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Originally posted by: Armagadon
Dearest Ritu,
Only one statutory warning... exams at bay so no more statutory warnings! *pout*STATUTORY WARNING : THIS IS A BIG COMMENT... LOL... IF YOU WANNA READ - DEVOTE A GOOD FEW MINUTES FIRST... BIGGER LOL.
Dear dearrr dearessttt Shreee ( "sweet innocent soul" 😈)I read this minutes before midnight 2015 and I was laughing and smiling and wanted to give u virtual hugs at that moment.. 🤗 And then coz of lack of Wifi my HNY to u got delayed too Khairrr!First of all the initial awkwardness and hesitance amidst the father and son duo was wonderfully etched. It was as if what was happening in their hearts, barely came out of their mouths, yet there was the other always recognised what the first one had to say.. beautiful!Secondly, the maa and Arjun talk was beautiful... how much she missed her son and vice versa. A mother's touch is always the same... always...Awww thanks soo much... oh no wait. I can't thank u😆😆 Love youuu for saying all that😳 and yes.. a mother's touch will always be the same😳Now coming to Sakshi and Ayesha... yeah yeah why would Ayesha visit her without a reason, ek zamaane ka officer ab kabootar ban chuki hai in love birds ke beech 😆 Aha... a certain Ayesha Kapoor turns shy and has to walk to the corner to speak with "someone"Kuch toh choot raha hai... Rathore! Pata lago... wait woh khud kya pata lageyaga? Woh toh khud mujrim hai ishq ke😉
Bahahahaaa rightly said🤣🤣🤣Hihi... Sakshi is defo speaking out of experience 😉 I love the way she loves everybody! Just so innocent and cute!I think the Sakshi of this fic is the most innocent, touchy and loving one out of all my fics😆Oh wow... Rawte Sr. coming was a surprise indeed! Perhaps he realised the effect of this lady on his son... the positive effect. I wish to see a paragraph on his point of view, sacchi... so as to one can see what went through that the once hardcore businessman turned into a homely husband, a loving father and an affectionate and adorable father in law.Coming to that, yep! I was totally tempted by this request.. I only am nervous as to whether I was able to pull it off as you imagine it. Soo check the next update and hope u like it😳 U asked for a paragraph but I of course wrote waay more🤣Oh my that moment when Rawte Sr. teased Sakshi, I was laughing like anything! What did you see in my son... rofl rofl rofl... saari zindagi jhel paoge... rofl rofl rofl...Though he made it clear by his actions and words that he has started considering Sakshi as a member of his household - that means a lot. I really loved the time she put extra sugar in his coffee while looking at his son, Rawte Jr. the devil would have put a cherry on the moment if he dared to wink at her... lol... am sure he must have done something...You know silent romantic eye talks! 😉🤣🤣Haan haaannn ... khamoshiyaaannn😉 Damn.. I have been humming that song the entire day today!🤣I see you have a thing for spicy potato curries... the first thing that came into my mind was aloo chochori ba jeere aloo... ba emni aloo torkari! I love them too... especially with luchi or roti! I wish I can cook them for you too... I cook pretty decently... hihi... certainly u won't die of poisoning! 😆Oooh I LOVE THAT!! My mum and nani both make alu chochhori.. have u had it? That and luchi ..Eeeshhh such heaven I haven't had that in ages thanks to my no-carbs diet😭 And i miss my dida's food now😭Hahahaa ohhh yes u better cook for me some day!😃 I can fry luchis btw!😛 So i'll help u out!I am in love with senior Rawte! And I loved that part where Sakshi found the similarity between Rawte sr. and jr.I know am repeating it but yeah - I so want to see a point of view from his side you know. Like when he watches his wife - the husband speaks then, by looking at her ailing health... slight regrets and understanding how time is essential...While watching his son - the father speaks, how his once toddler boy now has become a fine young man. You know the little sentimental stuffs... for a father his son is very emotional and touchy part because a father often sees a reflection of himself in his son. This part - am sure you can excel this!YOU make me nervous about the upcoming update😕 I hope you'll like it 😳And lastly as a father in law ; a new place to put himself in... but then... he feels the affection of a father instead of an in law whenever he watches Sakshi. The hunger in her eyes for a father's warmth in the family...It told him a story too... surprisingly one had a father, a loving one yet the strings were so detached...And lastly as a friend of to be Mrs & Mrs. Jr Rawte. The teasings, the blushes, embarrassments as he caught them between their romantic conversations. His son's flusters, his daughter/in law's crimson cheeks and aversion of eyes... even the fact that how his lanky son sounds like a grown man when he whispers or speaks to Sakshi... the glint in his eyes - it perhaps could bring out memories of Sr Rawte's past... hai na?Perhaps I didn't pen all that down... but maybe more later😛 The past bit is yet to be explored.. so wait for that!😛So yeah... I am so waiting for Rawte's point of view... sigh... hihi...Lastly... Maai...*dreamy*SO wonderful dear, aha that's what lowweee is, when one person's dream becomes yours!I am sure Ritu knows this all too well... *ducking a pillow* arrey I meant... ahem *cough cough*
Ahem! Yeah yeah yeah I remember your songs... seee gaane se tere dil ki baat bahar aa gayi🤣Chalo... this will be the final comment from me till april! Ouch... I know 🤢 But then I will comment on every chapter I missed *kasam se*Love you loads!!! Oh yeah... thank you cause thanks to you ami Bharatee'r shate kotha bole chilam... hihi...Yes yess I saw! I still haven't replied there.. got lazy😛 I was sooo *senti* .. like K3G music types LOOOL🤣 I love u both so much🤗Love you loads again!Waiting for the further chapters...Love,Shreee ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Love u sooo soo much for this super huge comment 🤗
Really.. it means a lot rey. Hope you'll like the next one! ❤️
yes yes me doing happy dancing hehe,i waited for this sooo sooo much,it seems soo kiddish but kya karein aadat seh majboor 😆😆 
i looove milkshake...its good to relive our childhoood from time to time and be as crazy and child like as we used to be...i loove doing that 😳😳 
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