Rishbala OS- Dancing Fairy |My anniversary gift to you all| - Page 11

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life

Thank you sudha
Yes same reason as in serial 😆 😉 rain brings the romance effect...stranded in jungle...starts raining...hero heroine go into empty shack...and many things happen 🤣
Glad you liked it 😃

Originally posted by: madhurish

haww...u shocked me meg with ur reason behind why rain comes suddenly😲chotu..is this really u?😲i thought u r a seedha bachcha😲okay! Just joking. I loved d reason u gave me & I know what all will happen so no need to elaborate to me😆

welcome.

Originally posted by: DevilClan

Awesum and lovely os. This song is my favourite one.

Originally posted by: shasha1989

wonderful update dear

Originally posted by: Ni33

I have no idea if I resed somewhere, I checked the first three pages then gave up...🤣 I am too tired to check all 16 pages...😆 Call it laziness...🤣 At least you commented eventually🤣

Okay first to the Beautiful dedication...😛 From all of it, I loved that the most... Sorry Chotu, but I do...😆 Just because you especially dedicated it to Di...😳 Of course you deicated it to the rest of us as well, but I don't care about that at all...😆 All I care about the dedication to Di...😳😛 I know...I know she read the story up in heaven😳

Okay over to the story... I see this was very Aaja Nachle inspired...😆 Perhaps you watched the movie before and got an idea and hence wrote a story with your own twist to it all...😆 I liked the story, Madhu was a dancer (like Jr. Madhu), Motihari (I think Jr. Madhu was raised there, can't really remember if that was the name of the village, but I think it was)... It was like Jr and Sr Madhu met and made one Madhu... You know like you add one Sr Madhu, one Jr. Madhu, some salt, sweetness, spice and voila you have this Madhu... I'll call her cocktail bala...🤣 And RK stayed RK...😆 Luckily, or he would get a nickname as well...😆 Yes it was very...😆 Cocktailbala🤣I like it😆 RK doesn't get the privilege of getting a nickname😆

Now over to some confusing parts... 🤣 I mean only well Chotu you know that... 😛

I didn't understand what kind of revenge RK contucted... I know he left her at the mandap to gain some kind of revenge, but then you clearly stated they were married, RK calling her Biwi and Madhu correcting him that she was his Biwi... Making me wonder if it was like in the show, they were married and when they were about to marry again making a full completion of the marriage rituals but RK took his revenge..yes it was the same reason in the show 😆 I thought that was clear😆Guess not...🤣

Also you made a tiny error regarding time...😆 Yes... Time again...😆 Details are obviously my annoying thing...🤣 RK saw Madhu dance, went away to shoot, went back only to confront Guruji and talk to him at the river side about Madhu... Guruji telling him that he should come at the perfomance that will take place the very next day... But when RK confronted Madhu the next day, he said he saw her dance a few days ago...🤣 S**t! 🤣 Welp...it doesn't matter now🤣

Okay done with that, now over to Guruji... Is it the same Guruji that was in the show... You know the one that haven't aged from Sr. Madhu's time to Jr. Madhu's time?🤣 No it's not 🤣 He's too odd for that 😆

Loved the OS and the dedication Chotu...😳 I know...😳

Thanks for the OS, or becoming and IF member and of course the PM...🤣 If it wasn't for that PM, I would have forgotten to comment on this story...😆 Sorry but I would...😆 And thank you for being my insane sister 😳🤗 I would've forgetten that you haven't commented...so it's cool😆