YUDI SS: A Tale of Beautiful Companionship

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Note:- This is my first attempt at writing a short story .These are not extracts from the original mahabharat.


Yudhisthir and Draupadi SS: A Tale of Beautiful Companionship

PART 1

After the mahabharat war...

Pandavas and draupadi were set to leave for Hastinapur .Samrat Yudhisthir is sitting in a tent lost in his thoughts. He thought of everyone he lost in dharm-yudh. He did not know whether he will be a good king for the people of hastinapur and Aryavartha. Just then Samaragini Draupadi comes into the tent fully dressed up with her
hair tied and choodmani in it.

She looked at her aryaa who she can sense is in a great confusion and sorrow."arya aap kya Soch rahe ho?" asked panchali[What are you thinking ?]
"mein yeh Soch rahe panchali ki is dharma stapana ki Yudh mei hum sabh ne sabko koya hai.maan karta hei ki Samrajya ka tygya karke vana mei puri jivan shanti se bitaou paramei aisa nahi kar sakta hu" said Yudhisthir .[I was thinking that for this war of Dharma establishment we lost everyone.I wish I could renounce this kingdom and spend my entire life peacefully in forest but I can't do that Panchali]
" mei apki dukh ko samaj sakti hu samarat karthvya kabhi kabhi peeda detha hai iska matlab yeh nahi hota ki hum apne karthvya ko tygya kare"said samaragini.
[ I can understand your pain King. Sometimes duty can be painful but it does not mean we should sacrifice our duty]
"yeh tum sahi kahe rahi ho panchali"said samrat.[You are telling right Panchali.]
"apka karthvya hai ki aap aryavartha aur hastinapur ki praja ko justice aur santosh dena hai.mei toh apne Aryavatha ki samaragini hone ka karthvya nibavungi"said samaragini.[Your duty is to give justice and happiness to Aryavart and Hastinapur's people. I will do my duty of being Aryavart's queen ]
Samarat Yudhisthir is staring at his wife not surprised that he knows she will do her duty.
He is still staring at her. Seeing her husband staring at her panchali
"aap mujhe aisa kyu dekh rahe ho arya?"[Why are you looking at me like that?] "mei yeh dekh raha hu panchali ki tum itna shanti se kartvya ko nibbane ke bare mein baat kaise kar sakti ho jab tumhare apne parivaar walo ki mrithyu hua hai? Unke mrithyu se tumko bohot peeda hoi rahi hogi na panchali." said Yudhisthir .
[ I am looking that how can you be so peaceful talking about fulfilling our duty when we lost our family members Panchali? You must be in a lot of pain over their deaths]
"hai arya itna peeda ki sabdo mei batana mushkil hai paranthu mera chinta mera bare mei nahi hai. Mei tho apki aur aryaputra bheem,arjun,nakul aur sahadeva ke bare soch Soch kar chinta mei doobgayi hui"saying this Panchali looks at her husband with a worried expression
[I am feeling pain which I can not describe in words but I am not worried for myself. I am worried about you, Bheem,Arjun,Nakul and Sahadev]
Seeing this Yudhisthira said " Tum hamare bare mei itna chinta maat karo paranthu kabi laghata ki kya rahe gaya hai jine ke liye panchali?"
[Do not worry about us but sometimes I feel what what is there to live for Panchali?]
"Aasha hai arya . Hamara umdi abhimanyu ki hone wale santhan, vrishaketu, pragiti aur suthanu mei hai. Govind ne kaha ki jab tak ek vyakti ke jivan mei Aasha hai tab usse vyakti Ke jivan ek naye josh atti hai Jine ke liye. Ab humhe te karna hai ki hum naye Aasha ke saath jeevan ko agee badna hai ki yah phir koi naye Aasha ke bagre saare jeevam ko dukh se bitna hai. Mei toh ek naye Aasha ke saath apne jeevan bitne ki nirnay liye hai.Apke kya nirnay hai arya?"
[ There is hope. Our hope lies in Abhimanyu's unborn child,Vrishaketu,Pragatti and Suthanu. Govind told that when person has a new hope, then that person will have passion to live. We have to now decide to live with new hope moving forward or else live our life in sadness without any new hope. I have decided to live my life with a new hope. what is your decision?]


PART 2

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Originally posted by: Sonatia

Bella dr pls wr8 na!im waiting!and pm me when u updt.


thanks for the compliment sonatia😊


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Dear I am already in love with your concept 😃 I was eagerly waiting from the day when you just put the title itself 😆 I love this couple a lot 😳 please write more!
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Originally posted by: DharmaPriyaa

Dear I am already in love with your concept 😃 I was eagerly waiting from the day when you just put the title itself 😆 I love this couple a lot 😳 please write more!



Thank you urmila😃
I know that you will like it😊


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Part 2

Dharmaraj was thinking over the words Panchali said to him.
Tum Sahee kahe rahe ho panchali. mere nirnay liye ki mei ek naya Aasha ke sath jina chata hui paranthu kya mei Hastinapur ki praja ko sahi marg dika paunga? Yudhisthir asked panchali with a worried expression on his face.
[You are saying right Panchali . I have decided to live my live with a new hope but will I be able to show the right way to hastinapur's
people?]
"aap avyashy Hastinaputr ki praja ko sahe marg dikaenge.Apke uppar mujhe pura vishwas hai samrat.Humne humara santham koya hai paranthu ek Samrat le liye apne praja bi apne santhan ki tarha hi hota hai toh woh samrat usse praja ke liye pita hi hota hai na. Tab apke liye Hastinapur aur Aryavartha ki praja apke santhan hei hai. Agar aap praja ki pita saman hai tob fhir mei Aryavartha ki Samragini hone ki nathe mei unke mata saman hui. mei humare praja apne santhan Manke mei unko prem aur santhosh dungi.Aise karne se mera hriday ko shanti milegi.Aise karne se mei apni santhan kone ka dukh kam hoga mera liye arya " said pancahli
[You will be able to show the right way to Hastinaputr's people. I have faith in you King.We lost our children but for a King his people are like his children.Then for you Aryavart and hastinapur's people are your children.If you are equal like a father to your people then being Aryavart's queen, I will equal to their mother. I will consider our people as our children . I will give them love and happiness. By doing this I feel peaceful. By doing this my sadness of losing our children will reduce .]
"Tumhare batho mei kitna prem aur vishwas hai panchali. Mei accha Samrat banuga yah nahi woh mujhe pata nahi hai parathu tum avyshaya bahut accha Samragini banogi" said Samrat Yudhisthir.
[Your words has so much love and
Confidence Panchali.I don't whether I will be good King but you will be a good Queen]
Hearing this, Panchali got up from her seat and sat near her husband.She holded his hand and said " Aap ise tarah kyu apne apko chota karke bate kar rahe ho?mujhe accha nahi lagta jab apne bare mei ise tarah soch rahe ho. Aap mere pati ho aur Aryavarth ka Samrat hai arya.Apne Indraprastha ko kitne saloa tak raj kiya hai.Dyut sabha wale mei jo nirnay apne liya uske liye apne apko dosh mat digiya. Mujhe apne phela wale pati chahiye jo har mushkil ko shanti se parishikar karte hai. Mei apke sath hui arya"
[Why are you talking so low of yourself?I don't like when you think about yourself like this. You are my husband and King of Aryavart.You ruled Indraprastha for many years.Don't blame yourself for the decision you took in dice hall.I want my husband who used to solve every problem peacefully. I am with you.]


Samrat Yudhisthir hearing this looks at his wife thinks'I am very lucky to get Draupadi as my wife.Since that the time we got married, she has been serving me with full devotion. She always took care of my needs and gave me wise advice. What did I do?I staked her in dice hall but she forgived me. I still feel guilty. I love her so much. " He starts crying.

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Thank You for the wonderful compliment Radhikerani😊

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Just lovely 😊 but why do you not update frequently dear 😭 I'm dying to read more on them 😳 I simply love these two ❤️
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Originally posted by: DharmaPriyaa

Just lovely 😊 but why do you not update frequently dear 😭 I'm dying to read more on them 😳 I simply love these two ❤️


Thanks for the wonderful comment urmila.the reason I do not update frequently is because I am busy with my studies . I WILL PM ME YOU WHEN I UPDATE PART . I agree with u they are a nice couple. My favourite couple is BHEEMA AND DRAUPADI. 😃

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Thanks for the compliment Mou😃
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