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Posted: 10 years ago

Tu tu mein mein

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priya_21

He always does this with me...why babaji...one side he says I do everything for you my jaan ...now see... watch shows 11'o clock...

But he not showing own face...he loves only own office...not me babaji...I hate him for this...

Geet you have no choice...soja...

.

Around 12'o clock...he kissed on her forehead & whisper "Happy birthday" near her ear. She encircled her hand around him & snuggle more close to him... She realize it's not dream..in reality someone is here...she screamed "chor- chor"...he placed palm on her lips...she start hitting him...now her words sounds only whisper...leave me...maan kill you...

Jaan it's me...

Your maan

She stops...he removed his hand & opened the side lamp button...

She pushed him & shouted on him "what are you doing here"

Today is your birthday

Ohh you remember

What you think, I forget

Ofcourse not, but am thinking...the great "Maan Singh Khurana" come here wish me

Why are you saying this...

Ab mein kuch kh bhi nhi sakti, sb kuch toh aapko apne mutabik chaiye

Here, I am waiting since evening and you are busy in your office.

Sch kh rhi hu, abhi se ye haal hai, na jaane maine aapse shaadi kr li...toh mera kya honga

Mein toh aapke ghar mein bs ek kone mein padi rahungi

He held her by shoulders & pulls her near to own

What you think about own & me

Here I came at midnight in your house only wishing you & you geet

You only shouting on me

Ek baar bhi socha, mein yaha tak aaya kaise

Nhi...bs bina baat ka gussa

She removes his hands...

Isme kya hai darwaaze se

You forgetting Miss geet...you take your spare keys yesterday ...as usual in your angry mood...

Mein gussa krti hu

Nhi - nhi mein krta hu

Now you are saying truth Maan... good

.

.

Both not said any word for few minutes...

Am hungry

Kyun, aapki us chamchi ne dinner kiye bina bej diya office se

Nhi wo toh aapne hatho se khilane tak tyaar thi

Toh kha lete

.

Jb insaan ko daily karela khane ki adaat pd gyi ho...wo bechara

She held him by collar & said "aaj to mein sch mein aapko karela hi khilayongi"

.

.

What is this geet

Karela my would be hubby

You know na geet...mujhe ye sb pasand nhi ...

Ase toh mujhe bhi bhut se cheeze pasand nhi hai...par aap mante ho...nhi na

.

Tum galat insaan se panga le rhi ho misthy

Sayad mein yhi chahti hu...

.

Dekho geet ke babaji shaadi se phle ye haal hai

Na jaane baad mein kya honga mera

.

He takes morsel near own mouth, but she stops him...

Jb aapko ye pasand nhi hai..fir kyun khane jaa rhe ho

Mujhe wo har cheez pasand hai ...jo meri jaan ne aapne hatho se bnayi ho

.

She lost in his words...

Aap ye mt khayo..maine aapki favourite moong daal banayi hai

Mein abhi laati hu

.

.

Pagali hai thodi

Par pyaari hai

************

Maan & geet both are college mate & fall in love ...both parents happily agreed for this marriage...

***********

Maan

Hmm

Aap ghar mein kaise aaye...

Pipe se

Schi...bolo na maan

.

Nhi geet ..actually maine tumhe jo kal key thi

Ha

Uski maine phle hi already duplicate key banwa li thi

Dust insaan

She pick side pillow & threw on him...

Toh tum kya chahti thi mein pipe se aayi

She glares him...

Geet asa filmo mein hota hai jaan

Reality mein haddi passi tut jaati hai

Aur mein nhi chahta mein apni shaadi mein tuta futta baithoo

.

Shaadi

.

Ha

Uncle ka phone aaya tha

15 days ke baad ka muhrat nikla hai

Dad ne aapko call kyun kiya...mujhe kyun nhi kiya

Kyunki sweetheart mein unka favourite hoon

Wo tumse jyada mujhe pyaar krte hai

Youuu...

Jaan tum kitni chotti - chotti baato pe chid jaati ho

Aane do mom dad ko fir batati hu aapko

Aur aap apne ghar jaayo

Mood nhi hai would be Mrs. Maan Singh khurana

Abhi mood banati hu aapka

She coming to hit him, but her foot stuck on carpet & she fall on him...

Thank you geet ke babaji

Mujhe toh laga tha aaj ye geet puri raat mujhse ladne mein hi nikal dengi

Maan

Jaan

Mein aapse ladti hu ...ya aap mujhse

Jaan I love you

But I hate you

He starts planting kiss on her forehead, eyes, cheek & come near to her lips...

Leave me maan

Phle tum khud hi mujhpe girti ho

Aur fir hi khud durr jaane ki jid krti ho

Jaan aakhir tum chahti kya ho

Maan please

Na

Firstly you say to me you love me too

You already know maan

I want to hear again & again from you jaan

She cutely pouted & said "I love you too"

Now happy

Now leave

He denied...

Maan

Jaan tumhe kya gift chaiye

Maan I get you

This is the best gift which given by my babaji

Isse jyada mujhe kuch nhi chaiye

But I want to give you something

He takes out pendant from pocket & help her in wearing...

Happy birthday jaan

.

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Maaneet nok zok never stops, continue ongoing...but this tu -tu mein - mein increase maaneet love day by day...

Edited by lakpm - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
only 2.. me too sad 😔
u are right di.. we do need response and answer to non-responses...

i think we can encourage readers also to write... and give os'
like sheetal agve last time.. it was one hell of a good try...

n as a writer i feel ki we should encourage ppl commenting here.. as we see only voted and likes of readers..
u would have noticed i tried to comment last time on most os'
same way!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Poooja

only 2.. me too sad 😔

u are right di.. we do need response and answer to non-responses...

i think we can encourage readers also to write... and give os'
like sheetal agve last time.. it was one hell of a good try...

n as a writer i feel ki we should encourage ppl commenting here.. as we see only voted and likes of readers..
u would have noticed i tried to comment last time on most os'
same way!

u r right pooja
but every time we are repeating ourselves again and again to all... that they need to like and comment which will help the writers to come up...
other than that its not in our hands too😭
lakspriya thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry sweta...
but thanks for ur participation... agar wo bhi nahi hotha tho😭
Param-Sundari thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
di rules change.. the entry with max comments wins now... no poll!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing vm '
Loved it..
Its something I haven't watch ever..
Edited by Preeti_Maaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Locha-E-Ulfat
Awesome os..
Geet always think Maan as chor and its not her mistake too Maan always create situation like this..
Edited by Preeti_Maaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Poooja

di rules change.. the entry with max comments wins now... no poll!!!



comments count karna mushkil haina... ek ya do miss ho gaya halla ho ga😆

likes can be counted ... but many likes in all stories... thats y we thought of poll
Pumpkinseed thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Tu Tu Mein Mein
Loved it fully..
purely Maaneet nok jhoks remindes of GHSP..
Such a lovely os..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



comments count karna mushkil haina... ek ya do miss ho gaya halla ho ga😆

likes can be counted ... but many likes in all stories... thats y we thought of poll


comments count karne ka tension aap na lo.. wo writers aapke liye kar denge...
ask them to send the no. of comments on their stories by pm... simplez;
n m sure aise me miss b nahi hoga😆

n likes are not fair for writer who take so mush time out... evn OS takes quite a good time!

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