHAHIYE THA .. PAR KYA KARUN KAR HI NHI PAYA .. SHAYAD MERA PYAR TUMHARE JITNA STRONG NHI THA .. MERA TRUST TUM PAR STORNG NHI THA .. JITNA K TUM MUJH PAR TRUST KARTI THI .. I FORCED U
TO LIVE IN HELL ... TO LIVE WITH A BEAST,JERK,DEVIL ... AND U SACRIFISED UR HAPPINES JUST FOR MY SAKE AND FOR UR
FAMILY ... PAR SANYU U HAVE NO IDEA K
MAINE YE 3 YEARS KAISE BITAYE HAI TUMHARE BINA .. SHAYAD ISI GUILT MEIN MAR JATA K TUM MERI VAJAH SE CHALI GYI ... PAR PHIR TUM WAPIS AYI,MERA EHSAS AYA MERI LIFE MEIN,I WAS LIKE IN HEAVEN .. PATA NHI MERE JAISE DEVIL KO BHAGWAN NE ITNI KHUSHIAN
KAISE DE DI THI ..

Everyone was in tears now,remebering
everything which happened 3 years ago ..sanyu was looking at him blankly..

I REMEMBER MY PROMISE SANYU ... AB MEIN JA RAHA HOON TUMHEIN CHOD KAR,I WON'T INTERFARE IN UR LIFE ANYMORE ... PROMISE ... PAKKA WALA PROMISE .. I HOPE K U WILL FORGIVE ME ... BYBY GUYS .. BY SANYU .. I LOVE U ...

sunjiyan sunjiyan dil diya galiyan
sunjiyan meriyan baawan
aaja teriyan khashboo walon
love diyan meriyan saaman
tere bina ki main karaan door udasi
dil beqrar mera
mein karaan intezar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri
mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tera baajo lagda ji
Haaye tu ki jaane pyar mera
mein karaan intezar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri
mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji

His last sentence and tears started coming out of her eyes ...

He came near her wiped her tears
and said- SANYU TUMHEIN TEARS DENE KA HAQ KISI K PAAS NHI H .. TUMHEIN TEARS DENE WALA TO JA RAHA H .. PLZ APNI BAKI KI LYF KISI ACHE INSAN K SATH SPEND KARNA,JO TUMHARA AUR EHSAS KA DHYAN RAKHE,MERI TARAH TEARS NA DE ...

He started moving towards the exit ... sanyu holded his wrist and stoped him ... randhir turned his face towards her ... his face was full pf tears and sanyu too
was crying ...

S- randhiirrr

R- hmm

S- tumne kya socha k tum aise hi chale jaoge ... tumne mere sath jo kia uske baad tum aise hi chale jaoge .. no mr. Randhir Singh Shekhawat ... i will snach everything from u ...
Sanyukta said showing him her index finger

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Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 11 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Thanks for pm

Awesome update👏

Again a cliffhanger😲

Continue soon

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Thanks for pm

Awesome update👏
please continue soon...take care😊

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Awsme update yr
So that person was vids
Sanyu forgive him

Bt rd still ignoring him

Rd k surprise
Sanyu k parents n kanu
She was so happy

Rd apologized for everything
He's keeping his promise he's leaving
Bt sanyu ne rok lia

Cliffhanger
Moi dying to read next part

Update soon
Cnt wait

Luv u
Keep smiling