FIRST KISS STORY SEASON 2 part 8,part9,epilogue posted@66 on 19.1.15 - Page 37

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Posted: 10 years ago

LAST PART


" ruchita???"

" yep..he met her..."

*****

" Mk i need to talk to u ..." a very tensed ruchita appeared in front of him..when he was exiting the dressing room to meet geetika..

" ruchita i,..m busy...i need,..to.." he hurriedly spoke while walking

"

Mk geetika is not there in her seminar hall...Its her big day today don't u have any idea where she is..." she spoke bitterly

" she is here..." he uttered pausing in his way..staring her briefly

" what?? She is here for ur match leaving her seminar?" she murmured baffled..

Mk nodded ..before storming off..

******

" they broke off...becoz of this??"

" It isn't clear to u ...right why he did that??"

" nope i dint get it y he had to break up.."

" ull get ur answers rohan.." Maan said smilingly

******

2 weeks passed...since their break up. Geetika called him tried coming over at his place but Mk dint revert back to her. It seemed he had blocked her from his life... geetika was shocked...she cried over her grief unable to understand y he took such a harsh decision.

She contacted edan...But he wasn't available too... Mk shifted to his house in London .

Geetika wasn't aware of it. Ruchita helped her overcoming the heartache ..trying to divert her attention on studies.

It was due their exam date..Geetika waited for MK at the entrance to catch a glimpse of him. Many a times he saw her but forbid himself to glance her..

Geetika was broke...so was MK. His guilt was eating him..but he refrain meeting, talking to geetika. He cursed the day he met her...

After their exams..

It was 2 days later..when out of the blue ruchita arrived at Mk's house.

His mom welcomed her..

" Ruchita..u here..wassup..." he pretended to be fine..and spoke casually...

Ruchita dint reply just stared him with sheer anger..

why u doing dis Mk..its almost a month...u r avoiding geetika..u just left her to die.."

" RUCHITAAA...mind ur words..." Mk groaned...clenching his jaws..

" sachai...kadvi kyu lag rai hai..dint u do that?? When i came here...geetika was so happy all because of u ...i honestLy never thought u could stoop so low..."

" was everything fake???the way to helped her..., u r eyes..which held love for her..was everything a bloody lie??????"

Mk turned around...feeling vulnerable..he chided and tried to control himself..

Ruchita flared her nostrils...and pulled his arm making him face her..

She looked his eyes...reading guilt...

" y are ashamed of urself..arent u ????? whats the use Mk..u don't deserved anyone and definitely not geetika..."

Mk closed his eyes..

" u don't deserve her...she changed herself cause of u ..and u ...broke her." her tears spilled out recalling her geetika sorrow..

" thats y i did that..ruchita .." Mk conclude falling down on his knees..

Ruchita narrowed her eyes..

" what do u mean.."

She spoke frantically coming to his level...she couldn't imagine their could be another side of this story

" i..couldnt let her change..for me..." he uttered..

" i couldn't let my geetika change , get transformed into something she wasn't..."

" but she did for u ..."

" i knw..." he sadly smiled..

" i knw that was her love..then how could i be so selfish..."

"i m not getting anything please elaborate..."

" that day when i met u..before the match..i realized..geetika's love for me.. She truly loved me.."

" that was the reason..she gave away everything she was to become something...like this to fit in my lifestyle...

I love her..i love my geetu so how can i let her do that...??"

" her eyes spoke volumes...her suffocation was evident to me...it was clear she just did that for me..for me.." he gritted his teeth...

" Mk...' ruchita muttered in shock..tears slipped through her eyes...

" ruchita..the girl who came to university with a motive to excel...left her seminar to be present at my match...I never wanted to be a hindrance or obstacle in her path...i want to outshine...in her world...

We come from different worlds ruchita..both of us fell in love ..but its not always to change urself and do crazy things..in love..

I love geetika the way she is...i never intended to change her...never..i swear.."

He held ruchita's shoulders..who was motionless.

" i knw..she will surpass this pain and then..once again she will become geetika i knew...her dreams are very precious to me..i wont let her sacrifice any of it just for me..."

Ruchita shrugged his hands..." u could have explained her..Mk.."

Mk shook his head gently

she is very stubborn she wont accpt the fact that she changed...and if she did she wont agree that its coz of me.."

Ruchita smiled..SADLY with tears in her eyes..

" Mk...she is leaving .."

Mk raised his eyes..staring her

" yes..she is leaving college..this place and moving down to india..for forever...i dint wish to say this..but i think..u should share ur feelings with her..she deserves to this...before she.." ruchita trailed off...

****

Rohan dint say anything..he was frozen ...

" are u okay rohan..." Maan asked gently

Rohan nodded.." is love that scared and pure??"

" yes...true love always is.." Maan said smiling

cmon..pardon me...But dint ur wife did...anything exceptionally different just for u ??"

Rohan smiled thoughtfully

" u knw..when we were dating in college...she hated make up she was more of a tomboy..."

" then once i gifted her a make up kit..thought she would like it..thereafter she wore make up slightly..infact we got married...she always put forth my demands before her...we both were at peeks in our career... i was busy with mine and she was busy with her's..."

" u knw...u said that she drastically changed after marriage...demanding various things...do u knw the reason rohan???"

Rohan frowned shaking his head

" thats because u were in scared relationship..ur was marriage..she not only changed her surname..she changed according to u ...To abide by the vows she took..she did everything she can for u ..i knw there must have been ups and downs..many times...i m not saying its completely ur fault...or pin pointing at u ..just saying that...if u guys had given ur love a chance it would have blossomed... "

" i knw..." he muttered...sadly

" what happened then??"

**********

Mk knew geetika was leaving next day..he was in dilemma.. His love for her dint allow him to curb her dreams...But the same love commanded him to stop her from leaving his life...

Ruchita's words were floating his mind..geetika deserved a explanation..she did.. His heart was beating wildly amid a strange fear engulfing his heart...with every next second..





scroll down for epilogue!!

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Posted: 10 years ago



EPILOGUE


AIRPORT

Geetika was in the parking area...locking up her...scooty.

A gush of gentle wind encircled her...messing her hair...

She batted her eye lashes...trying to pry off her tresses .. Unexpectedly long fingers curled around her forehead..tucking them behind..gently.

Her breath hitched...how could she not recognize his fingers..his cologne ..and him..

She took in bated breaths...not believing her heart..

" Geetu...' he muttered...guiding his hand..to clasp her cold hand

" mk " she gasped..turning around..

" Mk..." she whimpered...tears sliding down her cheeks..

Mk smiled...with tears in his own eyes.. After whole 17 days he was with her.. she looked so fragile...and delicate.

Her skin color was pale..dark circles surrounded her eyes... He could view them under her glasses..

He closed his eyes in anguish...what had he done...

" mk..." she wept...and then smacked his chest finding him close his eyes..

" why u came..here..now..' she uttered in low voice...parting away from her..

Mk opened his eyes...shaking his head..pulling her back..

" i m sorry...geetu i m..so sooo sorry...I just..jusT SHOULDNT have done this...i couldnt .." He whispered cupping her left cheek...

" couldn't what explain me this??that i was going on the wrong track...???' she completed his sentence..

Mk stared down at her in astonishment

Geetika smiled sadly "..ruchita told me everything...after she met u ..."

" how could u levae me alone this dis..how could u .." she whacked his chest...like a maniac...

" geet..geet.." he called her gripping her waist..But she dint respond..and kept on hitting him..mumbling the same words...His remorse was consuming him...

With no option left he smacked his lips on her...dragging her close..

This drove her insane she wriggled violently biting his lips...struggling hard. He held her still...this time he wont let her go..It was his mistake..but she suffered... He kissed her passionately with all his love...Slowly her protest died..and she puckered her lips...allowing him to enter her mouth.

He gently draped his tongue around hers...stroking it..tenderly. she guided her hands to his shoulder wrapping them...while his settled on her waist..

Tears tip out through her eyes...as she quivered in his demand. A moment later..he parted a little before giving a small peck..again..

He ran his tongue kissing her cheek...making her close her eyes...he placed his head on her forehead...while she snuggled close to him..

" m sorry geetu..i m really sorry..." his voice was filled with repentance

" u have all the right to be angry with me..i m such a dumb ass..." he mentally kicked himself to hauling such a act...cursing his brain

She sniffed...and nodded...tightening her hold...while he brushed her hair..attempting to calm her

" but..if u knew...y dint u come.to..." his voice faded...

" how could i meet u after knowing the reason why u dint meet me...Mk if it was my love..for u ..to undergo those silly and drastic changes...it was ur love which made u break up with him...jis tarah yeh baat mujhe samjh ayai..tumhe bhi ani chayie ti...i was waiting for that day..." She spoke raising her head...

" Geet i..i..never wanted u to change..u r and will always be perfect for me..mere wajh se tumhe itna sab..' A tear escape his eye..as he stared down at her

" nahi..mk...aisa nahi hai..Mai ne..woh sab...tumhare liye..I ..i just wished to fit in in ur world..i.." she held his cheek..wiping his tear..

" shhhsss' he shook his head...hushing her

He framed her face.." i m sorry geet..its my mistake..i could have explicated but i..was..."

" i was scared...that if i continue to be with u in this relationship..go knws what all u will sacrifice...In this..i couldn't dare to create barrier in the route of ur ways.."

" sab meri galti hai..." She sniffed...

" nahi...geet...its.." She covered his lips with her palm..

" humari galti hai..." she uttered..tightly

MK smiled...nodding...and embraced her..

She reciprocated his hug..

we r soch big duffers...Mk..." she spoke in midst of his collar..

Mk closed his eyes...brushing her hair.." we will be together geet in spite of us being different...coming from different worlds we will always outshine our love will never die..i wont let it.." he vowed to himself

" ahemm...ahem..." Someone interrupted their confession..

Mk frowned...but geetika bit her lip..drawing back..

" wohooo..." Edana nd ruchita clapped...roaring cheers..

Geetika blushed lowering her head...while Mk smiled...

She elbowed him..angrily " how dare u kiss me in front of them..ha...??????"

Mk but his lip to hide his smile.. He leaned close to her.." jaan u definitely enjoyed our kiss..so don't crib.." His words zipped her mouth..she lowered her head blushing furiously!!

" waise bhi i dint know they were here..what r they doing..." he uttered knotting his brows...

It turned out to be ruchita's plan...She lied about geetika leaving the country..Actually It was their common frnd who was leaving for vacations...hence geetika was present there..

******

" this was..such a..."

soorrryyy m so late..sorry sorry.." a women dressed in Indian wear..wearing classes and long coat..uttered to maan..

hell way...geet its been an hours since i m waiting.." maan pouted..

" i m soo sorry sweety i was stuck in traffic sachi jaanu..' she said pinching his cheeks and slipping in besides him..

Rohan smiled...looking both of them..

" sorryyy we both are late..." two other people...One British and the other Indian...joined in..

Rohan's eyes..wide..gaping the British one..it was EDAN COOPER his boss

" rohan??? What u doing here...??? edan said furrowing his brows...all turned their gazes at rohan..who smiled awkwardly..

" u knw him???' maan asked edan..

yeh..he works for me.."

" oh..so u r his..boss" maan said grinning...

Rohan stared maan horrified..and gestured him to be quite..Maan smiled nodding..

" heyy guys this is rohan..the one who helped me kill my time..when u all weren't present.." he said sarcastically

He heard all of their sorry apologizing him..sweetly..

" alright alright...Rohan she is my wife geet...my best frnd Edan and there she is edan's wife ruchita.." Rohan smiled at all of them..except edan..who was staring him intently

" edan...lets go and get something for the ladies..." he dragged edan...towards the counter..

Rohan sighed...heavily

The ladies gaped him curiously .wondering whats the matter with edan and rohan

i should go..." he murmured...gulping...and started to gather his things..

The ladies nodded...began conversing with each other..

He was done..collecting his stuffs..when he hear ruchita say" Mk i need lots of chocolate..okay..dont listen to edna..."

Rohan blinked his eyes..raising his head...

" ruchita..edan...geet...mk..??" he scratched his head...

It then dawned upon him...the characters from his FIRST KISS STORY were live in front of him..

He recalled his words...every time he said..love existed...it certainly did..All his confusions were cleared..now he knew y maan was adamant saying if its true love then its magic wont fade away...

He smiled in awe...now gaping geet...in admiration..

" Now i understood why he said...we should understand each others perspective...then only our love will conquer all..Mk and geetika are together..living with each other happily "

" here u go ladies..." Maan said placing their order...

" we need to hurry...i spoke to ami(amidhami) indu(_indu_) ki birthday party k liye sab aa gaye hai...plus babbie(singh24) is also coming..she get all the kids..."

" thats nice..." maan sighed...and turned his gaze towards rohan who was still..he stood and walked to his side

" rohan are u okay????" maan called him...poked his shoulder

Edan was not present...he was still waiting for their other order..

" thank u ..." Rohan hugged maan..

Maan smiled in surprise...and patted his back..

Rohan parted..." u bought my faith back..i had lost my conviction in love..mine and her differences seemed so huge that i thought it can never been sought .. thanks i owe it to u ...i knw true lovers can never be parted irrespective of their own diffrent worlds..." he gratefully said

Maan smiled.." don't ever lose ur faith rohan.."

Rohan nodded..." btw she is beautiful...and u both look hot together.." rohan commented winking at him..

Maan laughed...and punched his shoulder

" i think i should leave before my boss arrives..again...i need to win my wife.."

Maan smiled...and bid him bye..while rohan and strolled outside...




the end...



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indu(_INDU_)

babbie di(SINGH24)

Ami di(amidherani)



love u all...thanks for reading this story!!

Hope u guys cherished this story like I did...!!


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Posted: 10 years ago

liked d story very much👏

geet is changing herself according to maan society people.
maan doesnot lyked it.
at last they both understand each other😳
lovely
Edited by kamnagupta7 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome
loved it so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb parts
maan breaking up wid geet was emotional ...
bt finally they come togther...
sad dat it ended
vl miss it alot
Edited by _CookieMonster_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey soo finally yahan bhi aa gayi me
Im terribly late i knw 😭 but kya karu i was nt well n busy also
Anyways better late than never
Sad sad dat dis journey has come to an end
Chashmish innocent yet strong geet who stands for her self is sumthing i like very much
N yahan toh she is beyond anyone's imagination in every aspect n ur motive behind dis geet is actually correct dat d exterior look of a person doesnt matter wen heart is pure
Sooo coming back to d updates
Part 6: 😆 told u im really late n im re reading all d again but im loving it reliving all d moments again
Hahahaha lollzzz poor rohan kya manga kya mila hez so curious but must say maan is very smart so tactfully he twisted d geet's part btw im just curious hw maan got to knw dat shopping part lolllz i knw im stupid
Btw another thing dat makes dis story special is hw u so thoughtfully n perfectly include ur frnds in d story
Really innovative to c real life characters in d story
Loved to c hw her frnds tried to help as much as possible to ease her anixety n fear
Bichara rohan 🤣
D most awaited ball really good
Great actually dat u did'nt made her lenses
Awww i c maan totally mesmerised with her
N top of it all der super cute sweet nok jhok
Dats wat makes our maaneet so unique n special
N ya forgot to mention
Love d way hw maan explains abt true relationship d base of a strong relationship n dat shows hw deeply u r involved hw carefully u write each n every sentence
Everything u write has a logic n dat explanation 👏 superb yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely . awesome. .
Rest later 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 7: U hav to c my face while reading dis yaaar itni badi smile ab kyu mat poochna coz even i don't knw dat 😕 im a confused soul so chado
But thank u for making me happy
A Ball seriously cant get more perfect than dis sachi upar se our special maaneet k liye special ball
Loved d start u showed abt rohan's work n easily included more frnds der n nice to c maan saying abt cookie n cupcake cute names n i hav a memory behind those names lolzz secret 😉
Back to d ball u desribed geet attire so beautifully i can almost imagine d full image
Its difficult still geet is trying as much as possible to get familiar n gel up with maan's friend d whole atmosphere she is a darling yaar
N yeah d specs u ve so beautifully n outstandingly explained seriously super im speechless so maturely
I just wonder rohan maan se nahi mila hota toh kya hota
whats the use of making friends if u have to pretend in front of them.
N dis line is just perfect so correct superb yaar
N d dance woww so logically perfectly n superbly uve written
U ve also showed d flaws like nt just like dat she danced perfectly stummbled he helped she flowed it is so surreal i can imagine
Dance showed d pure love passion romance n truth n d needed push for dem
Ahhh d drink uske bina sab adhura everything can't b perfect n dis mistake was also perfect
Warna geet ki wish adhuri reh jati her kiss toh banta hai uska haq hai
Maan is just bowled over 😆
Outstanding part
Love u

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awee...so sweet...
Lovely update...Love the twist & its solution...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome👏👏



maaneet accepted their feeling😃



geet changed for maan completely😲



maan break up with geet 😲



atlast everything is fine😃



its ended😭

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