SwaRon OS: Ebb and Flow (Do Read The Note)

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Yeah re-lived swaron journey..

it was amazing..👍🏼

u have written it beautifully from ashi's point of view...👏

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

awesomr os

ur work always has a magic

i really appreciate ur writing each n every time

ur work is always d best

u showed whole swaron journey in a os

everytime u come with different concepts

dats d best quality if urs

i jst cant imagine u wont be on IF

i will really miss ur work

bt i cant force u 2 stay on IF

jst want 2 wish all d best fr ur future

if time permits try 2 come on IF

take care nishu

will miss u alot

Love

Mansi

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Okay now I seriously relived SwaRon. Beautiful documentary.
It was really well written.

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avya98

@avya98

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

This was heaven

U definitely reminded us the whole swaron journey in a couple of awesomely well written paras .

U definitely saw and portrayed the beauty of the love story of a diva and the cutest lover boy !!😆

Hats off

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Dew..

@Dew..

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

What!!!!!!
you r leaving IF... last SwaRon work!!
ohhh goshh im gonna miss ur writeup sooo much...
& about ur this os there is nothing to say much, as always its beautiful. .its mindblowing. .its wow wow n wow!!.
ur always be one of my favorite writer...
& its a request plz never leave writting bcz u knw what ur Blessed with such an Amazing writting skill. . .
but study n life comes fast ..so all the best for ur future...
be Blessed n keep Smiling always. . .
Love,
...Dew 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Beautiful Story. It had a very new angle to it. :')

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

its beautiful... amazing writer u r... loved it... visualizing d whole swaron story... <3

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

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Hi,

Ebb and Flow is a very crisply written account of Swayum and Sharon's love story. The chronology and the emotions you got were all spot on. Aashi comes across to me, not only as the symbol of lost love, love that couldn't ever happen, she's symbolic of the girls out here who have Swayum to blame for their abnormally high expectations with real men. It is very sad how everyone who is part of a grand scheme like this ends up sad or dead or both. 'Happily ever after' usually applies only to the girl and the boy, others get lessons, like Aashi did.

The concept and the way this has turned out are both very worthy of praise, good work!

K

Edited by thegameison - 11 years ago

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ...Ananya
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Haah...I'm finally here. 😛
But am a little sleepy right now so I'll keep this short. 😆
Don't scream at me later. I had promised a comment. Not a looong one. 😳

Coming to the point...
Beautiful OS...I had loved the idea the moment you had suggested it. 😳
Looking at the SwaRon story from a third person's POV was refreshing. Kudos to me for suggesting Aashi.
Specially since that someone was both an outsider and a part of the SwaRon journey. ❤️
But I felt bad for Aashi in the end. She didn't have have to be dying. 😔

All in all this will be one of my favourite works. 😳 😃

That's it. Adios. 🤗